The Fitzgeralds' Rise to Fame

Your work, a scroll depicting another world, is crafted with the skill of a master artisan, revealing unique artistry; it paints a scene with the grandeur of a giant brush, capturing a myriad of emotions. Using the first person, you explore the inner world of a group of characters, revealing every detail; employing the third person, you drive the main storyline, its threads clear and distinct…

This first-person perspective is great, it's really good. The most urgent thing is to update quickly 😭😭😭😭😭, the story feels perfect, and then I wonder if it could have a single female lead?

A fantastic novel. While there were some minor issues at the beginning, it gradually improves. The multiple perspective shifts make the character development increasingly nuanced, especially Winnie's growth, which is very evident as she matures from an arrogant and aloof girl into a kind and empathetic one.

I initially clicked on the book because of its abstract title, but after following it for a while, I found that it's a book that really suits my taste. The author's writing style is very comfortable, unlike the mindless wish-fulfillment novels on the market. It can be considered a poetic novel with a fresh and natural writing style and three-dimensional characters.

A promising new book. Readers who enjoy the "no job" genre are in for a treat. The narrative is very comfortable, with multiple perspectives and storylines, and it frequently uses the first person, creating a strong sense of immersion. The writing style is also quite delicate. Highly recommended.

The genre is a serious Western fantasy adventure like "Jobless," and I hope the later plot development won't be too similar to it. After all, I'd rather see a different kind of growth. The writing is good, but this kind of slow-burn story is destined to have little popularity (regarding the fact that the novels I like are all very prone to flopping). I hope the author can update more often!

It's a slow burn. I usually read novels from an observer's perspective, and I've already finished the first volume. It's very comfortable to read, and I feel a strong sense of immersion, although I don't know who I identified with. The older sister's situation...

This is a very good book. I like the author's writing style and find it enjoyable. I also really like the system settings, and the author's writing skills are superb. There are no major flaws. It's a fantastic book in the Tomato Book series. However, I have a question for you. May I use the settings from your setting collection to design my OC? If not, please answer me. I will delete the settings. If you agree, I would be extremely grateful.

This review only applies to the first volume I've read so far. The plot is decent, and so far it's quite good. Most importantly, the first-person + third-person perspective writing style is extremely well-written; it's the first time I've read something written like this. It's much more comfortable to read than traditional third-person narration.

This book is quite good, but how should I put it? There's too much first-person narration. Of course, the author acknowledges this, but the way each character meticulously crafts their inner thoughts in the opening lines is somewhat flawed and needs more practice. It's a good read, not a masterpiece, but certainly a fine one. It needs more practice.