Building a Fated Immortal Clan, Starting as a Golden Core Ancestor!

5-Star praise, I really like it. Keywords: decisive killing, online IQ, family 1. Starting from the ancestor of Jindan, we can avoid the frustration of those at lower levels. 2. The family does not feel like a burden or a complete nanny. There are also feedback resources for Pig's Feet. 3. The characters of the family members are also well portrayed. There are various members who are scheming, decisive, lustful, stupid, and willful. They are not the cookie-cutter Madonna, with the main theme image, which is more realistic. 4. The family of mortals cultivating immortals is famous for its high-quality products. I hope that the follow-up will be more successful. Come on.

It's very interesting. Why is it so small? Basically everyone has an above-average IQ, and the protagonist's failure does not affect the viewing experience. Moreover, the protagonist is the ancestor of Jindan at the beginning, and his various working styles are consistent with his status. It is not dramatic at all. It does not have the kind of traditional novels that no matter how advanced the protagonist is, there must be enemies of a higher level. It is more about the intrigues and tricks between the same level, and the cultivation of the family, which is very good.

It's a bit level, I feel like it's okay, keep working hard. Although your book is a late-blooming family story, there is no need to hide it when you are more than 400 years old and you are in the middle stage of the golden elixir. It does not mean that you have been promoted to the late stage or the peak in a short period of time. It just means that you have survived a small stage for 200 years and there is a small chance. It is normal to reach the middle stage of the golden elixir. I feel that you can't be too low-key or too frustrated. It's okay to be appropriate. Well, it's a bit of a deterrent, okay?

Overall opinion: It is a very good fairy tale, the characters' IQs are all online, and the plot is very reasonable. It is very suitable for beginners to read. The shortcomings are also very obvious. The author's plot construction ability is obviously insufficient, the quality and quantity of the plot are seriously lacking, the plot advancement is extremely slow, and there are a lot of useless plots stacked up. Not recommended for old bookworms, unless you have a strong resistance to toxicity. This book is essentially a book that abuses the protagonist. 100 Yuan is only worth 90 yuan to the protagonist and 200 yuan to the enemy. But if you can ignore the plot of abusing the main character, you also don't care about the two problems of extremely slow plot advancement. This book is a good choice for you. Overall, this book is relatively ambivalent. Because the feeling of pleasure is not direct enough, it is not attractive enough to novices. And the obvious poisonous points are too serious, and the plot advancement is like shit. It can be said to be ridiculously watery, and it is extremely difficult for old bookworms to accept. Suitable for people: People who have a certain amount of time to sit down and watch, but don't watch it seriously, that is, they just calm down and watch without thinking. It's a good book on Tomato, and it's a good choice for picking gold out of rocks.

At first glance, it seemed that it had good grades and had the qualifications to be popular. It was sniped by the studio. After a while, the manuscript was revised and it was just like the technique of Ren Xue Mantou. Many authors and expert editors have talked about many cases on Douyin. Brother, go and write on Dianzi. The level is considered to be first-class among similar books. You can make a living at Dianzi.

The logic seems to be online when I see it. Goldfinger is not very defiant and has no obvious poisonous points. The protagonist is decisive in killing, which is not the basic requirement. However, the supporting characters are also very intelligent and I am surprised. The only shortcomings are that there are too few and no one is watching.

Okay, okay, no wonder the reviews are not bad. Indeed, the writing is good, the group portraits, the concubines and the Taoist couple do not occupy much of the plot, and the supporting characters are also flesh and blood, the IQ is not low, there are many foreshadowings, the emotional scenes are very well written, as for the training system, please change it based on the fantasy cultivation of immortals! I just don't know what the rest of the writing is like, it's still too little, the author should add more soon!

The logic of the story is good, there are no obvious loopholes, the writing is also very good, the narrative is smooth and sophisticated, and most of the characters in the book have online IQs. It is a rare good book in the tomato fantasy genre.

I think it's better. I don't know why. Books like this have very low ratings. I don't understand. If written well, this book still has potential at the beginning, but sometimes the writing is too frustrating. If there is a threat, kill it in advance. Every time I read other books, it is always the villain who strikes first, and then the decent ones have no choice but to kill the villain, and then so many people die. I really can't understand it.

Chapter 213 has been updated so far. It's very interesting. It's a masterpiece of the mortal genre and the family genre. Just a little less updated. This book has been put into the high-quality mortal stream group on the bookshelf. The monks at the bottom are protected by the monks at the top and serve the top. Humans and demons are not life-or-death battles. Everyone is here to share resources with each other. To ascend to immortality. The higher-ups generally do not get involved in the fight between the lower-level and demons. High-level people will fight with monsters of the same level for high-level resources. If the upper echelons massacre the lower echelons of other races, others will do the same. Then everyone will perish together. What kind of immortality are you still cultivating? Everyone has limited resources. Circular competition. From time to time, gods ascend. This is a virtuous cycle.