A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Built the Su Immortal Clan Through Alchemy

The pacing is relatively slow, but the writing is quite detailed. The power levels don't collapse, and while the system is key, the protagonist's efforts are ultimately crucial. I personally enjoy the protagonist's storyline, although some parts about his family are rather boring. I hope the author continues updating!

A rare gem of a book, though the number of chapters is a bit short. Judging by the protagonist's progress, it might take at least a thousand more chapters to finish 🤔. For me, there were quite a few enjoyable moments, and the writing wasn't boring at all. Keep up the good work, author! I believe in you! 😘

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I think this is a very good book; the reviews shouldn't be this low. This story is a down-to-earth cultivation novel. Although it has a cheat system, it's not as overpowered as some wish-fulfillment novels, but it's still very good and worth reading. Don't miss it just because of the low rating.

... I don't know how to put it, it's hard to evaluate. The family members are constantly being abused, and there are few satisfying moments. However, the protagonist remains calm, meticulous, and strategic (I keep mentioning these words without knowing why, it's like an over-packaged product). It feels like I'm just writing whatever comes to mind—a quick stop here and a quick stop there.

This is a very good book. It portrays a ruthless and underhanded approach to development, where the protagonist doesn't care about the fate of their family as long as their own interests aren't at stake. They might give you handouts, but don't ask for too much. It feels like the family is completely useless except for being a scapegoat.

This is a good book, especially the protagonist's father, whose decisive and ruthless actions are very well done.

The editor forced a conflict. At first, it seemed like the protagonist's sister was being sent to a sect to protect the family. But then, just as a conflict was about to erupt, it suddenly appeared that the protagonist's family was on the territory of another equally powerful sect. Is this really seeking sect protection?

This book is definitely worth reading; it's a great book that you can stay up all night reading! 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Seeing over 150 chapters, I'll give it 4 stars. It's clearly AI-written, and AI writing is indeed good, but it lacks a bit of spirit. The protagonist's personality is flat, and everyone's daily interactions, like alchemy and communication, are like those of elderly people. There's no humor or wit. The whole reading experience is very monotonous, and the exciting moments aren't concentrated enough.