Crow Immortal

This book is okay. It has the same feeling as when I first started reading fantasy novels more than ten years ago. But now I can't stand the novels I read before at all. The plot of this book is well connected and the writing is smooth. It is neither clichéd nor depressing or flamboyant. Although the level of improvement is slow, it is more comfortable to read than those immortality novels. The author's writing is really good, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I'm still at the fourth or fifth level of Qi training. I feel so insecure, and I'm afraid that the protagonist will die all of a sudden.

It is indeed a masterpiece that I can read to the end in one breath. I can't find any faults even if I want to pick. The statues of the cultivators are of flesh and blood. Wanchungu is the most affectionate cultivator sect I have ever seen. The protagonist does not lick it. The beauties are just right. They can bring help to the protagonist instead of dragging them down. It uses a very realistic visual description of a cultivator. In the fairy world, especially the protagonist and the sect grow up together. Wanchun Valley develops from a sect that is uncontested and stubborn and fights against foreign aggression with the protagonist. The protagonist also has three views, fights evil (demon) cultivators, and helps the lower-level mortals to act chivalrously and righteously. Ye Guxing, Master Qi, Elder Lu, Miss Yan, Bai Qi, Bai Die, every character The colors are vividly written, as well as the descriptions of various spiritual beasts. The writing style is smooth and vivid, which is really rare. I hope it can be maintained forever. When this book is finished, I look forward to continuing to publish some similar realistic themes. Don't compare it with mortals. I don't want to get the author into trouble by saying something transcendent or divine. Anyway, this book is I like reading this book very much. It is non-toxic and the plot is reasonable. It adds a bright color to my life. During the period of reading, it puts me in a good mood every day and relieves stress. This book is friendly and has many kind-hearted plots. It does not have too much cunning, cruelty and viciousness in the fairy world. It is very rare. I will read the follow-up plot after a while.

It is rare to find works on immortality that are not frivolous or cunning. The positive characters are basically pure and kind, which shows that the author himself is also generous and fair-minded. The writing is a bit dry, but there are many excellent character descriptions in the article. Looking forward to the follow-up. Taking back the author's comment that he is kind-hearted, through the protagonist's current performance, we can feel that the personality that the author desires in his heart is arrogant and domineering. I don't know if I have misunderstood some of the writing techniques I heard, but the author is always obsessed with arranging some very unpleasant traits for the protagonist. For example, he is always extremely persistent in portraying the protagonist's pettiness and pettishness. I guess he may have one-sidedly interpreted the so-called "character must have flaws" as "the character needs to be somewhat annoying". In the early stage, the protagonist was still a child, and it was acceptable to have some paranoia in his character. Now he is in his twenties and thirties, and he is still a spiritual monk, and he still has unclear self-understanding. This is a big creative mistake. Writing about the battle of wits, or even the psychological game between characters, is always so shallow that it makes people worry. However, this is a matter of the author's experience and it is difficult to be critical. Excluding the protagonist, this book is readable. However, if there are too many protagonists, it will be very disappointing. After chasing it for more than a year, I still gave up because I lost interest.

The rhythm, plot, and characters are all very well grasped. Come on, you must carefully consider the direction before you start writing. You would rather be slow, but you must not collapse. The entire system and character relationships must not be unreasonable, otherwise it will make readers uncomfortable.

Recommended, Xiancao, which is rare in the world of mortals cultivating immortals, is not too violent. The characters are drawn step by step and have flesh and blood. The Wanchun Valley that the protagonist joins can be said to be a breath of fresh air in the sect that I have seen recently. He is farming and refining medicine honestly, and the senior leaders of the sect are not fools. Master Lu is a great master, which makes me very happy~ I hope to give Wanchun Valley a good ending. Although there is a high probability that it will not be saved, I hope that people can stay. The protagonist's performance is okay, acceptable and recommended [laughs]

The author is very serious, rarely makes mistakes in details, and can basically fill in all the holes he dug. The sect is united within the sect, which is both loyal to the sect and humane [Like]

Chapter 98 The author's progress is really visible to the naked eye. It's beautiful and smooth. In just a few sentences, the characters are made flesh and blood. Chapter 417: As soon as the male protagonist has some ability, he hangs out with women every day. He can't be alone. Is this a common problem in male videos? It doesn't look good, so abandon it.

Strong, super good-looking, really, no matter from the plot, character plot, or even the writing style of Tomato Writer, I personally think it is very, very, very good from the perspective of cultivating immortality. The rhythm is very suitable and soothing, and it is not as eager as this one. It is a refreshing story, but a very reasonable and progressive rhythm that fits the process of cultivating immortality, and the protagonist's control over his own golden finger is also very logical. From the plot point of view, everyone in the sect is a rare person in the world of cultivating immortals who has a true temperament and is not a greedy person. I personally like it very much, but it only scored less than nine points. I really feel that there are no good works. It is really a pity.

I've been a bookworm for 20 years, and I haven't seen such a pure cultivation novel for a long time. Although it's a bit slow, the pace is pretty good. I don't know why it's not popular, but I feel like if I slowly increase the number of words I write, I'll be able to get thousands of bookings even if I lose my QD.

Good-looking, very good-looking There are no surprises so far, the plot is smooth, and every character who appears is very realistic. I feel that the author is not a newbie, but a veteran, with good writing style, good story structure and plot logic. Recommend~