Diary of a Thief's Path to Godhood

It's a very good book. It's a Western fantasy with a bit of Cthulhu. The character description is very human-like, but it fits my stereotype of Western fantasy characters very well. The plot is also very well written, with a clear main line, and the progression is not too stiff. However, when the protagonist becomes Long Aotian, I feel like I'm always eating soft food (sad)

I have just finished reading the first volume. Generally speaking, this book is highly recommended. It has a very clear main line, the character creation is relatively good, the logic, the world view, etc. Are all self-consistent, but the expression of some details is a bit rough, the emotional line is relatively flat, the characters are a bit stereotyped, and there are many minor flaws. Although there are some obvious areas that need improvement, overall the flaws are not concealed. The guarantee is also above the average level of a good work. It is a novel with obvious advantages and disadvantages. I hope the author can deal with the small points of the novel well and I will continue to follow up with more chapters [Chigua]

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It's a very good Western fantasy novel, and it's worth the time I spent searching for it on Tomato. When I was reading the first volume, I was still sighing because the author's xx process was not detailed enough. By the second and third volumes, I suspected that Shen He was fainted by the author's elbow. The later chapters are getting more and more exciting as they are written, and there are no big problems until the third volume. I would like to read it as soon as possible. I feel that it is easy to delete later chapters.

It's quite good-looking and more to my liking, but I always feel that the author is suspected of missing a girl. Luo Li ran away at the beginning, and I don't know whether to accept Chloe later. I'll give it a five-star rating first and wait and see. I don't ask for a large number of scenes. I'll make dumplings at the end and accept them all. Let's see what the author arranges. The third volume is completely unclear... The plot is scattered and messy, and a bunch of meaningless supporting characters are added. Dracula is written every day as if he has replaced the male protagonist. Lu also inexplicably escapes control. I am lucky that I didn't get poisoned. I wanted to give it two stars, but after thinking about it I decided not to. The girls are still very well-behaved. For the sake of the girls, I'll give it four stars.

I'll give it five stars first. I think it's a Western fantasy novel with an outline and a clear main line, which I like very much. However, the writing style of the book is a bit vigorous. Many plot descriptions feel a bit r16 to me (a bit like watching Han Qing), and the character creation is more group-like. However, in order to advance the plot smoothly, many characters feel a bit deliberately designed, such as the part where the count recognizes his relatives. It is obvious that the author has accelerated the pace of the main plot, but the subsequent description of the count's family is also complete. I would like to give my personal humble opinion to the author. The dark and Western fantasy world view of this book is indeed not very good at retaining readers who are mainly middle school students. The audience here at Red Persimmon is still a bit younger. The author can try to make the narrative style more attractive to readers, and the plot design can have a more "fairy tale" feel (black fairy tales are also fairy tales) The current performance of the book does not seem to be very good, but there is also the reason why Western Fantasy itself is not popular on Tomato, but the author's first book is really to my liking and it is very interesting. I will continue to follow it. Good luck, author💕 I accidentally talked too much. I have no intention of teaching the author how to do things. The author just writes at his own pace. I think what the author writes is very interesting.

I have just finished reading the first volume. It is quite exciting. It has more adult-like fighting and strategizing. It is quite similar to the exciting operation of the CK series of games. It is unbelievable that the rating is low. Maybe Tomato readers can only accept the protagonist Shuang Jie? Come on, author 👍 I really like this kind of plot trend that favors Han Qing. Although many tomato novels have so-called ooxx plots on the surface, they can actually only count all ages. The author has handled the explosive points very well in the first volume. The second volume is not enough so far [laughing] I hope it can be more comprehensive. In addition, the disadvantage of a large worldview is that the first volume has so much foreshadowing from the first few chapters, and the second chapter so far is mainly about love and love, with no intention of recycling it? For example, in the so-called abnormal containment, no one has been found since the initial appearance?

I read it for two days, but it's not enough. 🥰 Brothers, this book is considered the best on Tomato. 🥰 There aren't many poisonous points, it's not too deep, and it's not disgusting. The author also has reflections and plans on his own writing, which is pretty good. I hope he can stop talking about it in the future, and put it less in daily life, and just put it in the relaxation part after the climax. The main plot progress is very stable, and the climax progress is okay, but it does not reach the point of affecting the readers. Anyway, come on, we are looking forward to the next content

There are not many yandere writings, and some of the plots are actually problematic. It gave me a feeling that the power of the powerful is very large but very small. The details are not well written. For example, when the eldest princess failed to counterattack, it was not clear at all. It just disappeared in a few pages, and there was no fight. Also, the people in it were a bit mentally retarded, although I understand the game setting. But overall, I think this is a book worth reading in my six years on Tomato, because I gave up on many books after about a hundred chapters, but I can only say that the plot of this one has something, and it is not the same. Although some details are not good, but the plot and so on, I think this book is very well written, because I haven't found the book I want to read for a long time. I can't read this one, and I think this is it. My highest evaluation is also my first evaluation. Of course, I have seen other such books recently, but they are too slow to update, and this one has a lot of content. I am willing to support him. Well, the shortcomings are more my thoughts. A book that I can't guess is interesting. If the plot is already known, it will be meaningless. The reader must have feelings. I think of what my high school Chinese teacher told us. I was also deeply touched at the time. This book can be

It is a very good book. I am very fascinated. I read the thirty chapters of the fourth volume from scratch in one breath, which is equivalent to more than five hundred chapters, so I plan to write a book review. Advantages: 1. The setting is very good, it is not a brainless system. The only advantage of the male protagonist is game knowledge. The male protagonist is also a resourceful person that I like. 2. The plot is also very interesting and unexpected, and I feel that the author's writing skills are improving. From the unilateral contribution of the male protagonist in the first and second volumes to the pull between the male protagonist and Lilith in the third chapter, the character's personality and charm are reflected. 3. The world view is also very comprehensive. Magic, alchemy, vampires, and devils make me feel that the author is very careful. There is also a novel point. The upgrades are in sequence, and each level has different abilities, which is very interesting. There are also some areas where my personal experience is not good: 1. First of all, I feel that there are too many female characters. If there are too many characters, it will easily lead to less portrayal of each character. For example, Anna in the first volume: When I finished reading the first volume, I felt that Anna, the heroine of the first volume, seemed to have too little plot. And I speculate that Anna lacks love but is strong, but her strength does not seem to be reflected, but she is not confident. But if she was really weak, how could she still think of fighting for the throne. 2. There are also some characterization issues. In the second volume, the heroine Selena is supposed to be gentle on the outside but firm on the inside, but after turning into Puji, she becomes very timid. I don't know if the author wanted to write about contrast, but it feels very strange. I think the contrast should be the true side of the heart that is accidentally shown, or the side that is only shown to one person, but the result gave me the feeling that it directly turned into a pet. 3. There are ambiguous scenes in this book, but when the author wrote it, it felt like a female pornographic film, which was very gross. As a man, I felt a little uncomfortable watching it. 4. There are a lot of detailed descriptions. I personally feel that some places don't need to be written in such detail. I read it with the mentality of reading online entertainment, so I often pile up long paragraphs and I don't want to read it. Generally speaking, it is well written. It seems that there are more bad things. In fact, it is because it is more specific. If the author sees it, I hope it can be used as a reference. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better.