Immortal Fate of the Jade Disc

I have read Chapter 77 so far. The setting is reasonable, not brainless, and not poisonous. You can eat it with confidence. The protagonist Gou Dao is no worse than Han Li, and the supporting characters are not brainless and have real emotions, and they are well described. The part in Chapter 85 was stupid. The villain was stupid and forced the protagonist to show off. The old gang leader who was above the seventh level of qi training must have been stupid and didn't decisively suppress it. It's okay to let the mortal grandson take action and lose face once, but let the protagonist take action the second time. First of all, everyone only knows that the protagonist is a mortal pharmacist with high martial arts skills. Since he dares to lose face a second time [vomit]

A very good mortal flow, no slap-in-the-face plot. The protagonist has a good personality. He is a well-behaved protagonist, decisive in killing, strategizing, and cautious. Of course, there are also shortcomings. There is no need for the author to arrange useless spiritual roots for the protagonist every time. Wouldn't it be better to get two spiritual roots and three spiritual roots? Do you have to be a waste stream to cultivate immortality? There is no need to go too hard to suppress the protagonist. Overall the writing is very good, the writing style is okay, neither good nor bad. The emotional drama is so-so. I hope the protagonist has a female protagonist, or no female protagonist, and the goal is to live forever. It's okay to have multiple beauties, but don't make it unclear.

I have read Chapter 65 so far. The plot is reasonable, the protagonist's character is good, and there are no brainless routines, which is rare. Although some plots still feel a little coincidental, that is, some plots are foreshadowed but still a little rushed, but the problem is not big. For example, the protagonist has reached the first level of Qi training and lacks skills, so the force of the Three Immortals Sect will be brought out immediately. , And a fairy master who is just getting started in Qi training appeared smoothly. The author has explained the reason in the article, so it does not seem poisonous, but it is still a bit stiff. Overall, it feels like a good read. The most important thing is that there are no clichés and plots that are annoying to read, and it does not overly suppress the protagonist or Long Aotian. It is a rare good book on Tomato. It's a lot worse at the back

It's very good to watch. Although the plot is cliche, I just brushed it off when I thought it was going to be a bloody plot. This one is very good. It doesn't drag on, and the level is steadily improved. It's very reasonable. I haven't seen a heroine yet. I personally like it without a heroine. I hope it continues like this. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

The previous writing was very good. I read the book review and almost gave up, but I still endured it. After looking at it, I found that there were no big poisonous spots, but many small poisonous spots. It's just that they are too deliberate in creating opportunities for the protagonist, and there are always plots where the character is stuck and rescued. Also, the part about the old gang leader was really vicious. Both of them were provocative. The old gang leader didn't kill those two people, and the reason he gave was very far-fetched. As for the Eight Spiritual Roots, I think it's okay. Others think that the male protagonist has some special talent that has not been discovered. I still agree with this treatment. In the end, there were no problems except for some plots that were too classic. There are a lot of minor flaws, but it looks good and worth recommending [I understand] The reason given for possessing the Requiem Pill is too far-fetched and I cannot accept it. Just take it and leave, but I can accept it [awkward laugh]

It is a very good traditional fairy tale. The author has strong foundation and solid writing style. Although the pace is slow, it does not deliberately feed poison. It is smooth, natural and logical. It is a breath of fresh air in today's smoky tomato.

So far, it looks good. The writing is very good and not verbose. I suggest you add some knowledge about herbal medicine and alchemy, which are included in many novels. This way the content will be much fuller and more readable than an empty book with no idea of ​​what to put in the grass and when to heat it. I hope to see the author become a master writer in the future More and more inner words and asides

I've read Chapter 237 so far. It's a slow-burning novel about ordinary people using waste materials to cultivate immortality. There's a golden finger on a jade plate. The writing is pretty good. The protagonist is decisive in killing, very resolute in his actions, a little partial, not too slapsy in the face, passers-by laugh at the plot, he is cautious and subtle, bold and careful. Of course, there are some details that are not handled well, and there are a few minor flaws in some places, but it doesn't matter. For those few plots, in fact, according to the golden finger function, there is quite a lot of room for manipulation. However, because it is a mortal who slowly cultivates immortality, some operations are not written, so the overall situation is a little suppressed for the protagonist and the realm of combat power. Otherwise, it will just become a cool novel, and it doesn't matter. Then I am not sure if there will be a female protagonist. Judging from the current performance, there is no female protagonist and no ambiguous emotional plot. I hope it will keep like this. Don't write about beauties, ambiguous emotional lines, or anything like that. This style is pretty good now

It is a very interesting mortal novel. You can see that there are shadows of mortals cultivating immortals in the front. In the middle period, it begins to have its own characteristics. The style is relaxed and the sect friends are full of human touch and friendship. It is not the kind of dark novel that hates heaven and earth. Overall, it is relaxing and enjoyable to read! Good novels can bring good emotional value👍

This book is a slow-burning book, with an unhurried and orderly pace, which makes people feel immersed in the situation. Learning Chinese characters, recognizing medicine and making medicines feels very real. It is very similar to reality, and we have learned a lot! Looking forward to more excitement in the future!