From Fake Fortune-Teller to Hogwarts Student

Overall good, the pace is very comfortable. The protagonist is an enhanced version of Tom, white and black, standard Slytherin, very selfish, but the key is that he understands love and has a touch of humanity. At present, he is more like King Ge than Voldemort, very enterprising, and he really has some identification with greater interests. Judging from the superficial relationship with Hermione, he is very similar to Snape and Lily, Gryffindor and Slytherin. They are both very talented in potions. They have known each other since childhood. Harry Potter and Ron Weasley can also be regarded as super simplified versions of the Marauders. More importantly, he and Hermione have a very good relationship, which can be regarded as the he version of Snape and Lily. Isn't it inappropriate to let Snape take over? They all ended up becoming the emotional demon guardian.

The emotional line is very natural. The protagonist is an almost perfect Slytherin, shrewd, knows how to develop his own power, knows how to use public opinion, retaliates when he gets revenge, is elegant, and sometimes even teasing. If he knew how to love, I think Dumbledore would train such a person as his successor [laughs]

Overall, many of the plots are very familiar, and basically the same plot can be found in many previous HP fans. However, the writing is really good, the characters, personalities, language, and details, although many of the plots are very similar to those in other books, such as the one in Slytherin, and I have read it in the Dark Lord. Let's see if I can write my own stuff in the future. After all, there are still very few books. From visual inspection, it was rated at 8 points before I released it. HP fandoms are generally not popular now, no one is watching, and there is no traffic. It is not impossible that it will be stillborn, so be careful.

Overall it's good, the plot is smooth. The protagonist is a mixed race, entered Slytherin, has a sinister personality, let's take a look at Tom as a replacement. It's quite humane, much better than those long AI articles nowadays.

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Send a rating to the sad teacher [Sending Hearts] This is a very good quality HP fanfic! He is neither Voldemort nor a nanny. The descendant of Gryffindor hero grew up in a Muggle orphanage and entered Slytherin. How special. This makes him very appropriate and lovable no matter who he appears in front of. This is rare! Everything is for the greater good, and the center of the greater good is himself. He is smart (or cunning, hh), smooth, good at disguise, and must avenge himself. This is all in line with my preferences. The plot arrangement is also very smooth, and it is very comfortable to watch. Last but not least, who wouldn't want to rush in and see Snape acting as a love security guard? This might give him some comfort.

It's super good-looking. The emotional scene written by Si Jiao in Chapter 72 is very well written. It's really good. It's heart-wrenching. It can be said to be comparable to the original work. It contains both regret and desire, the divine part, and the human part. At 4 o'clock in the morning, I really cried to death when I saw this paragraph. The other 89 pictures are also very sweet, but the feeling is actually not as strong as the 72 pictures. It even caused me to have a dream. So much so that later on, the Christmas gift that the protagonist gave to Sijiao was Potter shampoo. I felt that he was a bit too much, and Sijiao was a bit too pitiful. Young people are controlled for life because of unobtainable things. My Chinese is not very good. I want to write my true feelings, but I find that there are no suitable words to describe my mood. Any words that describe it seem pale and weak [I am about to cry]

A very good Snake Academy book, without the old Mary Sue settings of shadow prefects, chiefs, etc. That made me goosebumps all over my body [Like]

The plot is smooth and the writing style is also very good. There are no boring jokes or flaws. The heroine is Hermione, the interaction is bland and enjoyable, and the plot with Snape is quite interesting. It is considered to be the top group among Harry Potter fans. If you like this kind of thing, you can give it a try. [Sinister smile]

It is a very good fanfic. The general plot and characters are the same as the original work. The writing is good, there are pictures, and the plot is coherent and not laggy. If the author expands the world view and writes slowly, the score will be at least 9.0 Or above. Now it seems that there is no poison or brainlessness. Personal opinion: It's similar to the book Swinging the Sword in a certain cat. The protagonist grows up step by step, the system is also the icing on the cake, and the surrounding characters are okay (I think some small plots can be added to make the characters fuller). If the ending is happy, I think it is better than Swinging the Sword. The author should go through the plot slowly. There is no need to rush. After all, I just want to read the fanfic just to see some new plots that are difficult to calm down. (If you haven't read the original work, just think I didn't say it.) Most fans who read the fanfic can be said to be very familiar with the original plot, so I think it is not good to write too much about the original plot. You can skip it appropriately. Furthermore, you can write more about your daily life with the heroine (I want to read it [laughs evilly], it's so sweet) And if it ends, can the author consider writing a small side story for the next generation? The above are all personal views and opinions. Please bear with me if there are any differences and disagreements. Personal suggestions are for reference only. The author can write according to his own ideas and has no intention of imposing them. Finally, I want to say a big thank you to the author, come on, the writing is very good [like]