From Fake Fortune-Teller to Hogwarts Student

Overall, it's good, with a smooth pace. The protagonist is like an enhanced version of Tom Cruise—a seemingly innocent but actually cunning character, a typical Slytherin, very self-serving, but crucially, he understands love and has a touch of humanity. Currently, he's more like the King of the Underworld than the Fallen Mordor; he's very ambitious and genuinely believes in greater interests.

The romance feels very natural. The protagonist is a near-perfect Slytherin: shrewd, knows how to develop his own power, knows how to manipulate public opinion, is vengeful, elegant, and sometimes even a little sly. Given that he understands love, I think Dumbledore would groom someone like him as his successor. 😄

Overall, many plot points feel familiar, with similar scenes found in numerous previous Harry Potter fanfics. However, the writing is indeed quite good; the characters, personalities, dialogue, and details are all well-developed. While many plot elements are very similar to other books, such as the Slytherin Rivendare storyline (which I've seen in the Dark Lord book), it remains to be seen if the…

Overall, it's good, and the plot flows smoothly. The protagonist is of mixed race, joins Slytherin, and has a cunning personality; he's basically a replacement for Tom. It feels more human, much better than those long AI-generated stories these days.

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A rating for the grieving teacher 💕 This is a very high-quality HP fanfic! It doesn't ship Voldemort or the babysitter; the descendant of Gryffindor heroes grew up in a Muggle orphanage and entered Slytherin—how unique! This makes him fitting and likable no matter who he appears in front of, which is rare! Everything is for the greater good, and at the center of that greater good is himself.

It's incredibly good! Chapter 72, especially the emotional scenes involving Steve, is exceptionally well-written, truly heart-wrenching, and arguably on par with the original novel. It portrays both regret and longing, exploring both the divine and the human aspects of the story. I cried buckets reading this part at 4 AM.

A great Slytherin book, without any of those cringe-worthy old-fashioned Mary Sue tropes like Shadow Prefects or First Class Prefects that gave me goosebumps. 👍

The plot flows smoothly, the writing is excellent, and there are no boring or clichéd plot points. The female lead is Hermione, and their interactions are gentle yet satisfying. Her storyline with Snape is quite interesting. It's among the top-tier Harry Potter fanfictions; those who like this genre should definitely give it a try. 😏

This book is a top-tier work among Tomato's Harry Potter fanfiction, with skillful writing. The plot is highly plausible, with no logical flaws. Let me give you two specific examples that Harry Potter fans should be able to see. For instance, many fanfictions like to focus on Snape's feelings for Lily, but this book handles Snape's reactions very well, neither over-the-top nor boring.