Hogwarts: My Star Magic Is a Little Too Powerful

It looks good. The overall writing style, plot and framework are different from other HP fan fiction. When reading the article, you have a natural experience. The writing style is very simple, like Lao She [laughing evilly] It is rare for the protagonist to be a non-traveler. In my opinion, this kind of article or downplaying the "time travel" is what I like. Regarding the stars, this is something I really like. I was surprised and liked it (because I didn't read the introduction carefully), especially the setting of the Seven Stars of Beidou (I just like the new setting). For Nicoléme, this old man is very magical and his description is also special. He is not like an old man in his twilight years, but more like a "naughty boy" who still has expectations for the world. Overall, this article is really to my liking. It has a new setting, a non-traveler, about celestial bodies, and he is a Black, Jon Black.

This book is well written. I really like this kind of daily writing. Different from other fan fiction, I didn't force myself to join the team of three little ones, nor did I become Harry Potter's nanny. The protagonist is a talented little wizard studying at Hogwarts. As time goes by, the protagonist gradually develops his own golden finger (star magic). As for the protagonist's teacher, Nicoléme, I personally think it's interesting to write him as a somewhat shady old man, but I always feel that this old man will probably be killed when a certain plot requires it. In Astraea's story line, the author prefers to write her as a beauty or a girl with a pitiful fate. The two roommates, Suer and Yalin, have distinct personalities. They should be two characters designed by the author to make up for the minor flaws of the protagonist. Seeing that Cedric has been appearing frequently, I hope the author can give this character a good ending later. And Sirius, since they are both cousins, it shouldn't be too much to let the cousin live well. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing style is very comfortable and mature, like the reincarnation of Lao Deng from other platforms, and he is finally no longer a nanny. However, although I don't really like to see the protagonist suffer, the reaction of the necklace to the blood curse is a bit too coincidental. Two unrelated things come together to play a role in just a few chapters, making the previous things provided by her sister and the information collected by the protagonist seem useless. However, I am following the update and may write about it later. I will comment after I can explain it.

After reading a few chapters, I was immediately attracted. It was neither a support nor a human machine. I was simply attracted by the elegant, subtle, and "dragonfly touching water"-like writing. I really liked the feeling of the words gently brushing my heart without bringing any pressure. It was like a bedtime story by the bedside when I was a child. It was warm and soothing. The narrative rhythm and image portrayal are all in line with my taste. I will not talk about being top-notch or perfect, but I just like it subjectively. I hope I can stick to it. Ps: I haven't written a few book reviews, so I may not express my feelings in some words, but I really recommend reading it.

I have been reading it for a long time and I feel very good. The pace of this book is not fast and there are many daily descriptions. I personally prefer this type of book. Three updates a day is not bad. I support the author and hope to keep writing.

This is a book worth reading. ① The most intuitive creative manifestation (that is, the second creation manifestation) is that its main line is actually centered on the protagonist. The main line of the original work serves more as a hidden line of the timeline; ② In the world view, rune magic and ancient magic are extended to complement the setting and the new concepts of the ancestors, and it can be read as a different book; ③ The shaping of the character image It is also very accurate, or not very complicated to describe a person's psychology, but you can sense the changes and thoughts in his heart from his behavior; ④ Finally, let's talk about the plot. This point is related to the previous point, because the plot is plainly contradictory and foreshadowing. The conflict between contradictions and foreshadowing basically comes from the story line and the emotional line, so it is related to the character image. As you watch it, you will naturally notice the inevitable character and character selection in the previous chapters. Maybe this book is not too gorgeous, but in terms of appeal, I think it is very strong.

Surprisingly, it turned out to be very good. I finished reading it without realizing it. It's great. I really like that the author didn't deliberately conflict or repeatedly describe some of the supporting characters. But I don't know if the heroine is the girl with a blood curse. Apart from her, everything else is good. The key point is that it doesn't describe a lot of things that are already in the original work, such as the plot, and every incident and Everyone has read the protagonist's vision again. For example, describe what is happening now, and then compare it with what happened in the original work. Then describe what to do in another article, and then what to do in the second chapter. All of these are very good, except for some more detailed places that are handled a bit unexpectedly, such as class. The content, the parts that should be vague, are described in detail by the author, but I feel that the content is very advanced, and it is also unreasonable that every professor actually knows the protagonist's situation. Normally, the old guy should only be related to Deng, and Snape is really not qualified. Regardless of his overall appearance, he is actually a dark wizard. It was only because of Lily and Potter that he sided with Deng. It seemed that it was because he heard the prophecy and told Tom about it. Potter was born at that time. He always felt guilty and felt that he had killed Lily, so he wanted to protect Potter. Lily was the only thing left, even if he was the child of his enemy, even if he was treated like a dog by Dumbledore.

(Representing only personal views) Compared with other HP novels, I think this novel truly creates a flesh-and-blood protagonist. It is not the story of one person, but the story of a group of people. Maybe the official protagonist of this book is Jon Black, but I think everyone in this book is the protagonist. It tells us about the growth of a group of young people with a relaxed writing style in the early stage and a plain and concise writing style in the later stage. The growth of Jon, Astoria, Sur, and Yalin can definitely touch us. The core connotation of the entire book is inheritance. Young people learn from the elders and then take over the burden of this generation from their hands. Although there are some unreasonable far-fetched parts of the plot settings in this book, this does not prevent it from showing us a grand world view created by the author. I sincerely believe that your book is one of the few clear streams among tomatoes. It is a rare masterpiece that is worthy of allowing readers to calm down and read it word for word, and have endless aftertaste after reading it.

A very nice HP fanfic. The protagonist has his own story line and a new world view that does not revolve around the trio. The subject matter is novel, and it took two or three days to tie it up [please update][please update][adoration] I made a mistake and it was two or three days [laughing and crying]

The writing is mature and smooth, and the plot is coherent. The early part of the book is in a plain and delicate style. Later, the protagonist comes into contact with another kind of magic. The protagonist's growth is mainly reflected in alchemy. The growth in star magic is not obvious yet. It is a very comfortable genius character, but it may be a bit too perfect. Although there are some setbacks in growth, everything in Hogwarts There are basically no shortcomings in the courses, and the frustrations are almost infinitely reduced. This makes me clearly feel that the protagonist and others (except for a few teachers who have lived for hundreds of years and Hogwarts) are not on the same level at all. It may give people a sense of unreality. There is not much contact with the trio, so the plot rarely mentions the original plot and does not follow the main plot. It seems that there is no CP. According to the development of the plot, the protagonist's lifespan will be extremely long after having a star seed. If there is CP, the heroine will most likely have a long lifespan. Another possibility is that the author can play with the lifespan theory regardless of whether there is CP or not? [Hold face][Hold face] (Personally, I would rather have no cp [eat melon]) Overall, in my opinion, this is an excellent HP fanfic, which vividly unfolds the huge and mysterious magical world. Five-star support, the author is greatly encouraged [Send heart][Send heart]