The Witch and Her Contracted One

The writing style is not bad, and the atmosphere of life is very strong. The author has really gone to college. [You Xipin] [You Xipin] [You Xipin] The descriptions in some places are Xiao Chunan's fantasy at first glance.

The writing is not bad, but what do you mean by the two male and female protagonists in the introduction? Two pairs of protagonists? I just realized that the book was published on April 1st. [Shocked] Almost 10,000 words a day.

Very delicate writing and well-developed characters. The heroine is so charming, Qingmei is in love with her. After seeing her leave from Cleveland City, the heroine is very possessive and often jealous of the hero, but she is able to save Anti when she is about to die, which directly establishes her image. In addition, the male and female protagonists are very sweet, keep it up.

It has extremely delicate descriptions - whether it is the details of life, the demeanor of the characters, or the depiction of actions and scenes, they are all extremely real and full, with a strong sense of life, just like watching a real, quiet and long life documentary. However, precisely because the details are too rich, the plot of the story advances relatively slowly and lacks some compact dramatic tension. Overall, it's pretty good. It's written a bit like a model composition, with too many descriptions and a slow progression of the plot (maybe I came too early). Still very good! Come on, author!

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking By the way, I planned to write this book as a top, middle and bottom story. Top: Nolan and Vina's road adventure story line, and another pair of male and female protagonists' palace story line (it is considered a prequel story, and will start after the mid-term events of Nolan's line, but I am thinking about whether to publish both lines at the same time, because I am not sure that the prequel will not meet your appetite, and I am not sure about the palace story) Center: College Stories. Next: Adventure and Academy Parallel (Group Portrait) [Get it] [Get it] [Get it]

The writing is full of life, the characters are vivid and distinctive, and the plot progresses smoothly. If you maintain this level, the ending will be invincible. In addition, when will the male and female protagonists fight together [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The writing style is very good and can be expressed fluently. The description is effective but not too much. The characters are also very vivid.

After a long day, I like to watch these [Adoration]

Are all the sweets in the early stage a preparation for the knife later? Hajisaku, you are totally immersed in your art...

It's well written, and the words naturally reflect the character's personality and worldview.