A Cultivating Boy from the East Meets a Magical Priestess from the West

It's invincible but not brainless. The protagonist's low-key development and understanding of the rules of the world feel immersive. The combination of Eastern and Western cultivation systems is imaginative, and the author pays great attention to the details (such as the setting of the jade pendant), but occasionally the dialogue is a bit wordy, but overall it is worth reading.

New friends come over. Nice to meet you. Let me introduce this book. This is a slow-paced Western fantasy novel. The elements of cultivating immortality in the book only focus on the male protagonist. There is no mindless martial arts and abuse of food all the way. Please do not substitute the settings in other people's books into this book. The core of the story is a modern man with the ability to cultivate immortality. With his own knowledge and thoughts, he steps into this Western world full of magic and fantasy. He will meet several girls with different personalities and work together to solve the ensuing incidents, and inadvertently, quietly rewrite the direction of the world. Friends who are interested may wish to click on it and read it for entertainment. If it does not suit your taste, there is no need to waste time. If you have any questions or ideas, you can leave them in the comment area and I will reply to them one by one. Everyone is very welcome to actively discuss and ask questions! [Blowing kiss] The classification is also thrown into Xixuanli, so everyone really shouldn't catch the word "cultivation to immortality". Of course there will be a collision between immortality cultivation and magic, but it is more of a harem novel.

The setting of Eastern magic colliding with Western magic is quite innovative. The scene where the immortal cultivator travels to the magical continent and pretends to be a pig to eat the tiger at the beginning is not awkward and the reading is smooth. The protagonist's complaints and nonsensical comedy scenes are very good, but some of the setting and foreshadowing are a bit cumbersome, but overall it is a fun story that can be easily read.

The author is a novice and can tell that there are occasional typos and awkward sentences, but you can feel that it is written by hand and with care, and he responds to every comment with a sincere attitude. This sense of interaction is a plus.

The overall style is a light comedy that relieves stress, without complicated plots. Chen Heng has gone from a cultivator to a stranger, trying to grow while finding his way home. His occasional complaints and jokes are very relaxing. Some of the dialogues are a bit cumbersome, but it doesn't affect reading. I plan to continue following updates.

I like the character of the protagonist. He is neither cold nor pretentious, but rather talkative and pragmatic. As soon as I arrived in the town, I was thinking about finding a place to live, asking about how to practice magic, and thinking about the elf lady. This little thought was written very vividly, like a real young man.

The details are well prepared. The settings of the Taiyi Jade Pendant and the Nine-turn Reincarnation Gong are clearly explained in advance. There should be no deus ex machina in the subsequent plot. The process of the protagonist growing up in a small town and inquiring about magic practice is very natural. There is no rush to advance the plot and it is effortless to watch.

Overall, it is a steady and enjoyable fantasy novel. The protagonist falls from the world of immortality to the Western magical world. The process of adapting to the new environment and exploring the magic system is very real. The setting of body refining foundation + later magic exploration is fresh, but the rhythm can be more compact, and some daily scenes are a little dull. And... I like the harem [laughing evilly]

It's a new author, and I personally think it's pretty good. Five stars for encouragement. Some settings still require more thought before being finalized, and care should be taken to avoid setting conflicts when the plot advances. For some points that are easily controversial, do not use too much space, blur them, and just mention them in one sentence. The character and performance of the protagonist must be well measured. It feels like it's trying to show the protagonist's ease and spontaneity, but sometimes it goes too far and it just ends up being careless. The prerequisite for being confident and relaxed is the necessary careful preparation. It's impossible to have a female protagonist in a purely comical show, so it's reasonable to make fun of it. As the relationship with the heroine progresses, I feel that there is little interaction and they fall in love too quickly. The emotional line cannot be forced by design events, but the shining points can be found in daily interactions and life contexts. This is very difficult to grasp, so the author needs to work harder. I didn't have the urge to stay up late to read it, probably because the plot wasn't ups and downs enough, and the connection between plot chapters was too bland. Can't tell. I'll just use my mouth, just for reference.

The only drawback is that in the early stage so far, there are too few elements of cultivating immortals. Some people may feel that the book is not right if they come here for the title. However, the author explained that the elements of cultivating immortals will be reflected in larger scenes, so look forward to it.