Piloting a Starship, Blowing Up Knights, and Capturing Giant Elf Girls

It's okay, but there are too many meaningless female names. When writing about a harem, you should focus on a few main characters. I feel that the characters are still not well established at the moment. However, you can divide those elves by type or occupation and directly label them with the simplest labels. This will make it easier to remember, but it will affect the interaction. This still depends on the author's choice, but the author's completeness is still very good, at least it is quite relaxed and funny.

I recommend everyone to read Chapter 67. It's like a Family Guy from another world. The whole family is a god, and the author is so funny. Although I don't understand why the rating of this book is so low, I think it's very interesting. It often makes me laugh so hard that my stomach hurts.

In Chapter 17, is it too tricky for the male protagonist to blow himself up all over again 😂

This book is so good. Those who like to use it as a recycling bin are in luck. The heroine who is clean should not just stuff a lot of stuff into it. Yurna appears in Chapter 29, and her name is also included in Chapter 143. This is what the author calls a supporting role. See Chapter 33 for details. 7 Stars real review

I have finished reading Chapter 110. The story is very good so far, but the pace feels a little faster. It would be nice to have more details. It has fun, warmth and a real man. The blend of jokes is also natural. There are no big poisons and small poisons are avoided. However, for example, the territory upgrade, including urban residential houses, are directly upgraded. It is so sudden. Should I foreshadow it with the citizens in advance? And the big sister's writing is also very good. Give me a dozen of these big sisters, speed by speed by [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]. It should be at a level of 8.5-8.8 Points now. If the plot is richer, the story and score should be on the same table as Baron Happy Bean

It's a super invincible and beautiful ride on a big car. Currently, the world view setting and so on are all online, and the plot is also very exciting. It is the type of cool article that I like. I hope the author will work hard and try to write 1 million words. Come on, author, I hope you can add more, but I personally don't really like this kind of narrative where curses are everywhere, or illusions are everywhere. Some inexplicable enemies have been added to the new chapter. It feels very strange to oppose the protagonist for no reason. There is basically no description of the villain, and no one knows the enemies. The author's current outline feels okay, but it feels like it will be finished soon. I also hope that this is a longer story, and I hope the author can calm down and write it.

Good-looking, energetic, the 2m-tall big sister is still too authoritative

It's awesome and looks good. It looks like a human writing, not AI. It's bad-mouthed and looks good.

There are not many words, but the writing is interesting. The characters are generally neutral and confusing. There is a problem with the overall coherence of the narrative, but it should be good as long as it is written. If you can read it at the beginning, the whole article will generally become smoother and smoother. The story line moves relatively quickly, and what Golden Finger gives is quite reasonable, but if there are too many drawings, there may be things you forget.

The least tactful, the least obscure, the least disguised, the least polished, the least polished, the most hard-core, the least water-filled, the least silly, the least perfunctory, the least bullshit, the least deceptive, the least flattering, the least showy, the least appetizing, the least worldly, the least sophisticated, the least pretentious, the most useless, the least showy, The most imperfect, crispest, neatest, most enjoyable, most relaxing, most comfortable, most powerful, most powerful, most domineering, most refreshing, most top-notch, most ruthless, most absolute, most in place, most to the point, most to the point, most throat-blocking way to tell you, after reading it, you will feel an emptiness, everything is in vain, and you will become a saint immediately.