Buying the Villainess at the Start as a Background Character

Let's talk about the evaluation first: Plot 5/10 (poisonous at the beginning, gentle and dull at the end) Writing 6/10 (skilled author, good writing style) Refreshing 3/10 (Weak protagonist, maybe the turning point hasn't been reached yet) Updated 7/10 (two chapters updated daily, the balance point between maintaining books and catching up on updates) Perception: Explosive and toxic, but I have a special defense against Western fantasy and light novels, so I reluctantly continued reading. Some people may think that my evaluation is too high. As a bookworm with 10 years of reading experience, I can only say that some novels are not worth reading if you only read the title and introduction. They can attract you to see the poisonous points, which proves that they are not without merit. Plot: I can only say that the latter part is better than the first one, but the protagonist is still a weakling. He barely has an emotional line to lubricate the content, and with my special defense attribute, it's not too bad. Writing style: Better than plot handling, passable level.

I felt that it was a reference, but it was totally OK. The Korean version was extremely uncomfortable to read on a computer, and the manga was also difficult to comment on. Personally, I think the protagonist of this book is better written, and each heroine has a completely different setting. I like this book the most among the Western fantasy games in the Tomato game. Come on, author.

First of all, I would like to thank everyone for your support and thank you all for your compliments. Thank you for your patience in reading the story I wrote. This is a great encouragement and support to me! While thanking you for giving me the motivation, I am also very sorry for the dissatisfaction of some of your feedback. Although I have made major changes based on some suggestions, there may still be some deficiencies, which I will accept. I will continue to listen and revise again in the future! Just like what is said in the book, I have been committed to writing a story that leads to an "end", so I promise! Unless there is force majeure, there will never be any cuts in half or eunuchs. Thank you again for your support and criticism!

This book is not a cool read in the traditional sense, and requires some thinking. The author's writing is delicate, and the combat and environment descriptions are very good. But sometimes the reader knows even less information than the protagonist in the book. However, the author will lay a lot of foreshadowings, and if you look carefully, you can actually deduce the subsequent plot. Obviously, this model won't have a wide audience on 🍅, but I personally like it. To refute the poisonous points mentioned by other comments, that is, the protagonist clearly knew that Alice was the final boss and did not kill her or stay away from her at the beginning, but stayed with her; or why he did not hug the third princess's thigh but hugged Alice's thigh. First of all, the protagonist initially knew that he would be killed by Alice if he did not change anything, so he wanted to live. But it is definitely impossible to kill her. Alice's remnants and herself are very strong. It is impossible to kill her, but she will die faster. Then why not stay away from or drive her away? A person who suddenly traveled to a different world as a noble would be almost impossible to survive without relying on the power of his family. Instead, he relied on the power of his family to obtain information, enjoy life, and become stronger quickly. If you drive her away, the plot will be completely out of control, and the protagonist will be found and killed later in the revenge. By leaving her behind, you can also know her general movements and speculate on the plot. Let's talk about why he doesn't hug the third princess' thigh. The protagonist has made it clear that he doesn't want to join any force and just wants to live. I think this is understandable. Not everyone who travels to a different world wants to create their own world. Lying down is also an option. And the third princess will eventually conflict with Alice, and it will be difficult for either of them to survive. Finally, I would like to talk about the shortcomings of this novel. That means there is still a little less information for readers. The author likes to add some secrets or little stories after the end of a story. Only by reading this can you know the full story. However, only two chapters are updated a day, which makes it confusing for most readers, making it easy for them to keep reading or even quit. Therefore, it is recommended that the author share more information earlier, such as using the protagonist's guesses to give readers a direction to explore/think about the subsequent plot.

It's okay. Don't be misled by those who have only read a few chapters. Although the plot has flaws, it is generally good. The main character is not Long Aotian, but a growth and planning type. After watching it, I like Lelina better. Lelina's character is more three-dimensional. I don't know if it is because I have played too many games. When I see her, I always think of the second lady Coletta 😄. Also, the heroine Alice has so few scenes.

It's still pretty good. The only thing that's a little uncomfortable is that the female protagonist steals the male protagonist's things and then "feels distressed" when she feeds the male protagonist the things she robbed. I feel everything else is good. The male protagonist's character is a little twisted, but he can be said to be a little reckless, and his IQ fluctuates, but as far as I'm concerned, it's acceptable. The main reason is that there are too few tomato fantasy novels, and apart from being a lord, it's all about farming, so it's boring to watch too many of them. I actually liked the male protagonist's relatively low positioning at the beginning. I'm not a person with a big personality, so many of the male protagonist's actions seemed reasonable to me, and maybe more in line with me, so it was easier to fit in.

It's a pretty good Western fantasy novel. The character of the protagonist is quite to my liking. In terms of the plot, it's quite relaxed (maybe?) In terms of the emotional drama, the obvious one is probably Lerina, and Hills also has a bit of a crush on this aspect. Change the ratingi

Every character is very unique and shrewd. There is no such thing as a brainless villain. This is a well-conceived and thoughtful work in the Western fantasy genre. The protagonist is also serious, not dull, not frivolous, not lewd, and has a normal personality. This is really rare in novels, and it is definitely a masterpiece It is really a big mistake to bring the characters from the novel to the real world. The characters in the novel are fictitious in the story. If you send Alice into reality with the protagonist, then let me ask you about the meaning of their existence when the characters in the novel are here. You also mentioned multiple heroines. Do you want to bring Lerina, Hills, and the little princess all over? The meaning of their existence is that they have their own identity in the novel, and the heroine is not alone and can come through to accompany the protagonist because she loves the hero. Then they each have their own identity and meaning in the story, which is too separate. From the moment Alice and the protagonist come to reality together, starting from this chapter, the reading is very fragmented, so I can only lower the score.

It's very good, the writing is quite solid, but the pace is indeed a bit fast. If it continues like this, it will probably be finished in a few hundred pictures. I hope it can be slower, or that the plot can be extended a little longer, but there is one last problem. Don't play the "Zhi Cun Challenge" every time, and stop writing at the important point 🙂

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. The author's writing skills are absolutely top-notch among Tomatoes. The creation of each character is very typical and complex, perfectly showing the unpredictable psychological changes of the characters in reality. It is simply what happens in reality.