About My Harem at Hogwarts

The main body of the novel is a very good article, but there are some paragraphs or reviews of the book. Some friends may pay attention to the emphasis on word use and some points of view. For example, Mother Dumbledore's description of Dream Girl is similar to that of Snape, which may make some friends feel that it is not very easy to read and has some lightning protection. The wording used in the description may be a bit immature. I don't reject these genres very much, because when a novice author has immature writing skills, it can only be said that he has been trained. The subject matter of this article is really good. This is the first time I have seen all the topics. If any friends see my comment and say that the writing style is immature in terms of word description, please consider whether to read it. Come on, author, the road is long and difficult, and there will always be one or two people who deliberately find fault. Don't pay attention to it. There will be a few short-sighted people on this road, so don't worry.

It's awesome, the article is okay, I don't recommend reading the paragraph review. I remember the author wrote about the heartthrob, All Direction. What is the purpose of posting Deha's CP picture in the comment area? Isn't this just a slap in the face?

The author's description is very delicate, and overall I feel very comfortable [sending my heart] (ps: Pansy praised it!! [Blowing kiss]) There is no awkwardness in the description of emotions, the subject matter is also very novel, and the character creation is just right (I don't think it is too disconnected in my opinion). The heroine feels cute, reliable, and really charming! So, the author will tell you more! ! ! (Kneel down——

I found another delicious HP novel without meal replacement😋 Is this the only HP of this type? The content I have read so far is very interesting😋 I can't believe that I found such a good-looking novel among all the novels written by AI-flavored noobs. It's like a fairy tale😋 The player is so cute Meow Meow Meow

Give me one more chapter. I'm almost dying. Please, sister, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, sister, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Sister, I beg you, just give me more. Please give me more. I can't stand it anymore. Okay, please, sister, I feel like there are ants crawling on me, I feel like I'm shaking all over, and I can't breathe, please, sister, just give it, just one more chapter, I'll never touch it again, please, sister, really, just one chapter, I swear I'll never touch this thing again, the teacher's... Immortal product... Immortal product? (Testing) Immortal product? (Hesitation) Immortal product... (Trembling) Immortal product? ! (Surprised) (walking and shouting) Immortal product! ! (Crying) (holding up with both hands) (wolfing down) Wu... Wu... (Choking) Good... Good... Delicious rice! (Excited) (Roaring to the sky) (Take a big bite) (Smelling the aroma of rice) (Breaking out of the ground) (Running around on all fours looking for food) (Seeing the state banquet) (Stupefied) (Climbing back into the earth) (Changing into a suit) (Elegantly breaking out of the ground) (Elegantly crawling) (Elegantly picking up the knife and fork) (Elegantly dining) (Elegantly eating) (Elegantly wiping mouth) (Elegantly on all fours) (Elegantly crawling back into the earth). (Smell the aroma of rice) (Breaking out of the ground) (Running around on all fours looking for food) (Seeing the state banquet) (Stupefied) (Crawling back into the earth) (Changing into a suit) (Elegantly breaking out of the ground) (Elegantly crawling) (Elegantly picking up the knife and fork) (Elegantly dining) (Elegantly eating) (Elegantly wiping mouth) (Elegantly on all fours) (Elegantly crawling back into the earth) Ahhhhhh! ! ! State banquet! ! ! ! I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat! ! ! Look at me eating so much! ! ! ! I ate a lot! ! ! ! (Excited mutation) (Snatch the roses from the hands of the zombies next to you) (Crawl over) (Offer the flowers in a strange posture) (Fall) (Get up again in a strange posture)

The setting is interesting and the interactions are cute. As a fan, I won't judge it based on female-oriented requirements because the limitations are there. But there are many small details that are wrong. The conversation when wearing the Sorting Hat can be heard. Nurmengard is in Germany and is called LV Half-Blood Prince. . . It makes me so uncomfortable to see

I originally didn't like to read the heartthrob setting, but this book has a good grasp of it, with a pure player mentality, it attacks everyone generously and naturally, and gives happiness to everyone equally, so I like it very much

Very beautiful, highly recommended, the heroine is really handsome and cute First of all, let me say that I am not a bastard of the author. I sincerely feel that this book is very interesting. Secondly, I think it's pretty good-looking. The heroine almost made me mentally retarded. But I don't want to say to some readers. Is there any problem with calling a man wife? The heroine can be called whatever she wants. I didn't find anything about the old man (Dumbledore) (maybe because I didn't look too carefully at the time and didn't notice so many details)

Beautiful, very beautiful. Just a little bit OOC.

I hope the author will work hard and like this article very much. But. He doesn't like black people. This sentence is too discriminatory.