[I happily start school with a mysterious curse hanging over me, only to find that everyone seems to know me, while I’m the one with a completely blank mind. What am I supposed to do with all these people speaking in riddles???]
[Short Introduction]
·Plenty of time travel and time jumps·
·Setting: two male leads, both strong·
Timeline
Ancient Generation, Child Generation, Parent Generation, Child Generation.
·Ancient Generation·
In the Ancient Generation, you’ll see:
With An’s memories completely blank, he meets Tom Riddle, who is also an orphan. They gradually get to know each other, and once they realize they’re alike, the two orphans claw their way up from the mud and build their strength.
Their personalities complement each other, and each has their own agenda.
Along the way, they complete their shared grand mission and fall in love.
But why is this romance getting stranger and stranger? Weren’t they supposed to be allies?
Finally, at graduation, Tom smiles, takes his left hand, and forcibly slips a ring onto his ring finger.
“Now you can never leave me.”
An: ?
So he runs away, and he runs far away.
…Child Generation…
When his memories are completely blank and everyone looks at him with riddling eyes full of all kinds of emotions,
The only one who angrily chases him around and hurls Avada spells at him is the Dark Lord.
Well, the Dark Lord is the only clue in the whole story who’s being direct.
Finally:
Corrections are welcome!
·Life is a journey against the current, and I too am just a passerby·
The writing is good, and the logic is consistent with some other settings. It's very interesting. It's quite fun to watch. The author adds 4,000 words to one chapter. I think to attract more people to read the book, it is best to write a chapter of 2,000 words. Now with only 20 chapters, it is easy to discourage people or make people hoard books. In fact, the content of this book is quite rich now. The male protagonist and Riddle get along very naturally. He is not just pretending to fall in love with both of them (praise). Riddle is probably more possessive than he likes him. He himself doesn't understand and doesn't believe that he can love. I guess he will definitely be cruel if he gets in the way later. Looking forward to the next generation (because I think the next generation should have more sugar, unlike the ancestors who worked hard hh) In fact, I not only read it for 30 minutes, but every book review showed me that it was less than 30 [punch]
At present, the impression is still acceptable. I feel that the author has buried a lot of threads? In fact, the relationship between the two of them is very delicious. Let's give it a five-star to encourage it www. It's just that the updates are so slow, boss.
I like this HP fanfic very much. I hope you will continue to work hard and don't stop updating it. The fan girl is begging hard because all the HP fanfics I like have been discontinued. I'm sad. ❤️ The emotional line is very delicate. You can read the feeling of two people pulling together from it. You can directly become a god without explaining it.
What's good at the moment is the style I like, and the writing style is not so childish. It's a gold mine in Tomato. Come on, write. Do you dare to scare me with a million words a day?
It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author
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It's very beautiful, the emotional lines are delicate, and the two characters are really cool!!!
Very nice! The character design of the protagonist is also very good, good-looking and beautiful!
Personally, I think it looks great. I hope the author can stick to it and I wish the author can write better.