Harry Potter: I Want Both the Horcruxes and the Platinum Prince

I'm convinced. I didn't believe it when I saw so many bad things in another book review. I insisted on trying it myself. Now I'm fine. I'm shocked. There are a lot of logical errors and bad things in the first ten chapters. What I want to say is that the other book review is absolutely correct. It's completely correct. There is nothing inconsistent with the facts. Please let this author write a fan next time. Thank you. Let's talk about the outrageous things. There are outrageous points in almost every chapter. If I write them all down, I guess the word count won't be enough, so I'll just focus on the key points. The heroine is a Slytherin, so it's okay to defend Gryffindor on the train, but after being sorted into Slytherin, she still defends Gryffindor?? Draco bumps into Hagrid and the others raising a dragon. According to the original plot, if he files a complaint, although Slytherin will be deducted points, Gryffindor will be deducted more points. This is obviously in favor of Slytherin. In some psychological activities, the heroine said that Draco cannot be allowed to complain, otherwise Hagrid and the others will be in bad luck! May I ask? Which side is it from? Originally, I wanted to continue angrily scolding the heroine for being so brainless, but suddenly I realized that the author probably wrote this on purpose, making the heroine so brainless and annoying to bring out the rationality and affection of the male protagonist, so that more people would scold the heroine, right?? Don't hate women too much, okay? 🙂

The writing is okay, but the plot... Um...