HP? Thank Goodness It's DLC, We're Saved!

It's a fan-oriented work, so I recommend you read it after reading Huo Yi's complete plot, otherwise you won't get many laughs () The plot is smooth and the order is normal, and the original character creation is also good. There are some foreshadowings, and the daily life is very warm. There should be no emotional lines in the current reading. The writing style and understanding of the characters are slightly lacking in the early stage (may be due to the subjective feelings of the heroine throughout the process), but I gradually became more proficient in it later on. The only problem in the whole text is that the plot is too dense, which caused me to stop tensing up several times in the studio ( Looking forward to subsequent updates!

The author combines Huo Yi with the original work very well, but the protagonist also has his own action trajectory, and the main line is very clear. In the daily part, because the protagonist is too noisy, it has just passed three days. It feels like the third autumn has passed. At the beginning, you must clear the task list (school rules), unlock the forbidden book area, the forbidden forest, and the three-headed dog dungeon. It has only been five days since Dunduoduo met the heroine Vision Tom at the beginning. It was also very funny. Players are the most enjoyable, and Hogwarts is about to undergo major changes. The returning student inherits his legacy and embarks on the road of confrontation with the resurrected senior. The hateful senior dares to covet the player's ancient magic, and the true mage comes to fight [heavy blow]. What school rules, I thought it was a must-do list, what about the Forbidden Forest, the players ran over it like the Universiade, the high-energy Big Dog caused a havoc in Hogwarts, and no one dared to question the player's ability to act! Looking forward to the next branch of Huo Yi, this wave is a shock for repeat students.

HPL is a player protagonist, but it is not the kind of fourth natural disaster type story. The protagonist is mostly warm and friendly to NPCs. Apart from the settings of the game system, the protagonist's external words and deeds are actually more like the indigenous protagonist of HPL. He is mainly a helpful person and has a high emotional intelligence. The plot has only reached the first grade, and I am still looking forward to how it will develop in the future [laughs]

This is what I have been looking for... An HPL fanfic with a relaxed style of writing... The setting is not awkward and is purely funny. I want to confess to you, the author!

Yes, it's good. The protagonist has a strong sense of immersion. It doesn't feel like he's here to play a game, but like he's here to blend in. It's just that the boundary between games and reality is quite blurry. The image of a player doesn't appear very often. Most of the time, he looks like an aborigine in life, and there are only a few words that appear when playing games. How to say it? The state of playing games with me is different. It's like she really comes here to live.

It's really beautiful! ! ! One of the most beautiful Huo Yi players I have ever seen wearing HP is one of my own fans. It blends very well! Moreover, the heroine is not the fourth natural disaster, chaotic evil type, but a kind-hearted Beagle, who is very cute (I don't mean to say that being evil is bad, I just say that the two are different types, and I love both of them!). She also maintains the subtle and refreshing feeling of the game, and does not steal the highlight of the main protagonist group, or abuse the food when she comes up. Of course, she does not feel embarrassed and pretending to be proud. It also combines with the game's own main plot. The jokes are so interesting that I laughed out loud. I really like this kind of light-hearted humor that is neither pretentious nor embarrassing! It tied the knot in one breath. It was delicious and delicious. The only thing I worry about is that the author must not give up! ! Please be sure to keep updating until the end🙏

The best Huo Yi fanfic I have found so far integrates well with the original plot of Harry Potter. It neither follows the protagonist as a nanny nor completely ignores the original plot. The protagonist will take some time to care about his friends while having his own school life. The protagonist is a very charming person. Who can not love our Xiaomei! Of course I don't mean that she is a heartthrob. In fact, I want to be friends with Xiaomei. After all, we are both enthusiastic gamers~

Nice! The heroine is warm-hearted, loves to help others, and is very strong. She has no emotional lines or ambiguous objects, and she has pure friendship with everyone (certified by the author that there is no CP) The writing style is funny and has cured my habit of listening to books while eating! And the author always replies to paragraph comments, very sincerely! Those who like all-round, invincible flow, and pure plot can quit. Personally, I think this book is more of a day-to-day comedy, with not much to show off your strength and maneuvers (rolling and dodging does not count). It is of course inevitable that the heroine needs to brush up on her proficiency before reaching the DLC. After all, according to the game settings, if a real player is invincible at the beginning, can the game still be played? There's no need to give a bad review because a book doesn't suit your taste. I don't have a problem with it if you pay to read it, but the full text of Tomato is free. If you want a bicycle, write it yourself if it doesn't suit your taste. The author must not let his mentality be affected by keyboard warriors! You and Xiaomei are both cute babies😚😚

The boss writes really well, it tastes delicious, but why is the data not very good? Boss, should you consider adding a few more labels? Let's put the "Fanjin" tag on it. Everyone who comes to HP comes to see the fanfic. By the way, the author jj also has Meimei's works, which are also very good. I seriously support Meimei elbowing Xiaotang to become Professor Figo's favorite student [laughs]

Jian San Sorry (end of the year), I have to go back to Hogwarts to go to school! ! This book is from heaven! ! I am in awe of the author's wife's imagination! I'm going to dominate the wizarding world with my biting kale! ! It really feels like playing the game all over again. The charm of stand-alone games is nothing better than this! ! Even the single-player games my wife and I play overlap a lot, which is great! Finally, I want to yell at Dog Warner! Living like this guarding the golden mountain! Five stars, I hope my wife can finish it! ! Let's take another magical journey together!