I Raise My Hand and Cast a Chain Lightning Avada Kedavra

Not bad, overall it looks quite comfortable. Bonus points for not procrastinating, bonus points for not being a Riddler, bonus points for not hiding clumsiness, bonus points for being original (combination of game and plot), bonus points for having a mature outlook on life instead of being a giant baby of the motherland ("I don't eat beef every day"). Also, don't worry that the heroine doesn't know the plot and can't make up for the regrets. Not to mention anything else, just saying that the heroine is Huo Yi's clearance save and red eyes is enough to explain the problem. Yes, it's the red eye in the ending of the dark wizard. 🤦

Overall, the writing style is acceptable, and I have some plans for my writing ideas. But some expressions of emotion are still lacking. If there is a cp currently, it is most likely Malfoy (it has changed a lot under the influence of the protagonist) I personally think that if it is a male video, it would be more appropriate to change it to singles (because boys prefer novel characters to be self-improving, independent, do their best, conquer, etc.) I prefer those with cp, but the requirements for the author's writing style are very high. In fan fiction, many of us go there to find candy and make up for regrets. Ms. Rowling has a vivid portrayal of each character's personality, and everyone has their own favorite character (the author should decide early whether there is a cp, for example, the recent "Gender-transformed Miss Malfoy" is very popular. In fact, my thinking has been a bit confusing at this point in editing, because my actual view on the protagonist of the novel is that if it is not a particularly desperate world, the protagonists will have their own emotional lines to make the protagonist more vivid, instead of becoming a so-called lonely king. (It's like Loki becoming a god in Marvel, but Loki himself already has rich emotional portrayals, and the contrast with the ending is even more worthy of praise) In the past few years, I really liked the kind of novels where the protagonist is powerful alone until eternity, the end of time, but after reading too much and experiencing too many things, I don't know why I always feel empty in the ending. It seems that the protagonist of the novel has transformed into Tao in my eyes. I always feel that such an ending is too empty. I'm halfway through reading it, so these are my thoughts. I'll add more when I catch up with the rest of the group. Come on, author! ❤️❤️❤️

Very good, the original "4th natural disaster" is really integrated into the world.

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Good looking, good looking, come on, come on

I haven't finished it yet but it's delicious. Huo Yiliang is really scarce. . I'd like to ask if Huo Yi's character will appear again. . I really like Sebas and Omni qwq The main line speed can be faster!! Can't wait to meet Sebaomi!! (That's right, I'm Sebastian's hot recommendation)

It's not bad, but the AI ​​smell is very strong, and it's a bit uncomfortable to listen to books with a lot of lags.

The writing is very good, but I suggest the author put the Chinese name after the English of the spell, so that the reading experience will be better.