
Hogwarts: My System Refreshes Every Month
霍格沃兹:我的系统每月刷新
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 109k Words
- Updated
- 1d ago
- English
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53Chapters
31.3kReads · 30 days
31.5kReads · all time
10kShelves
5.8kListens
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Male or female protagonist, I'll take it. With or without a couple, I'll take it. Beloved by everyone or a lone wolf, I'll take it. Villain, neutral, or righteous, I'll take it. With or without overpowered abilities, I'll take it. Reborn, transmigrate, transmigrate into someone else's body or into my own, I'll take it. With or without a System, I'll take it.
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The concept and plot are decent, you could call it a good draft, but it's a little rambling, though not much and barely noticeable. Also, many characters are rather flat; for example, the scene I was most looking forward to, Snape spraying venom, wasn't quite there. Overall, it's watchable to pass the time.
Politely asking, are you referring to the harem?
He casually gave you a flower, but you blushed and wanted to pay the price with your whole life.
Personally, I think it's alright, but I'd like to offer a few suggestions: 1. The story of the saviors can be developed as a side story within the narrative (don't have too high expectations; writing the same thing too often is problematic. The Harry Potter story is finite; the original work is primarily told from Harry's perspective.
It's just a bit short.
I've revised the issue that most readers pointed out—the protagonist didn't seem to be putting in enough effort to level up his proficiency. It should read better now.
It looks good and is very original.
Chapters 26 and 27 use AI a bit too much; the plot itself is fine, just need some minor tweaking at the beginning.
It's well written, but there's too little of it.
So far, it's virus-free and viewable, just a bit limited.