The Undertaker Who Stayed 14

It's not that the editors are blind. While it reads like a high-quality online short story, its readability is relatively low for most readers, lacking optimization in terms of reader comprehension. I had to maintain a high level of emotional resonance to get the experience of reading a typical online novel (by my personal standard).

I'll gradually improve the quality later, but unfortunately I haven't been getting much traffic lately. However, I'll keep writing until it's finished.

The opening scene where Leon picks up the female lead felt really harsh to me. While it's clear Leon is kind and the female lead has feelings for him, that particular scene felt inexplicable. The later Alan and Knight arcs were much better written.

It gave me the feeling of watching Witch's Journey and Delicious in Dungeon. Aside from the slightly awkward part with Leon, it's more like a light novel (?). The only downside I feel it has right now is a lack of depth. Of course, I haven't finished it yet; I'm only on chapter 27. I'll leave a follow-up review after I finish it. Damn, even without using my brain, it's difficult to see the latest chapter. My rationality is kicking my brain to the bone!

It has witty references, good writing style, vivid descriptions, rhythm, and imaginative ideas. Good books I've finished reading the latest chapter, and I was deeply moved by my teammate's incredibly imaginative ideas and emotions. It's rare to find something so delicious, like handmade candy, even in something as mundane as a rotten persimmon.

So far, the book is generally quite readable, and I've already read the latest chapter. Narratively, it gets a bit formulaic towards the end, but there's still a chance to improve. Also… the update speed is quite slow, and the daily word count isn't enough, even though it's still a very good story.

I read it without any emotional fluctuations; at least the story wasn't awkward, and it's better than most novels I've read.

First of all, congratulations to our Lao Ang for winning the revival match and reuniting with his little monster! 😘😘😘 Wishing you both a happy ending with a reunion!

A lighthearted and enjoyable read to relieve stress.

Not bad, there are quite a few parts that could be expanded upon.