The Strongest Person in the World Is Actually a Little Girl?!

It's pretty good. In the early stage (about the first 30 chapters), it was a bit boring due to some settings, and it felt a bit broken. But later on, it gets better and better. I obviously feel that the author's text has improved. It's really well written. Come on author. The author, I suggest you change the introduction. This introduction doesn't seem to fit the content very well, and the introduction looks a bit boring.

The writing is very good, and Rococo's strong and unyielding character is well portrayed (especially the aspect of crumbs). I also like combat transformation stories. I give it five stars. I hope Yangyang will continue to work hard [like][like][like]

It's rare to see such exciting fighting novels nowadays. The mixture of daily life makes the novel more comfortable and less likely to cause fatigue than pure fighting. Scene description: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ The description is sometimes grand and sometimes detailed. Each scene provides the perfect environmental backdrop for the plot. The bird's-eye view of the big scene during the fight and the depiction of daily details are just right. Plot depth: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (some spoilers) More than 600 chapters have been written, and the author has gradually become more proficient in narrating the plot. From the beginning, it was like a formula, writing a very common system, encountering tasks, and completing tasks (forced). Although it has no characteristics, it gives a very effective view of the world. As you continue to go deeper, the plot becomes more ups and downs. Each adventure of Rococo (the protagonist) has its own characteristics. You can see that Rococo has experienced setbacks, encountered opportunities, explored its secrets, and finally grown in strange adventures, giving readers a rich experience. As the plot progresses, the author's writing style continues to improve and has his own style. For example: In the era of novels where system literature is rampant, the existence of the system is constantly weakened, and it is more like a game UI, giving information and exchanging items. Although there is a system, there is nothing wrong with removing it and giving the function of the system to another character. The outline is clear, without too many useless descriptions, and each plot contributes to the development of the plot. It is super hard-core. Warm reminder: There are almost no emotional scenes, the ones that drive emotions are... Characterization: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Each character has his own unique personality, rich background, and very distinct appearance. Lifelike characters appear on the page, and the words describe the joys and sorrows of each character, as if a real person is standing in front of you. Fight details: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ The majestic battlefield and murderous moves can be imagined with just a few descriptions by the author, making people's blood rush! Author: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Where can I find authors who stay up late to give readers likes? Overall rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Why are you standing there? Look!

I'm lazy, but it looks good, so I posted it. The recommendation said that the author has good control over the strength and prefers polygons, so... I recommend meow... Ummm... The inside... It's just... Pretty good... Haha... (I'm not out of words, meow!) Come on, author, meow. A brief introduction? Hmm... ロリ, Fun, sentimental, highly practiced and opening a new account, cute and... Um... Quite nice?

The plot is not bad, but the writing still needs to be improved, and there are a lot of inappropriate words. But it is much better than those verbal essays. The overall plot arrangement is still very clear, and the overall plot is not too bland. As for the subject matter, I personally feel that the author used the setting of sexual transformation into a lolita, but did not write about the pleasure of turning into a lolita. The protagonist somewhat refuses to show off her cute chastity, not to mention that the article is biased towards the adventurous and combat-promoting type of article, which actually does not match the protagonist's setting. Therefore, I still recommend that the author give more thought to the material selection. There is no need to write it just to make it popular. Finally, I wish the author's writing skills will get better and better, and his new book will become more and more popular. [Working on draft]

It's really, really, really good-looking, and it suits my taste. The protagonist's strength is guaranteed to a certain extent, but he doesn't have the invincibility at the beginning to kill the whole world without thinking, and then he has a personality. Each character setting is also very complete. The plot setting, world view setting and protagonist's abilities are also very exciting. It doesn't fall into the clichés of abnormal world novels. It can be read from the words. It can be seen that the author is serious about the readers. Although the story line is long enough, the relationship between the characters is not that complicated and difficult to understand. In short, the author has a very good balance in terms of world view, writing style, length, story line development and character setting. It is really a peerless article that I can keep reading. I sincerely recommend it! Also, I have listened to it over and over again five or six times from the first chapter to more than 1,500 chapters. I listen to it every night before going to bed. I like Rococo! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The author is quite nice~ The author will respond to readers' questions seriously and actively make patches. It can be seen that the author has a complete outline and his writing style is getting better step by step! The key point is that the author must be a Yueji person and has referenced many urban settings, but he is definitely not a fan of Yueji. The author has absorbed many interesting settings in the city, and it is not confusing. The settings of Yueji are well integrated into the author's own settings. Although there are many confusing things in front of you, as long as you have questions, the author will definitely answer these questions in the paragraph review. The questions you will have will be asked by others in the paragraph review, and the author will definitely answer them. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better and better! It was pretty good at the beginning and the experience was great, but later on it started to pile up settings and even conflicted with the original settings. The combat power will be high and low. The combat power system is the same as that of Battle Through the Sky. After the protagonist upgrades, some people who are only slightly weaker than the protagonist will appear out of nowhere. At first it was said that level 5 was very few, but then level 5 started to suck, and so did the subsequent heroes, which just kept piling up levels and settings.

So far, overall it's okay There are appropriate connections between the plots and the series is pretty good. But my writing skills can be further developed (I won't deny that I'm picky), and so can my writing skills. A few suggestions: To be honest, I think the author should just write according to his own pace, copy, and outline. Heeding too much to the readers' opinions will not make a good book (my advice is the same). It is best to control each character well and think about the plot development from the character's perspective when writing the plot (that is, don't be too free of your own mood, and think more about the character outline and plot). (With a little personal stuff) Just leave it alone, please

I like you 9 points. Just one look at you and I like you very much! [Chigua] I love the author so much, okay?

A good book with a novel subject matter. I like to read this kind of book with a little bit of cool writing and a compact plot, with a little bit of excitement and tension. The characters are also very well created. This is considered to be at the top of the sexual transformation. Brothers, please remember to recommend it after reading it. Don't worry, the author will wait until my salary comes down to give you a master certification.