I Just Turned into a Little Girl, and They Mailed Me to a Yandere Campus Belle's House

Um? A cute white-haired loli fights against a tsundere and aloof lady? This maozi will definitely receive rave reviews from you!

The author has greatly improved his talents, but the writing style is not enough and the plot is not coherent enough. The writing should be more even, unimportant parts can be omitted, and the main content should be written in more detail, otherwise the contrast will be strong and the plot jumps too fast. In terms of character creation, the characters at the beginning are not explained carefully, and they are only known later. Moreover, the characters' personalities are not obvious, and they change almost in every chapter, giving people a feeling of being out of context. The article is quite satisfactory. People who like to read it will find it very interesting, but those who don't like to read it will find it ugly. I hope the author will continue to work hard

This may be Maozi's only book that has not been sealed until it is finished [laughing]

What a great book, thousands of words condensed into two words, wc! The characters are also very well developed, and most importantly, this book is super sweet!

Then let me give you an evaluation. Advantages: 1. The plot is clean and not procrastinating, and the wording is probably at the level between high school and college. 2. Putting aside the emotional drama, almost everyone in the whole drama has a distinct and full personality (except for one line, thank you). 3. I also have selfish motives, I love reading lesbian novels ~ Disadvantages: 1. The emotional drama is a bit tortuous and not fully written. 2. Although the whole book is not slow, it is not thoughtful enough. If you read mystery novels every day, it is not recommended to read it too seriously. 3. The ending is easy to read and hard to understand. After all, the ending says that two people are gods. It is clear, and there is no explanation of the system. Although the product itself is not easy to explain [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh], 4 the pace is a bit fast, and there are some omissions. This is not good, and it will not adapt to a small number of readers, so it is difficult to earn recommendation points. Summary: The book is not bad. It has adjectives and verbs, basically all of them. After reading it, you will find that there is not much new idea in the whole book, but the lack of intention is the greatest intention. I believe the author can do the same! Come on~

It's a good book, the characters are full and vivid, and it's quite sweet. In the story, the two gods Yun tide and Gu Yu experienced the struggle from master and servant (?) To love as mortals, and finally found their own happiness. This kind of character setting and plot arrangement make the story more fascinating. If more foreshadowing can be added to the story (less Riddler!), The final twist will be more understandable and acceptable to QAQ. In addition, the plot can easily become confusing and repetitive in the later stages, beating → being beaten → rescuing people, etc. It feels like it's easy to consume readers' enthusiasm. Anyway, thank you so much for the author😌👌

It's a very interesting Gao Wu Lily article. I'm used to reading urban sweet Lily articles. This kind of article can bring a novel feeling. Although the storyline may not be particularly smooth and the writing style lacks spirituality, I quite like the characters of the two protagonists [Adoration] If you like these two characters, you can follow them further.

Well done, well done. It's been a long time since I've encountered a book that made me stay up until four o'clock to read it.

The writing is so beautiful, especially the heroine and the little lolita. So cute!

It looks good, but it's great. The plot you conceived seems to be a bit inconsistent, and some parts are a bit unclear and vague. But overall, it's still very good to watch. After all, I'm obsessed with this character.