Turning into a Girl in the Apocalypse, Wandering Barefoot

I just like the heroine who talks less and is rational, not a soft and cute girl... And she is the biological daughter of the single heroine Tiandao. She has no clear distinction between good and evil and is not a virgin. She is not a stickler and moves forward alone without a companion... 66666666

Great book, please update. I think this book can be called "Fairy Tales in Nightmares". Nightmares refer to monsters and reality, while fairy tales are the protagonist and her experiences. Some of the pictures painted by the author are really beautiful.

After seeing Chapter 120, let's summarize the previous parts of Chapter 120: In terms of plot, in an environment where Tomatoes (and even more so on other websites) are full of useless cuteness, copywriting, and system transformation articles, this type of plot can be regarded as a breath of fresh air. The plot development location is not often focused on a certain place (such as the protagonist's home, school, company, or some gathering place). Personally, I prefer this kind of plot with a wide range of location changes. The plot at the beginning really surprised me, but after reading it, I felt that the author was a little out of inspiration. This can be seen from the fact that the number of paragraphs in the first chapter is much less than that of the previous chapters. There are more repetitive parts, and the number of people who give up on the book has also increased (of course it may also have something to do with the author's writing style). It is recommended that the author can solicit opinions from readers in book reviews to find inspiration. The author's writing style needs to be improved. The language logic of some parts of the content is not very good. Some explanations can be explained clearly in a few sentences, but they use several long paragraphs. However, it can still be seen that the author is working hard to improve it. I think the author can polish each chapter a little more before publishing it, or find a few people to let them read it. After all, of course he can understand what he writes, but others may not necessarily understand it. Well, I have nothing to say. Come on, author! Take good care of you! I rated this book 4 and a half stars, half a star for the writing. The following is a complaint: (It's very strange about the mechanism of Tomato. It keeps pushing duplicate books, and high-quality books are buried. If my friend hadn't recommended it to me, I wouldn't have discovered this book. There is also this rating mechanism. A masterpiece at 6 points, a shit at 9 points, full of 5 stars in the comment area, but the book rating is only 6 points. At least from now on, I think this book should be able to get a 7.9 If I don't talk about it. I always feel confident) Catching pigeons (which can be seen in almost every transformation book) [smile][smile] I really don't know how to write long reviews, let alone short reviews. I'm so numb. Test, I have the same expressive ability as social anxiety. I'm afraid that at least I stutter when I speak, but I'm not necessarily bad at writing articles, but I: I can't argue with others. When I write an article, my brain and hands are separated. When I think about the plot, I can't stop talking. I don't know what I'm talking about when I say it. I try to make up for it and the more I talk, the more confused I become. I will explain it clearly to you directly in two or three sentences about games (or science topics). Forget it, I won't write anymore. I can express the few words I want to express in a long article. If you understand the above sentences, just read them. If you don't understand them, find a translator. I really can't write [face covering] [face covering] Including the long comment above, it took me half an hour to write, and I felt numb.

So why? So many people like defense, not gold. This book ranks in the top three among all the novels I have read. First of all, the story is logical, the protagonist has a brain, and the plot is weird. The setting of the protagonist is also very novel. It is one of the few novels that kept me awake in the middle of the night. This book feels like watching a movie. Whether it is the direction of the plot or the control of the rhythm, it makes me very comfortable. I hope this book will not be canceled, otherwise it will be a pity.

I feel very good after reading 150 chapters. Personally, I would rate it 4.5. The author has a lot of imagination, but it is not too outrageous and appears to be very creative. The text is a bit like traditional literature and not like online literature. I personally like it very much. However, there are often a lot of settings and writing problems that may make people confused or very tiring to read, but the overall flaws are not hidden and the logic is online. The overall plot is very smooth, but some parts feel very stretched and torn. In some chapters, this feeling will give people a sense of surprise (like a strange fairy-like shock), but sometimes it will make people too tired. In addition, I feel that the plot is too rushed at times. It would be much better if a little more daily life could be added to allow readers to relax their tense nerves. The last thing is the name. To be honest, I didn't pay attention at first and mistook the protagonist Li Sili as Lilith (laughing and crying). Later, when Lilith appeared, even if I noticed something was wrong, the reading still felt confusing. Especially sometimes, I felt that the author couldn't distinguish between Li Sili and Lilith (I may have failed to follow the author's brain circuit). All in all, it is a very beautiful work. The only problem is that it may be very tight when watching. It is not recommended for people who want to watch cuteness and daily life.

It's a bit radio-oriented, what can I say about the author's writing style? A bit convoluted? It may be a bit difficult to match the author's ideas, and if you can't match it, it may be a bit ugly (it's very difficult), but if you can match the sitting brainwave, it still feels pretty good, and the image and plot of the protagonist have the feeling of a side-scrolling game: [A girl with unknown origins and mysterious power, walking into the snow and ice, heading towards an unknown future] And she has white hair and bare feet () In short, it's a bit niche. Those who like this style seem to be very comfortable. The main reason is that although this book is very cool, the author is also updating it steadily. Therefore, compared to those authors who have good grades and then stop halfway through writing to make you feel like you can't poop, books by authors whose works are constantly updated regardless of whether their grades are good or bad are still worth pursuing.

As far as the current part is concerned, it's a great travel novel. A world view similar to that of Final Lily, A fake three-dimensional white-haired lolita loved by two worlds A journey of salvation in a post-apocalyptic land tainted by filth (? Comes with medium-intensity fun jokes The author has complex composition (´∀`) And, Lily is so cuteᕕ(◠ڼ◠)ᕗ

I didn't expect it to end just after I started reading it, and I felt very emotional that one of my favorite novels has come to an end again. Let me start by saying that I like to read transformation adventure stories the most, and at the same time, I have the ability to passively protect myself, so I don't have a murderous personality. In this way, you can go on adventures in various places and have the feeling of being surrounded by stars. If you don't have a strong self-protection ability, you can bring a partner who can protect yourself without killing attributes. But it was these requirements that allowed me to find only three books that met the requirements in seven years. One was this book, one was The Princess Next Door, another one was Illidan the Hedgehog, and there was a game called Witch Weapons. Now that I have finished reading this book, all I can say is a sigh. Every time I open my phone, I pick one of these three books and think about whether I should read it again. At the same time, I read no more than five chapters a day to savor it, because I know that when I finish reading them all, there will be no souvenirs of the novel. I wonder if the next book like this will be in a few years. In fact, I can feel that the writing and plot in the early stages of this book are better than those in the later stages, but this does not affect my liking of this book. If the author writes another book, I will continue reading. Author, thank you for leaving a masterpiece in my life. Thank you very much...

This book is quite good as I saw from the home page. Compared with ordinary books, the change in narrative technique will make people feel a sense of peace when reading it. In short, good luck to the author.

It is well written. Each of the protagonist's abilities is gradually developed by himself, and the resulting effects (such as destruction, treatment, site adaptability, high defense, etc.) Are all explained with principles (of course, these principles do not exist in reality [laughter]); everyone should pay attention when reading. Although the protagonist's abilities seem to be very powerful, there are still many fatal weaknesses in the early stage. The invulnerability to all things in the introduction will have to be slowly developed later, so don't read this book with the mentality of reading a cool article. It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing. It is an excellent book, but there is still room for improvement. Come on [Like]