What If I Can't Beat Them? Guess I'll Have to Win Them Over

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As of Chapter 267. It's a very good Japanese-style Western fantasy novel. There are no major flaws, and the writing style is very close to that of Nikkei. Out of 5 points, I give it 4 points. One point for Jasmine, the healing little lolita. The author's description of Jasmine in the article is spot-on and completely in line with my beautiful fantasy about lolita. One point for Xiaomi Congee, my favorite character, innocent and lively, ignorant loli and so on are the best! (Cross out) One point to Luminara. She is worthy of the name of a brave person. She is confident but not arrogant, humble but not inferior. She is in line with the setting of the brave central air conditioner in traditional novels. She can be said to be a real virgin. One point for gluttony, simple bad breath, and witty enjoyment. But I have to deduct a point because of the main character Su Bei. To be honest, I didn't find anything interesting about the protagonist, or in other words, there wasn't any merit. It's not that the protagonist is not strong enough and is not good for everyone in the protagonist group. This guy's ability to withstand pressure is really outrageous. Paying tribute to the legendary pressure-resistant Wang Laosu is not a joke. But what I'm talking about is the core of the protagonist. A novel can be fascinating and make people want to read it because readers will have a sense of involvement in it and become involved with the protagonist, heroine, supporting characters, and even villains, passers-by, and bystanders. The core of a good novel is to make the character "alive" so that the reader feels that he is not a character written by the author, but a living person. Among them, supporting roles such as Jasmine, Luminara, Xiaomi Porridge, and Gluttony are all very good. But I can't feel any "characteristics" from the protagonist Su Bei. For example, from the very beginning of the novel, the protagonist has been leveling up and trying to survive, assassinating the Demon King, until he meets Jasmine. Then because of Jasmine's "breaks" time and time again, he changes from killing the Demon King and surviving to protecting Jasmine and becoming stronger to survive. How should I put it? You can't say that he did not do well. On the contrary, he did very well. If it were me, I might not be able to persist. But the protagonist is so persistent. He was like a piece of cold iron. He was warmed only when he met Jasmine. The rest of the time he was cold and not like a human being. Like those featureless assembly line protagonists in novels. I forgot which chapter it was. In it, the hero Luminara's evaluation of the protagonist is roughly that he is a cold and heartless person who regards everyone except Jasmine as a tool, whether it is millet porridge, Gluttony, or Elena. It can be seen from the return of Xiaomi Porridge in Chapter 264 and the completely different Elena in Chapter 265. To be serious, the protagonist does not regard anyone other than Jasmine as a human being at all. "Thank you for your hard work." Su Bei was the first to express concern. Elena sat carelessly in front of Su Bei, drank the tea poured in front of her, and turned her head to look at Su Bei. Chapter 265 describes it this way: "Thank you for your hard work." Su Bei was the first to express concern. Elena sat carelessly in front of Su Bei, drank the tea poured in front of her, and turned her head to look at Su Bei. Suddenly he laughed. This smile made Su Bei feel that the old Elena was back. "It's so perfunctory. If you really care about me, why don't you go to the medical team to see me? Is it a long way?" Elena didn't look at Su Bei, but stared straight at the tea in front of her, and suddenly asked. "Is it possible that I can't find time for a week?" Su Bei was stunned, paused, and seemed a little speechless. This is the reason why I don't like the protagonist. I know that he is difficult. He faces greater difficulties than anyone in the protagonist group, but he carries everything on his own first, instead of thinking or trying to rely on others. Of course I know that the protagonist is socially anxious, and I am also socially anxious in reality, but the key point is that if the protagonist cannot change his character and blindly depicts the image of social terror, sooner or later it will be over. Of course, I also know that it is inappropriate for me to evaluate this novel without reading it. What if the protagonist changes in the next chapter? So I'm also looking forward to seeing what kind of tricks the protagonist can do for me. As of Chapter 472. The supporting characters are perfectly portrayed, and the protagonist is a mess. I really don't understand. Author, do you think the male protagonist's tough-minded, straight-hearted character is really lovable? From Chapter 1 to Chapter 472, the protagonist will utter some outrageous remarks from time to time. Whether it is "Your father is dead" when facing Elena from the beginning or "You are crazy" to Jasmine from time to time, it is very speechless. Yes, I know that the protagonist you set is social fear, but social fear is not this kind of social fear, right? This is a complete lack of emotional intelligence. You would only say something like "your father is dead" in that situation if you are crazy, right? This is the first poisonous point. Not everyone likes this kind of character with no emotional intelligence and no brains. Second, as I said in the first evaluation, the male protagonist is a bit too inappropriate as a human being. Except for Jasmine, he doesn't treat anyone else as a human being at all, right? The male protagonist has been trying to use teammates like Lilizi, Lin, Elena, and Xiaomi Congee from the very beginning, but using them at the beginning is using them, but you can't keep using them, right? Is Ririko good enough for the male protagonist? That means giving him everything. Although he complained, he never refused the male protagonist, but what about the male protagonist? Throw it away after using it. Whether it is Ririko or Lin, they are both good enough to the male protagonist, right? But what do you think the male protagonist's attitude is? What are you going to do with your non-active, irresponsible, and non-rejecting attitude? Even if you, the author, want to write a drama where the protagonist actually lacks emotion, you have to reconcile the contradiction a little bit, right? You can't catch that, okay? If you are not prepared in the early stage, even if you reverse in the later stage, the reversal will appear too abrupt. If it is handled well, it will be an advantage. If it is not handled well, it will be a big poison. What is the difference between him and those male protagonists in ancient times? Let me put it more seriously. You say that you don't like them, that it's just a cooperative relationship, and you have no feelings for them, but later you accept all their benefits and kick them away after using them. What does your character of being both responsible and upright mean? What's the difference between you and those scumbags? Just use them all, except for Jasmine, no one is human. The final interpretation right of this evaluation belongs to me.

It's a very good book, and it's well handled in all aspects. There are no inexplicable plots, and there are foreshadowings. But I don't know why not many people have read it. It's a highly recommended book. The author's logic skills are pretty good. If you're tired of reading novels produced by assembly lines, you might as well give this book a try.

The author's writing style is excellent, and the subject matter of this article is also relatively novel. The character's personality is well established and the personality changes are natural. What I want to say most is that I hope Jasmine will always be so cute and never stab her [pouts]. The character of this character is too similar to the female goose in a game I played. She shouldn't be too cute, okay? [Shy][shy][shy] It was too bland and made me feel like I had seen everything at a glance. I can barely pass the time without reading, but I already have better books. Let me talk about another question I have, why can Jasmine and the brave have a direct discussion and shake hands peacefully? Why does Jasmine think it would be better for her to vote for her original country? If the current country has suppressed everything, is Jasmine important? What does she have to make peace with the Empire? By the protagonist? This is my puzzle

Each character is well developed. Su Bei is really the king of resistance to pressure! Fifty thousand years of redemption is heartbreaking. The beauty within reach cannot be grasped in the palm of one's hand, and one can only watch the gems hurt themselves like glass. At the end, I also congratulate Su Bei and Jasmine! However, there are still some flaws in the ending, which can be forgiven. However, I still have to praise the author's foreshadowing throughout the entire text.

On Tomato, I think this article is very good. After getting used to reading all kinds of clichéd articles with extremely poor writing skills, it is definitely an unexpected surprise to find this book in the sea of ​​books. The characters are not likeable, but at least they are normal. They have a good feeling. I will keep up the good work.

The plot is light and compact but not tense. It feels a bit like a light novel. It's good to read for leisure. I haven't seen any weird flaws so far. I found out that there was no rating so I clicked on it after reading it.

I have to give it now... The traditional hero fights the devil, but it's different The intervention of the protagonist as an outsider opens the "second episode" of the story From living for yourself to living for the people around you, redeeming yourself while saving others, making her the light in your heart, this is the true two-way redemption! "There are no coincidences in this world. Everything is a decision of fate. I will meet you. It is destined." I don't know if it's one or more at the moment, but as far as I'm concerned, it's very comfortable for me to watch, so it doesn't matter if it's one or more, it's just good-looking~ Recently, I really like IPs like Demon King and Heroes, and the books also suit my taste. The author's writing is very good, worth reading @ a waste a (You are so rude, the position of the next dragon is mine~)

The plot is not bad, and there are both bright and dark pits. People will not be confused while watching it, and they will not directly guess the ending. It makes people interested in watching. The only bad thing is that there are too few and not enough to watch (author, please update soon!)

A good book that exceeds the upper limit of five points, and is currently in the part of ending and continuing to daily life. All reincarnations are for meeting you. My heart, body and soul are all born and exist because of you. Even if I lose all my memory and strength, I will find you at all costs. Our future does not only belong to the present, it also exists in the past and the future. The fragrance of jasmine flowers blends with the smell of green grass and sawdust, spreading throughout the space, flowing in the long river of time and destiny. Complex emotions are born from love, possessing the wisdom of a lifetime, transcending death, creating life, blending in light and darkness, freely appearing in Wherever the heart desires, it brings luck to all living beings. There is also each other in the reaction of the elements. They are at the pinnacle of martial arts. The fate of people from other worlds intersects with this world. The brave man and the devil no longer fight. The world is not afraid of external pollution, just to write about the encounter between you and me. Know each other, know each other, and love each other. The story of Jasmine and Su Bei will be passed down forever. It is not only about saving the world, but also about two people falling in love and sharing the world. Finally finished, finished with flowers