The Immortal Venerable Is Still Working Toward Retirement

The plot is pretty good, and it feels like it has a framework. The protagonist also regards the people in this world who are worthy of sincere treatment as close people. When I see Yun Qingqing being treated as a test subject, I feel that there will be a bigger situation in the future.

A very good book, worth reading! ! It tied it all at once. The author's writing style is great, and the flashback writing style is very fairy-like. The character of the protagonist really poked me. Most of the time, he is quite calm and rational, except when encountering "mission" points and accidents with people he cherishes. He has a system but does not rely on it (Bi) (The system is often on standby), he will practice hard, and the protagonist Gong will unconsciously show his concern for Shou when he meets Shou, but his scenes with the two are still a bit less, and the emotional line is still between senior brothers and ambiguity. I wish there were more, I want to 🍬🍬 The other characters are also written very well, and the characters are basically established. However, when I watched the meeting, there were too many descriptions from the younger brother's perspective. Although it was to introduce other characters, his main perspective scenes in those chapters were a bit more than the protagonist, and there was no growth scene for the younger brother. The burden of the massacre of the family felt like it was all on the protagonist. Sometimes he was too impulsive. The younger brother should have grown up in the future. It's tied all of a sudden. I really want to see the follow-up. Can the author surprise me with a sudden update? I really want to know how the protagonist changed from calm and rational in the early stage to "madness" in the later stage, the truth about the massacre and the bloodline issue, the emotional line and growth between the protagonist's attack and suffering, and what the protagonist Yun Qingqing was before he traveled through the book? The book does not seem to describe the experience before traveling through the book. The codename "Qingluan" for the mission should be related to bloodline. I really want to see the follow-up. I am itching to see the follow-up. Big cheers for the author! I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot development (*σ´∀`)σ

This book is great, highly recommended! ! ! If you don't like this book, don't give it a low score. After all, everyone's enjoyment is different! The protagonist of this book, Yun Qingqing, has a distressing "sense of sobriety in the world." He has a system, but he doesn't have the satisfaction of Long Aotian. There is no traditional leveling up to defeat monsters. This book feels like a web full of calculations and warmth. Especially like a group portrait novel, I feel that none of the characters in the book are tool people! But the protagonist is indeed the group favorite. The plot is full of tension and the characters are flesh and blood. It also has a bit of humor, which makes people's eyes brighter and brighter. Support the author greatly, come on! ! !

This novel is well written, but I don't know why the rating is so low. This time-travel novel is not like other time-travel novels, and it always feels like one person is living the life of another person. "Yun Qingqing" is really living up to Yun Qingqing. Although this article may be longer, it is indeed a novel worth waiting for. I just regret that I have now discovered that I can't read it all at once. The death of the master in battle is considered a climax of the whole novel. I couldn't help but burst into tears when I read the novel all night long (I felt sorry for the protagonist). I hope the author will work hard and not give up because of a temporary low point. Good works are worth fermenting and waiting for, so write the article quickly and hand in all the manuscripts. If the update is too slow, you will lose such a lovely fan like me [Send heart]

It's really beautiful! The feelings are really, really delicate. The more I read the back part, the more I felt sorry for the young couple [I almost cried]. I couldn't help but want to cry when I saw the warm daily scenes depicting daily life in the back. It was so well written! This book is the first one I read when I reopened Yang Persimmon, and it pulled me back into the novel circle without any warning (I had quit before). I really like this kind of long-lasting emotion! The characterization is particularly good! Recommended! I just didn't expect it wasn't over yet, I was saving up.

The description is super delicate, the writing is great, and it is a rare piece of fine grain [sending my heart] that develops the plot around Qing Wei, a serious drama, but a group portrait. Although the memory chapter has been entered very early and has not yet been written, the setting is huge, there are many characters, and the plot is very smooth and reasonable. Just like this, watching the baby Qing Wei fall and fall [face covering], the miserable baby always encounters various disasters. But everyone in the sect is very nice, and the interaction with Senior Brother Jiang is also very loving. For a while, the two of them interacted with each other as if they were a couple [shy] I felt very distressed (°᷄д°᷅) but also super emotional. I felt like I was watching Qingqi gradually transform into the beautiful, strong and miserable person in the introduction. The fighting power has not collapsed, and the supporting characters are all strong and intelligent. The writing style is very spiritual, and the plot has a sense of touch. It is very attractive and can capture the hearts of readers. I am really curious about the subsequent plot development and villain characters. The update speed is amazing. It's so amazing. How can you do it? [Shocked] Come on, I will write it according to your pace. I feel it can become a very good long story about cultivating immortals. I look forward to it [Sending my heart]

It's very good to watch and I like it, but the memories are a bit long and a bit sharp. Ji Xian, your brother, your senior brother is a very strong, very gentle, and loves you very much. He will not do anything that is not allowed by nature. If you don't see him, he will be so anxious that he will go crazy just to save you. He is really, really, really good and good.

This is a book worth recommending. Although it is not finished yet, it makes people unable to stop reading it (it took me an early morning to catch up on the latest chapter, which I can only say is worth it). The application of techniques and language is very accurate, which is very consistent with the novels about cultivating immortals. I guarantee that the correct use of words in this novel exceeds 75% of BL novels about cultivating immortals. It will be worth collecting. The character description is also very good. Each character has its own characteristics. I really like the protagonist. Especially some plots, such as being chased by a man in black robe and running in the opposite direction, really touched me, and many more. The conversations between the characters are also very coherent and not stiff, and the conversations between peers are very lively and beautiful. The plot is very, very, very colorful and interlocking. The mysterious black-robed man, the pavilion master, and the sect leader who just appeared (I have a hard time remembering the name) really attracted me, and I really want to know the follow-up content. I suggest the author to make it more complete and it will kill me [I'm full]

It's so beautiful. I'm so [almost crying]. This is a good sect in the world of immortality. It makes me feel warm when I look at my body [crying]

There are a lot of sad points, the writing is very delicate and beautiful, the image of the young fish and the image of Qingqi are particularly good, there are a lot of foreshadowings, the emotional line is okay, just a little sweeter! Sweeter! Sweeter! Say important things three times, baby Qingyi is suffering too much