After Living Like a Couch Potato, the Villain Won Himself Over

To be honest, I often can't accept the fast-paced novels (mainly because I can't accept the fast-paced novels, they always feel too rushed), but this one is very unexpected. As expected, the fried rice is even better than the cook😋 First of all, regarding the emotional line, the writing is really good and easy to follow. The main reason is that the connection and emotional changes are very well-paced. After reading about ten chapters, I can fully accept this book, and the interaction between the two is really good. The character design is quite innovative, Fengzhi's character is very gentle, and it feels like it is being purified, and everyone will still be successful in Fengzhi's strategy; Jingzhao is a tsundere (?), But it's also quite cute, ahem, mainly because this combination really makes me feel a little refreshed; the supporting characters are also well written, not flat and rigid. It is also logically reasonable. In unreasonable places, the author will tie up the plot and explain it through characters (such as the scene where Feng Zhi Yu Tian carries Jing Zhao). The expression is quite good and the direct explanation will not be too blunt, but at the same time it makes up for the loopholes in the logical details; the characters' language is also very relevant to the background, and there is no heavy modern accent, which is a plus point. The writing is very smooth, the language is very concise and the suspense is well set up, allowing the subsequent plot to maintain a sense of mystery. I think as long as there is no big crash in the future, the score will definitely be above 9⃣️ A small flaw is that if new scenes/plots are changed between chapters, it's nothing but a bit stiff. Os, it would be nice if I could open my eyes the next day and update directly to the end. Let's sort out the points that people are likely to complain about in this book. Let me first defend the characters: the rhythm of the emotional line in the early stage seems to be very unbalanced. The early stage is completely about Jingzhao's self-guided strategy. There are many scenes where the two of them banter and joke with each other on a daily basis. However, most of the book is just him pulling his own heart. It took more than 70 chapters to express his feelings directly. As a result, Fengzhi didn't understand it at all. It was very stretched. Fengzhi himself is mentally retarded (I hate you for being a slow-witted person). However, I will still express my own opinion: if you look closely at the plot, you will find that Fengzhi's attitude towards Jingzhao is completely different from others. Take the plot in the secret room as an example. Chu Zhengqing wanted to get closer to him, but he avoided him and pushed him away. In Jingzhao's case, the other party asked him to accompany and comfort him, and he agreed. The details were quite partial, and there was no sense of alienation. I don't agree with him saying that he didn't care at all. After reading about a hundred chapters, you can understand the reason why Fengzhi deliberately avoided this relationship. He didn't mean to be cold to the other person, and there was a hidden reason behind it. There won't be many spoilers here, but this part is indeed a bit bloody. When I got to more than 100 chapters, I almost thought the whole story was a single-arrow torture plot when I saw him still deliberately avoiding it. Let's talk about the shortcomings of the plot: after chapter 90, the overall narrative rhythm collapses, and the quality gap is a bit different from the first half. The plot of Tianjian and the subsequent main plot are rushed forward, and the foreshadowing and turning points are poorly done. The depiction of the emotional line in the book is brilliant, delicate and interesting, but the main plot is poorly wrapped up, and the completion level cannot keep up with the level of the emotional line. It has been updated to Chapter 113. It is not clear whether it is the end or is approaching the end. If Chapter 113 is the final chapter, the ending is on the way, and a lot of foreshadowing has been left unfinished. For example, Fengzhi's growth experience after leaving the Ying family has been left blank, and many character lines and story pits have been shelved. The overall completion level is a bit regretful.

I'm going to write so thunderous and awesome, okay, I must give it a thumbs up, I'm going to give you a pure flaw, she is the goddess of my father, brother, sister, ascetic, I'm a little restless OS, my soul has been supremely shocked, I guess this is my rightful daughter, right? I am also blessed to see such a stunning beauty, I must enjoy it very much today.

The author's writing is so awesome! I was originally a patient with severe depression. After reading it, I stopped cutting my hair and cutting my pig's trotters. I look forward to the author's update every day, just to see the happy couple. The author is the Lord Camisama of this new world! He is simply the god of the world! I want to be a loyal reader of the author, and I will kill anyone who dares to disobey you! Oh my god, it's so beautiful, and the writing is particularly awesome! My little Feng Feng! I stopped taking sleeping pills after reading this. It's so awesome! It must be praised highly! I must give my full support. There was a competition going on, but the author immediately killed the competition as soon as he appeared! This writing style is so awesome. I shared it with my best friend, os: I also let this wild boar eat fine chaff. OK, old friends, young lovers should also be happy. I feel that the author is particularly awesome, Klass. I feel that he will become a god in the world in the next step, ah! Guys, don't envy me for finding such a good book. The author is simply the god of awesome Klaas!

It's so sweet. Someone come and give me insulin. Even now, there are still some foreshadowings, which I don't understand. 1. Is Spring Mountain Guest the protagonist? (If not, why is it described that Yun specifically looks at the protagonist's fingers, or is it just a simple description) 2. Is Chu Zhengqing the reincarnation of a righteous sage (it feels very similar, but his luck is a bit contrary to heaven) 3. Are Spring Mountain Guest and that ghost the deputy CPs (I'm not outrageous, I think it's delicious when written) In fact, these are the big foreshadowings. The whole thing is very sweet, but there are too few, really very few, only about 50. The plot didn't drag on, and Master Po jumped to his death after just two jumps to relieve his anger. It's just that the ideas are inconsistent, but it's okay, and there's not a long timeline. The characters are also delicious The protagonist is kind and gentle, but it always feels a bit shabby. Like the kind of character who leads the family. Flirting without knowing. Yun☁ is arrogant, a bit cold-faced and childish. It was simply shaped by meow. Delicious!ヽ(=^･ω･^=) (The reason why I beat the protagonist is because I can't remember his name. They have always been senior brothers and junior brothers. I can't remember them! (=^‥^=))

Hahahahahaha, these two childish ghosts, Zhizhi's attitude towards life is ordinary, a feeling that it's good to be alive, and it's okay to be dead. They can suddenly speak without saying a word and have an astonishing lightness. They are particularly cute when talking to Xiaoyun! It will make you laugh out loud. The teacher's writing style also has a light lemon tea scent, which is light but not boring, like the sour and sweet lemon tea. The sour taste is because there is a feeling of a big knife behind it. I don't know why 😢. . . (Maybe it's because I've been quiet for a long time... But it feels good to live an ordinary life!) Teacher, keep up the good work! I look hard! 😄

Ahem, first of all, this is delicious without saying anything! Yes, it is shocking. If you don't read it for a day, you will feel uncomfortable. This book is so authoritative! The writing is simply authoritative and the plot is delicious. I will tell you in the most straightforward, simple, and least roundabout terms that this book is worth reading, and you will regret it if you don't. Where can you find such a book? So come and read it, and it will ensure that your lips won't drop when you read it. This book is so awesome! The long and detailed writing is simply very good! In short, it is my honor and the highest honor to come across this book. Of course, the two babies are also very cute. Here, I sincerely hope that the two babies can be happy! Surprisingly 99 Finally, I sincerely hope this book becomes popular!

When I read almost a hundred chapters, I wanted to give it a five-star review. I felt that the rating of this book could be at least 8.0 Or higher. But after the hundred chapters, the plot fell apart and started to go awry inexplicably (a really weird plot arrangement orz). It was clear that the two of them were going to express their feelings to each other and got together sweetly, and then suddenly started to live again. There are only two years left in the book. It is strange that there is no mention of Shou's poor health. Then the young couple started to say some hurtful things (the writing of this paragraph is obviously not as good as the previous one). I almost skipped reading. In fact, if this book ends at almost 100 chapters and writes some sweet extras, it may not be able to get an 8.5. This book was really good in the early stages, and it was a pleasure to read it. Shou is really salty and has a very nice personality, and Gong is also very good. He is a super brainy guy and has a mysophobia (which is really funny). He has the feeling of a shy puppy. He blushes at every turn. Self-guided strategy is really funny. It is a very novel character design. The author is very good at writing about the interaction between young lovers. The cuteness is very interesting and not boring. I really like the plot of the first hundred chapters. The young couple is sweet and super cute. If you want to read sweet stories, you can read the plots before chapter 105 and then start from chapter 116. It is really interesting. The daily sweet stories don't have big plot ups and downs, so some world views and other things are not written in detail. It's really good to pass the time.

Woo woo woo woo (crying means it is easy to part with this book but it is not a great book) The two cubs must be happy every day! The author's writing style has a plain sense of reality and a plot that is old-fashioned but the writing style is particularly delicate. Especially the part about the wreath of branches and branches made me feel so excited (Ahhh 1, don't hit me, I'm not coveting you, baby!) Even for a fickle person like me, dog food smells particularly delicious. That's right! You have to stick to the attack and control. The two babies feel less depressed after they talk about it. Cheers for the author!

This book is really amazing. I read it word for word. Yun and Xu really matched each other very well. Later I thought they were going to fall apart. I was sad for a long time. Fortunately, the ending is quite happy. There are many sentences in it that are very delicate and I like it very much. There are also many descriptions that make people laugh or cry, which are worth savoring. It's not bad, but the score is too low. It should be more than nine points, so that it is consistent with 💕 💕 💕 Finally, I wish Yunhe Xu a sweet and long life, peace and joy! 😘😘😘

I really like Xu Fengzhi! Light, gentle, sincere, lazy, and so cute!!! Gong is a bit arrogant, but he really loves Fengzhi. The most important thing is that the teacher's writing style is excellent, and the characters are very real and interesting. There are no deliberate plots or abrupt plots or emotions, only the sweet encounter and relationship between the two... Judging from the current plot, the story will never be monotonous, and there is a lot of foreshadowing and suspense buried in it. Looking forward to it!