Wild History Led Me Astray

Well, first of all, the setting is good, the writing is good, the plot is good and the description is delicate, but I would like to make a few suggestions. The first one is that there are a little too many descriptions. DaDa's writing style is very good, but I feel that DaDa used to write short stories or usually like to write some fan fiction, so the descriptions in many places can actually be omitted, and they are even a little repetitive (for example, the description of the benevolence of the doctor where I saved people is two consecutive pages). Some people think that the writing is good, but too much description will make you feel tired after repeated reading. I think it can be cut down a little, simpler, and occasionally a profound sentence is the icing on the cake (for example, the defective product is not that you can go back every time you run away, which really left a deep impression). If there are too many, it will be a little boring. The second problem is the writing style (not that the writing style is not good). In fact, when it comes to promoting the plot and writing environment, the description is still very coherent, but when it comes to character description, it becomes discontinuous. Short sentences are described. I personally think that short sentences are too much. They can be thrown out at the right time to make Boruto's eyes shine, but stacking them together will make it a little tired and embarrassing. End of suggestion. The setting of this article is really attractive to me. The plot is okay, the character description is also first-rate and delicate, and the writing style is still very good. Then I beg for the crematorium. Well, I was very angry after reading this in the early stage. Although I feel regretful after reading it and the fatalism pointed out so far, the crematorium is indispensable, but it can be more ruthless, yes. In short, although there are a few problems, they are completely flawless. I don't recommend these friends to pursue it. (These suggestions are just personal opinions. Don't scold me. You are right.)

Very well written! I personally like the character of Shen Tangsong, because he knows his own future destiny, but is still willing to get involved in saving others, even strangers, and come into contact with the known but confusing fate with inexplicable sadness. I also like the previous description of Shen. The previous description of him gave me the feeling that he was sick. It was a psychological and spiritual illness. He was so lonely. It is a kind of sadness about the future and the past. For the future, it may be the known and inexplicable story line. For the past, it is alone in this time and space. The various traces of the past life are inconsistent with the present. It may not be called it, or he is a little trance. (It's just some personal understanding, and then I beg the author to write it down. I really want to read it, and pray not to stop updating and give up. Please, I want to read it [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart])

It's a really, really nice book. I read some comments before and thought it was too descriptive. I think it's a personal problem, because I really, really like these descriptions, they are very delicate, and I can especially feel Shen's powerlessness and confusion. Especially the doctor's benevolence. I read those chapters yesterday, and these four words are all in my mind today. I can't help crying every time I think about it. I am really moved by Shen's benevolence. As well as the description of the scenery in the mountains, I really felt like an epiphany at that time: The worries I have every day are just because I have trapped myself and the road is narrow. At that time, I directly thought of the sentence "Let them go to a spacious place, live happily, and live a reasonable life." The plot arrangement is also very interesting. I especially like reading books that pay attention to details. But many times, the plots of these books seem draggy due to their descriptions, making it difficult for me to keep reading. Just like Jiangnan's "Kyushu Piaomiao Lu" that I watched recently. I really liked it, but because I felt that the plot was very sparse and scattered, it was difficult to watch it coherently. I just watched it intermittently. There are very few updates to this book at the moment, but the plot is still very good, and the assassination before returning to Beijing is well arranged. To be honest, in the past two years, I have watched ancient movies, and they rarely describe the protagonist's reaction when he sees a pile of corpses for the first time. The arrangement here is really good, and the description is particularly immersive. I can really imagine the scene of fighting outside. Especially the "cursing" was really well written and very real. It suddenly made me realize that in a real fight, there would be yelling and screaming, and it was by no means a so-called scene with only the sound of weapons clashing. It's too late, I'll write it here first, and I'll add it when I have time. I am very much looking forward to the development of the plot in the future. The "I regret it" is really deeply imprinted in my mind. The author should update it quickly. I will definitely follow it to the end. After the exam, I finally have time to comment. Some time ago, I saved a lot of chapters but didn't read them, and I just finished them. I probably read the reviews of this book, and most readers found it very interesting. The controversial points are actually the so-called "slow plot advancement" and "too much attention to detail". I want to say that if you are attracted by the plot in the introduction, or if you treat this book as an online article, you will indeed be a little disappointed. Because so far, there is no shadow of the plot introduced in the introduction, and there is no particularly attractive "cooling point". But I feel that this book can help people learn something, and it should not be treated as just an online article. Shen's character makes people feel very comfortable. I like it very much and can't help but imitate him. I think he is very good at living and living a happy life. He grows flowers, and coincidentally, I will also start buying flowers and growing them from the last day of 2025. The roses have been planted in the water for more than a month. Although the flowers have withered, they have grown many leaves. I feel happy every day when I see them. He accepts the dull and repetitive life, and I can even feel a little freedom from it. I used to long for a life with different challenges every day. But my brother told me that you can't be like that every day in your life, otherwise you will be very tired. Perhaps only repetition day after day, coupled with occasional adventures, is the norm and the essence of life. I am still a person who pursues the so-called immortality, but as I grow older, I also begin to realize that immortality must endure the unbearable loneliness of ordinary people. What kind of mentality can we face immortality? It is probably peaceful, calm, able to accept everything, and able to enjoy the repetition day after day. I remember a passage about Shen's first official visit to the palace to meet the emperor and accept a reward. He walked out of the palace gate and saw Song Zhao waiting for him. The description was quite good. The next day after reading it, I began to slowly calm down my temper (I am usually a very irritable person who explodes at the slightest moment). … There are so many details like this that you can think about them while looking at them. The author's writing is very good. At least so far, such ancient scenes did not make me feel like I was in a drama. I recommend this book again and thank the author for such a good work. Finally, I saw that the author would say "randomly written" at the end of almost every chapter. I hope the author will not belittle himself. A low rating may make people sad, but there are many, many people who really like this book.

This book is an ancient material that I quite like. The author vividly displays the confusion and helplessness of Xiao Shen as a modern person who traveled to ancient times. The characters are delicately and plumply drawn, and the characters are full of vitality. Xiao Shen is kind and tenacious. He is worried about his own destiny, but also wants to try his best to change and save more people. This can be seen from Xiao Shen's willingness to go down the mountain to save the plague. I don't believe it when you say you scrawled it. Xiao Shen was forced to participate in the DPRK and was helpless. He just wanted to live a stable life, but he was pushed forward by reality. I am very interested. The author will update soon! !

Shen Tangsong really has the feeling of a cold young man. I like this protagonist very much. It's a bit pitiful that he feels out of place in this world. There seems to be a layer of barrier between him and others. After saving Xiao and Song, he is no longer the same as before, and he has no ability to settle down in ancient times. It feels like he is being led by others.

Well, yes, I like this character very much. There is no twists and turns or hesitation in the heart. He is an ordinary person pushed by fate. From the top of the mountain to the deep palace, every step is beyond his expectation. Every character is very vivid. I can feel it from the writing in just a few chapters. Moreover, the author's writing is really very good, and the wonderful writing cannot be overstated. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot and hope not to be demoted. The introduction should indicate imprisonment. I am also looking forward to the follow-up

I can't get enough of it, I really can't get enough of it. I like the calm and calm demeanor of the protagonist. With the benevolence of a doctor, no matter what the future holds, he only saves the present. He has the ability and ability to do his best. Life in the mountains is very beautiful. After coming down from the mountain, the emperor and the prime minister showed the considerations and calculations of being an official. It was a bit uncomfortable [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]. The introduction was compulsory, and it felt like ungratefulness [rolled eyes] [rolled eyes] [rolled eyes]

Wow, it's so beautiful, the writing is super good, and it's so eloquent that I couldn't stop reading it during the finals week [crying]. The description of the environment is very clever. Basically, every part has the effect of hinting at the character's emotions or promoting the following. The technique should be mostly white description, which is very labor-intensive. However, it is objective and concise, allowing readers to experience it for themselves and better grasp the subtle sense of plausibility, which not only conveys the author's intention, but also allows readers to have their own unique understanding. The plot is also very attractive. I read it at the first glance. This is one of my criteria for judging the quality of a book. A good author will grasp the rhythm of the plot and take into account the reader's reading mentality and tiredness. In addition, the cultural knowledge in the books is relatively close to reality. There may be fiction, but it does not hinder it. Moreover, the ancient Chinese characters, semi-vernacular expression habits, etc. Perfectly fit the context and character creation, and are natural and smooth, without causing the abrupt feeling of "deliberately ancient Chinese" or "pure vernacular". From these aspects, the author undoubtedly put a lot of effort into writing this book, but I discovered it too quickly. I hope the author will update it more. Teacher, although I have praised your writing style, don't show off your skills. The plot must keep up. If you keep describing the scenery, it will easily pass in one chapter. If there is no suspense, it is easy to lose the desire to follow up. Teacher, you must grasp the rhythm.

Holy shit, how can such a good article be written? It's rare to find such a good article on Tomato. It's no exaggeration to say that the plot is really good, very novel, the plots are interlocking, and it's very interesting. The writing is also very good, and the writing style is also very good. I hope the author will update it soon. It's also worthy of praise. The writing style is really good, and the plot is also super awesome. You must come and take a look. I really recommend it. I hope the author will treat Xiao Shen well and not be too cruel. Xiao Shen is still too kind.

I was attracted by the brief introduction and plot. The writing is good, and the writing style is smooth and flowing. It was very interesting in the early stage, but later on I felt that the plot began to deviate (?) The plot was too long and it was a bit tiring to watch. In the later stage, I felt that the visual focus was not on the protagonist. It's on. It's progressing very slowly. When I saw the plot being pulled back, I lost my enthusiasm a bit. Maybe the length setting of short and medium novels would be more appropriate, but it is still a very good article. The sense of fate and emotional drama between the two protagonists is very well written.