Warhammer: The Astartes Are All Fighting Over My Rations

This book is full of green-skinned joy, and has been recognized by the Cauldron Brotherhood, praised by machine souls, and blessed by the Lord of Joy. I'm thinking the author is a greenskin Personal rating: waaaaagh!

To be honest, the writing is indeed good. After all, in the era of 40K, it is really novel to write such a theme when the lower-level soldiers do not eat the rations of dogs. However, I would like to say first that it should not be unfinished or broken. After all, the theme and plot are really novel...

There is also a lovely Krieger heroine, which is a bonus. I mean, can you change the word "he" next to the male character? It's very uncomfortable. Don't write the follow-up of the male protagonist like this. There is almost no highlight. It has a feeling of being useless, montage and funny, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

Very nice! Whether it is Cloud Warhammer or real Warhammer, I feel very novel after reading it. 4K is too cruel, it's time to give this cruel world the warmth of delicious food

It's okay, but the protagonist used to be a good cook and now he can still be in a daze while cooking. If a seriously injured person is about to die and is not treated with food, the protagonist will first speak with emotion and then feed him with food. And cook more

The writing is quite good, but there are only two shortcomings: the plot is too slow, and the second thing is not to accept the harem. My scalp went numb while watching it.

The author talked about himself, Warhammer. I also like to read some Warhammer here and there. It fits the setting of continuous war. It only has more than 50 chapters. Take your time and read it. At least the details are described very delicately.

It looks good. As a Yunchui Hammer, I don't know much about Warhammer's settings, but this one looks good.

The protagonist eats both humans and machines, cooking for people and cooking for machines, a bit like a combination of a living saint and the European Messiah. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

I hope you can give me some evaluation suggestions. Thank you for the new author [adoration][adoration][adoration] If there is anything you want to eat, I will try to write it down. It would be better if you have special dishes over there.