Harry Potter: The Marauders' Era, and I've Become the Chosen One?!

The writing is good and looks good. James doesn't like Lily, that's okay. (Die Jia, I have no ill feelings toward Lily, but when I read James fanfics, I don't like to write about James liking Lily) Severus can also join in hehehehe but if he likes Lily forget it, friendship is good too... I like the male guests to be jealous. The emotional line is very easy to touch. Afterword: I really like Shura Field, the writing is very natural. Although the heroine is very slow, I don't think she is a silly and sweet person. I also feel that the characters in it are not OOC and will not be very deliberately portrayed. For example, James (I think many people portray James in a straight-forward manner... I don't feel the charm). The prohibition of rottenness and male hygiene are really treasures.

Mark: It's okay, but I didn't feel that the heroine was familiar with the plot. It felt like an immersive one. For example, she knew that the Defense Against the Dark Arts professor's kettle contained a compound potion, but she thought it was because of the professor's hobby of drinking it? Later on, the heroine got a Horcrux and left him alone. I don't know why, and then I didn't watch it much.

Why does it smell so good... [Send heart] Goddess, I love you Esta is a sweet-smelling and soft wooden heartthrob [Sending Hearts] The emotional line is very clear and well-organized. Except for falling in love at first sight, others don't know that they like Esta in the first grade. This is really in line with the simple nature of the child. I especially love Jamie's food. If you like hot dogs, just go for it [send a heart] It doesn't feel OOC at all. In my mind, the three members of the plunder team are like this. Jamie, who becomes slimy, bold and passionate when he likes someone, Siz, who is a bit tsundere, childhood sweetheart, and jealous of both sides, and Lemmy, who is always gentle and tolerant, and takes the back of two noisy friends. They are completely rare high-quality HP novels. Who knows, I laughed while reading... The interaction between the four people is so cute [send heart] There are also Dirk, Remy, Caradoc, Rabastan, and Edgar, everyone is more adorable than ever [Send heart] I haven't seen Rabastan's love line yet, but the confrontation team is probably also very delicious [Love] Say it again, goddess, I love you [send heart]

Super pretty! The writing is great, how could it be so delicious? Raiders Raiders I love you! Jamie is also very cute, cute and reassuring... Can the author surprise me by suddenly updating a hundred chapters? [Sending Hearts]

I'm here to make up for it, too. This article feels like a very sweet one to me. I don't think there are any knives in this article. The characters are very well created. James is a straight-up puppy and Sirius is quite innocent. Each of the characters in Shen Shen does not have emotions for no reason. They are not added just because they want to write heartthrobs. It seems that they should be like Estan. I like this and it makes me feel that they are very real. Shen Shen has many night outing plots and every one of them is delicious 😋 Ling Shen Shen Shen Shen wrote more about James and Sirius in the whole article. Compared to them, the other boys wrote less, but the author said it in the introduction, so it's not a big problem. Regarding the others, I prefer Dirk. The two of them are simply redemption literature🥰I eat eat eat Make Shen Shen Shen look particularly beautiful! ! ! ! ! !

The teacher's writing is very good, and the writing method is also very novel. He will tell us things that the protagonist does not know from the perspective of others, making the story more complete. The format of the diary is also very good, with a strong sense of being alive. The heroine is cute, but there is absolutely no emotion. Remus was stunned by the kiss, and he said it was an "encouragement kiss". I am curious about other people's reactions after knowing that the heroine is cheating on her relatives. All in all, it's very nice, but it's too short. I need to work harder to write.

In fact, I still like this way of writing very much. This kind of narrative writing is very comfortable for me and I won't understand it. I feel like those who haven't read the original work can probably understand it. (After all, this is the pro era.) I just read the original work two or three times without studying it in detail. The teacher's writing is very beautiful! Hope to continue to update! At present, I am still very optimistic about you [shy] and I am willing to give you all my three free gifts every day [cool]

It's beautiful and the description is detailed (the author even wrote a comment [blowing kiss]). Highly recommended! ! I hope the author can update more [laughs]

OK, it looks cute from the front, cute from the back, and cute from the side! Nice! ! ! !

So pretty!!!! Esta is so cute... Baby, you are a pure natural wood,,, so beautiful, I love watching it! The interaction with James is also very cute