Harry Potter Fanfiction: Beneath the Beech Tree

This article really touched my heart! I couldn't stop watching it in one sitting, the plot was smooth and natural, the pace was just right, and it didn't drag at all. The character of the heroine is really awesome. She is independent, sober and has her own light. She is not dependent on anyone else. She is very charming. The relationship between her and Sirius is written delicately and touchingly. From the interaction to the heartbeat, it is very real. The sugar content is just right, sweet but not greasy. The writing style of Dada is really good, and it fills the atmosphere of the family generation. Thank you Dada for bringing such a good story! 😘

Very cute, I especially like Melissa. She is the character of the heroine that I like, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also sweet. The only shortcoming may be that it is a bit short, but the author's writing style is very good, very smooth, and the partial description, um, can be described as neat and graceful. It can be said that the plot has developed very smoothly up to now, and the transition of the plot is very natural. I also like the heroine's care or attitude towards her family. I don't know how to describe it, but I really like the way of getting along in this family atmosphere. I don't know if the heroine will have any foreshadowing about her life experience. If so, I'm looking forward to what form it will be shown in. The portrayal of the characters of the parent generation should be OK (I prefer to leave some room for it in my personal evaluation). I think the interaction with the supporting characters is also lively. After all, everyone's characters are different. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development.

The writing is not bad, the writing style is okay, but not many people read it. All the people who died in the original work are still alive, but the original characters and people in Beech Village are all dead, including the adoptive father and mother. I feel a little helpless. I had a premonition when I saw this group of warm people before, but I didn't expect it to come true. Alas... It's a short article and the pace is fast. There is a highlight in the later extra chapter, which is the casting of Marlene McKinnon for Remus Larlan. Please note that the extra chapter has a rough ending. You can watch it or not.

The way Sirius behaves when he first enters school and hasn't faded out of the Black family is so well written! The character stood up instantly! It can be regarded as a well-written story about Sirius. The writing is super good! The heroine gets along very warmly with the people in the village. When she encounters setbacks and challenges, she reads the tissues one by one and uses them. The author pays me a lot for the tissues~ The number of words is too few. If I write 1 million words, I will keep chasing after updates! I forgot to mention it, and the heroine has her own main plot, which is not abrupt at all!! The squib community to alchemy are all reflections of the heroine's growth. In the end, he also saved the original Sirius, although only he remembered it.

The plot is still okay, and the progress is very fast, but sometimes there are many typos in the names, and the end of the third volume of the extra chapter is a bit rushed. Overall, it is quite interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard and produce higher quality articles, come on💪!

I really like it. The characters are all very well created. I particularly like the heroine. She is sober and courageous. She always knows what she wants. The emotional line with Sirius is also very natural and very sweet. And I really like the extras, I made up for every regret, I really like it. I hope you won't be sad because of the traffic. This is really a good book. I hope to continue to follow the book 😘😘🥰🥰🥰

Except that I don't quite understand the meaning of asking people in small towns to receive box lunches, this article is quite good. Although I vaguely expected that there might be a plot kill, I didn't expect it to happen. I foreshadowed that the people in the town were all squibs, and later found a way to restore magic. I thought there was some foreshadowing, but in the next chapter... 🤦 I think this is also a thorn in Melissa's heart that will never be removed.

I feel that this article is a relatively heart-warming type, that is, I felt really sad when I saw the heroine's family members die. I thought they would all live happily together in the small town. . The author writes very well about interpersonal relationships and emotions. I really felt for the heroine when I saw them die. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are also sweet! It just felt a little short. When I realized it, I had already finished watching TT

Forgot, it looks pretty good overall.

Good-looking, more everyday