[Harry Potter] May I Be a Star, and You the Moon

It's rare to see CP Regulus on Tomato, but this is a group portrait article that favors Ravenclaw. The heroine's character is also what I like, so I'll give it a five-star review to support it. I have read about halfway through it now, and I can see that the author has his own insights into the characters of the original work. The writing style is natural and smooth, and I won't find it boring if I read it on a daily basis. Maybe it's because I am a stickler for details, and this kind of long-running plot is more realistic. Anyway, I hope the author can continue to finish this story, come on!

The author's writing style is very good, the emotions are very delicate, the article is very comfortable to read, and the plot is not bad. I can give it five stars. However, there are a lot of foreshadowings about sadism in the later chapters. It is like a knife floating above the head, as if it is about to fall at any time. And because these foreshadowings will follow the occurrence of some events, I feel that when I read the article, I am always shrouded in the shadow of things that may happen but have not happened yet, which is not very comfortable. Personally, I don't like to read abuse articles, so I feel uncomfortable when reading the article. I give it a personal rating of 4 stars. I think if you can accept it, then this article is still highly recommended.

It's also so well written!!!!! The author must keep updating! I'm back from school and will continue reading next week!!!!!!!!!!!! At first, I saw it in a post on Yes, but someone recommended it and said it was very good^ω^. I read it with the intention of giving it a try, but the more I read, the more I became obsessed with it!!!!!!!!! Mainly because the writing is very delicate!!!! Very touching! It's also very empathetic! Wow wow wow wow, this is really well written! 😘👍👍👍👍👍👍😋Please forgive me, I am really at a loss for words (›´ω`‹)🌹I wish the author a happy day and all the best! ٩(๑^O^๑)۶

The author writes very well, with delicate writing style and rich emotions. But the recent plot is too sad. Now the main CP and deputy CP are both in BE state, and the other supporting characters except Lily and James are all in BE state. They are all in a sad state 🥺. Oh my god, I'm going crazy. It's so cruel that my heart aches 😢. Please, it must be he in the end. I hope that the heroine and the gentle Regulus can have a good ending in the end. I hope that everyone can have a good ending in the end.

Come on! The author must keep updating! After following it all the way, I still really like the author's portrayal of the family generation. It can be seen that he has carefully checked the information and tried hard to adhere to the original work while also having his own little creativity. The current plot is more daily, and most of the plot is about the protagonist's research, life and a little adventure. But I feel that as time progresses and Voldemort's power rises, there should be more intense conflict plots (I'm curious how the BE line and the HE line will be dually opened) The author's stories are also very cute. Sometimes he even draws illustrations, which shows that he puts a lot of thought into it! I blindly guessed whether the author was xntx, and I felt that it was beautiful when he wrote about doing scientific research and experiments, hahaha

Write a book review to encourage it. It would be best if my review can bring you some motivation. I've been bored these past two days, so I downloaded Tomato again and took a look, and casually clicked on this new HP fanfic, which is still a new author. I originally thought it was a very common plot of a time-traveling girl saving everything, but there were some parts that surprised me. Although the narrative pace may not be fast and refreshing enough, it can be seen that the author is a senior Hamburg fan. The descriptions in many places are not superficial and stereotyped, but put forward some more macro thoughts. Although there is not much ink, the white space may be a more suitable tone for this fanfic that focuses on growth. Anyway, please keep writing.

I give myself five stars as a reward for my perseverance in persevering until now. Let me review it: The relationship development in this article is very slow. The male and female protagonists only get together when the heroine is in fifth grade (Selina is 16 and Regulus is 15). They had known each other for seven years at this point. And after getting together, Selina has always been the dominant party in the relationship, and will tease Regulus from time to time - I'm sorry, I really like the sister-dog flavor. This is purely a personal preference, so I apologize for triggering the situation. Because the early plot is relatively ordinary, it may give people the illusion that "this is a daily sweet pet article"... But what I want to say is that from the end of Selina's fifth grade to her graduation from seventh grade, due to Voldemort's power, the narrative rhythm and storyline will enter a tense state - including the love between Regulus and the heroine (yes, a warning in advance: they will break up for a period of time.), And the friendship between Sirius and the heroine (they will go through a period that is not too short, and the relationship is almost broken) Regarding the dual ending: Although this article is very vague, I have encountered several readers asking me why I wrote the ending of the original novel. Flow-saving version: The be line is the ending of the original work. It is about the helplessness and despair of "trying your best to save many people, but only the people you love most" when faced with the obstacles of fate. The he line is "if there is a miracle" and is linked to the be line. It is a gentle, fairy-tale ending that I hope can be given to all generations of protesters. Detailed version: The he line I wrote is to make up for the regrets of the original work. All characters will get a better fairy tale ending (maybe except Voldemort... I really don't know how to write a fairy tale ending for him, maybe he doesn't need it). However, I actually feel that without some "miracles" that I deliberately created, the story would indeed develop towards the original work - maybe not in the same way, but in the face of war, it is almost impossible for everyone to survive. The dust of the times falls on everyone like a big mountain. In that case, the tragedy seemed more "natural" - not because I wanted to torture, but because that era itself did not give people the opportunity for perfection. The male and female protagonists have always understood and loved each other even in the BE line, but there are a lot of things between them that are caused by the system/war. This sense of fate that comes from a combination of circumstances is closer to my understanding of that era: It's not that no one is working hard, but that there are some things that cannot be overcome by the love of two people alone. Maybe the resistance and efforts of this generation are tragic and "meaningless", but they will leave the seeds of hope for the next generation... So in the final analysis, the BE line says "it will happen with a high probability", and the HE line says "if there is a miracle". I think there is actually no contradiction between the two. Without the reality of be as a basis, he's miracle would seem too frivolous; without he's miracle as a comparison, be would be too cruel... I can't bear it either.

I feel that this book should be the most realistic, sincere and touching article among HP fans that I have ever read. The depictions of friendship, family and love are very detailed, real and vivid, and the image creation of each character is dynamic. They make me feel that these things are really happening in another world. I really like this book and hope that it can be updated 😳 (because I am about to start school, so if I don't read it anymore, I will stop reading after school starts 🥺)

It's really good-looking and I've already tied it!!! Great support, author✊, and I'm really looking forward to the follow-up!

It's really beautiful. I want more.