Harry Potter: An Obscurus Lives Inside Me

I saw Chapter 116. This is a very good HP fanfic. The protagonist has been growing and improving. Currently, there is no ambiguity or cp direction. The protagonist is obsessed with magic and becoming stronger. The only thing that makes me relieved is that the protagonist is not as disgusting as the introduction. Dumbledore and other professors are relatively good to the protagonist, Snake Pu Lili's attitude toward the protagonist is much better than at the beginning, but the protagonist's daily life, both at the beginning and now, gave me a very lonely and helpless feeling. However, the feeling of not being accepted and excluded when I first entered school basically disappeared in the later years. Overall, this is a very good book! Big cheers for the author! 💕💕 (I really recommend the author to change the introduction a lot, because when I first saw this book, I stopped reading it because of the introduction. I read it later after seeing others recommend it. The introduction really gives people the feeling that the protagonist is rejected by everyone, and is not trusted and recognized. It will be more uncomfortable to read...)

The book is quite interesting. The author may not be familiar with the Harry Potter book, because there are many details in it that are inconsistent with the original book.

The rest is okay, but the Obscurus is a bit too weak. How can an Obscurus struggle to hit a student? The strength of this thing is considered by Grindelwald to have the potential to kill Dumbledore. In other words, as long as the Obscurus can reach adulthood, it can indeed be compared with Dumbledore, the ceiling of the magic world. Even if the protagonist is under age, he should not be so weak. If the Obscurus is so weak, then the Obscurus will not change the color of the magic world. As the protagonist, the Obscurus, the intensity of the magic he casts at random cannot be endured by ordinary adult wizards. His starting standard should be positioned as a dean-level professor. Only dean-level professors can defeat or trap the protagonist with their experience and knowledge. The other characters should theoretically be novices to the protagonist.

I'm going to put my armor first, maybe because I've read too many AI books recently, and I'm already at a loss for words. I'm sorry if I made a misjudgment. But when I really read it, I can feel that it feels a bit edited by AI, with many unnecessary turns, such as "..., It's not..., It's... But..." And many times the same chapter has many similar sentence patterns that AI likes to use. In one chapter, "but..." Is even used several times in a row without more than three paragraphs. I have no objection to AI writing or assisted writing. I don't think this is a bad thing. The tools are used to assist, not to mention the books are free to read, but I personally am not very comfortable with this kind of AI. Of course, maybe it's just that the author's choice of words and sentences is purely in this style, which is my misjudgment. And overall, apart from this point, it is actually of a completely good level, so I give it 4 stars. After all, this style is a bit uncomfortable for me personally. Deducting this 1 star is just my personal perception.

The plot of the first grade is too monotonous, and the mastermind behind the scenes can be seen at a glance. Even the main character can be tricked. The self-destruction of Lao Deng in the later part is also inexplicable. It is stupid to eat energy to inflate oneself. The second grade is full of loopholes. Lily practices magic at home, the Care of Magical Creatures class started in the second grade, and the previous plot of the protagonist beating the prefect is also inexplicable. The author's writing is okay, and the plot arrangement is a bit random.

Yes, there are occasional twists and turns in the past that are strange. For example, in the past, I said not to let myself stand out too much for fear of attracting danger. Later, I said it didn't matter after I entered school for a long time. But there may have been a few days in the middle, and my thoughts may have changed. It's just that there is no foreshadowing in the middle, which makes people feel strange, but the plot in the end is still very good.

It's really a pity that it's rare to see a non-CP novel with a unique layout and not about Long Aotian. However, the plot summary provided by the author in fragments can already predict that Caius will be regarded as the core plot for a long time. In this way, even if he insists on writing, readers will slowly lose, the data will be difficult to improve, and it will inevitably end in a sloppy manner. I was attracted by the synopsis of Hogwarts at first, but now that I have read it, I still feel that my expectations have been disappointed. If the next dozens of chapters are all about Caius, I will give up reading...

The protagonist is controllable! The whole text does not deliberately criticize any character! The reading experience is quite comfortable. I didn't want to click in when I saw the rating, but Shuhuang chose to give it a try. It was surprisingly good! The overall logic is clear, and there is no choice to blindly follow the plot. The protagonist's personal growth line and story line are independent and complete, but they do not break away from the whole. The entire integration cycle is gradual. It is a good book that was delayed by ratings. I look forward to the follow-up plot!

Like. The beginning is a bit like a flashback, and the writing is very good.

In any case, a protagonist and three views who are completely indifferent to bullying and say that the bullied also have problems persuade him to quit.