What the Heck? I Became the King of Dimwits at Hogwarts

This book is written by a novice author at first glance. [Thinking] The subject matter is very novel. I feel that the content in the book can be written in more detail [Like]. For example, the Sorting Hat only describes one kind of house. I feel that more can be added, such as Badger House and Snake House, to express it directly. [Thinking] I feel that it is a bit too single. It is too direct to put it simply, and then I personally want to complain. For one thing, the protagonists are all reborn at the age of 20, and they feel a bit childlike (a little too innocent), and this is a story about HP mixed with Fate, and sometimes there are some inexplicable references to other stories mixed in. [Thinking] I am now reading Chapter 14 and then I looked at the table of contents, and I feel that it is a bit like a story about a male protagonist (it feels like... Whatever the protagonist wants to do, there is nothing he can't do. It feels a bit too easy [laughs awkwardly]). What I wrote now makes me feel that the protagonist is one of the chess pieces arranged by Dumbledore. Let me summarize, if you are just starting to read fanfiction, you can take a look, it is quite interesting. If you are an old bookworm, it depends on your personal preference. The author did not clearly write out the relationship between the male protagonist and the male protagonist. How deep is my understanding of HP [Thinking], and then I feel that the character of the male protagonist is a bit complicated. The male protagonist is kind-hearted and can even be said to be a bit like a saint, or he does not want to cause trouble, and at the same time he has a little ambition of his own (because of this point, I feel that the process of the Sorting Hat can be written more carefully)... I feel that this author has quite a lot of potential, give me a five-star wish! I also hope the author can write better content. [Love][love][love]

It is obvious that this is a book written by a new author. The pace of the article is bland and the person-person changes are confusing, but the content is well thought out. I think it's a bit of a running account, so I can read it to kill time. Encouragement~[love]

The writing at the beginning is okay, but the title is a scam. I want to watch The King of Silly Hair.

It's well written, but the title is a bit deceptive.

Author, this book is very similar to the way I used to write a diary. I write down what I did every day and what I did again. Then I go to bed, have breakfast in the morning, have lunch in class, have dinner in class and then go to bed.

Damn title scam 😡😡😡 It seems that I have to control you well😀😀😀

Will the protagonist become stupid King Mao in the future? Just become a girl or a boy [laughing]

It's still good. Can you make the male protagonist a little boy and girl?

It's nice to read. I really like this type of book.

Very nice, I don't usually comment on it