Harry Potter: I Started Signing In at Diagon Alley

This kind of disastrous defeat has annoyed many book friends, and it is a pity that it received negative reviews. There are some conflicts between the early logic and the final balance of combat power. The author is relatively familiar with HP's various world views and details. Overall, it is an excellent work. I read it in one sitting. I would like to mention some personal opinions. The first is the change to the characters in the original work. The protagonist being weakened by the soul setting is still a very good change. After all, the protagonist must be highlighted. It is understandable that the change in the world view has led to the reduction of the Weasley family's role. However, there are still some flaws in the strengthening of Cedric, the disappearance of Neville, the weakening of Dumbledore, the strengthening of Black, and the fluctuation of Voldemort's combat power. The plot I think the biggest problem is that the setting of Voldemort's combat power is too unstable. How can Blake defeat Voldemort when he can't even face the Dementors? If the protagonist is really set to be invincible and can defeat Voldemort every time, why would he sit back and watch the sacrifices of Aurors and the Order of the Phoenix? It feels that the setting is a bit far-fetched by only using tricks and tactics. Also, the setting of Grindelwald turns this charming character into a tool man. These are my opinions, and these issues cannot overshadow the fact that this is an excellent piece of work. Come on, author, I'm really looking forward to the next work.

It can be considered a relatively good one among HP fans. It neither praises Harry nor the old naughty boy, but also shows the ambitions of cheaters in a relatively normal way. It's just that the hang-up is a bit fierce, and the strength increases too fast, so we can only speed up the completion.

Compared with the happy ending of other books, this book gave me great shock and expectations. The ending was tragic: the betrayal of the giants, the defeat of the Death Eaters, the counterattack of the Aurors and Hogwarts students, the last support of the centaurs, the order of the Phoenix was almost dead, and finally Voldemort died in a dramatic way that was closest to success. Dumbledore and Grindelwald also died together in the final battle. Snape carried out the double agent to the end and played a decisive role in the end, but he also died under Voldemort's dying counterattack. Unfortunately, he did not see those eyes of Lily clearly before losing consciousness. The whole story is full of regrets, but also a foreshadowing and expectation for the new era.

It's a very interesting book, and it's starting to burn my brain. No, no, it's starting to get ugly. Many people feel like it's a fighting scene for the sake of fighting. Write three or four chapters. The main plot is fragmented and there is nothing to continue 🤦

The plot of choosing a magic wand in the early stage was a bit too deliberate, destroying the perfection of the protagonist. The plot later became much gentler. Despite its failures, it left some impression on me. Based on my personal taste: In Tomato, this book surpasses at least 70% of the authors.

The content is good, but if you have read the original work, I feel that the sense of tearing is a bit strong. The protagonist's scheming seems too deep. He couldn't be so sophisticated in anything he did in his previous life. Furthermore, I felt that there was a bit too much self-created content in this book, which deviated a bit from the framework of the Harry Potter world in my mind. But the author's imagination is indeed rich. Overall, this book is not recommended for those who have not read the original work, otherwise you will feel that it is a completely different story when you read the original work in the future. However, this book is really good and I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

This book is not bad! Time travel, system, male protagonist, no cp, main career, fan fiction. Some of the settings are novel, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The male protagonist is elegant and gentle, smart, calm and decisive, studious and hard-working, and powerful. Great, keep up the good work^O^~

To be honest, this is definitely a good Harry Potter book. The protagonist is strong and sober. The lack of a female protagonist also makes this book more of a career novel.

No CP + Cheating + New Plot + The main character was introduced in Harry Potter's third year of school. The system does not have a strong sense of existence, only the first few chapters, the protagonist finally becomes the savior, Dumbledore and Grindelwald should be reconciled in the end, emmm, they don't have many emotional lines... It's worth watching!!! Recommended⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💕👍👍٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶

This is the most valuable HP book that I have ever read, it is well-documented, not pretentious, and does not go off topic. I am very lucky to have encountered it. It is fluent and logical, with rigorous logic and unique writing. It is one of the best works among the best. It deserves 9.3 Or above. I hope that more people will see it if the score increases. Highly recommended to those who like the original work.