Hogwarts: Hit with the Avada Kedavra on Day One

A very good Harry Potter fan novel. This is probably one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. It has a story and logic, and judging from the author's current situation, it's very possible to write a happy ending. I personally think it's good. After all, there are a lot of twists and turns in the original work, such as Sirius, Snape, Dumbledore, one of the twins, Lupin, and Tonks all died. I saw someone saying that Ron was not worthy of Hermione in the original book 🤦 🤦 🤦 Actually, everyone may have been misled by the actor in the movie. In fact, Hermione is not good-looking in the book, she is probably above average, let alone beautiful at the Triwizard Ball. If a girl dresses up well, she will not be too bad. In the book, there are probably three most beautiful ones. The first one is French Hibiscus. She has Veela blood and is the top one. The second one should be Qiuzhang, the elegant beauty of the East. The third one should be Ginny. Ginny may be the school beauty of Hogwarts. After all, in the book, Malfoy hates the Weasley family so much that he scolds them all day long. Even he said that Ginny is beautiful. I currently feel that this book has a score of 9.5 Or above. Highly recommended. I hope the author will write carefully and not be a mess or a eunuch. Then write faster.

It's good-looking, not invincible, and we grow together. This is the first fanbook I've seen about Harry's group reaching second grade or above.

The quality of the HP fanfic is relatively good. I hope it will be updated more often. There are also many unreasonable places, but there are still quite few poisonous points, at least nothing serious. Overall, good luck, author, update more and improve your writing skills.

I really like this kind of HP fanfic that is plain and simple, does not engage in intrigues, and does not maliciously speculate on anyone with words! I just hope that the author will slowly pull out the knife, and then update it steadily. Instead of a thousand chapters, he can just write five or six hundred chapters to give a slightly decent ending!

I really want to complain about it before. After all, it completely follows the original work. It feels like there is no innovation at all. It just adds a "male partner" who has a better relationship with Hermione. However, it gradually gets better later on, with the male protagonist participating in more and more plots, and the changes gradually become bigger, and the author's progress can be seen.

The details are in place. As long as the author doesn't mess up, it will not be lower than 9.0. But I am not sure whether there will be background operations, but I believe this book will not be bad. 😘😘😘😘

Delicacy without losing the tediousness, following the original without losing the immediacy. Reading it is like drinking milk tea in a busy street market, hot and strong; it is also like drinking ordinary tea, cold and light, with the afternoon wind blowing. It's very good. If it's not boring to read, it's passable in my opinion. If you can enjoy it a little, it's a step up. And this book is outside of both.

Very exciting Harry Potter fanfic 👍👍

One of the most comfortable Harry Potter books I have read so far. I hope it won't end in a hurry like Death. After defeating Voldemort, I hope to write about the later events, such as wizards integrating into the Muggle world, liberating elves, etc., Or maybe a little bit about the daily life of each character, please!

Oh my god, this fanfic is so beautiful, just like Merlin's black stockings