HP: The Wheel of Fate

This article is five stars because it only has five stars at most. I love the author so much. I came here from the old Ford and it satisfied my need for GGAD sugar. The writing is nice. Please cheer up the author [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [please update] Deducted one star for not finishing the update. I understand the author's difficulties, but I really can't give it five stars until it's finished. Anyway, the writing is still very good. What a pity.

This book fulfills my fantasy, it's so beautiful! ! !

This book is really well written. Although the overall storyline has changed, it really writes the relationship between gg and ad very well. It also makes up for a lot of regrets from the previous life. Gg finally knows that ad loves him. But! The only bad thing is! Big! Why isn't it updated? What a beautiful book! Are you willing? Please update it again! (Humble... [Crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Don't stop updating! Please, please! [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Very very beautiful! I started chasing him when I was in lof, but I found out that the teacher seemed to have lost his account, so I finally found him here. This is the article I have seen that is most in line with the character of ggad in my heart, and it integrates love and plot very well. Teacher, please don't give up!

It's really, really beautiful. I don't know how to describe it. Please forgive me for my poor Chinese and lack of dictionary. I don't know what words to use to describe this book, it's just so special and wonderful. Hmm... The plot is also very novel. It is really rare to see this kind of book. It can even be said that this kind of book has never been seen before. The layout is precise and the writing is also very good. None of the characters in it are OOC, they are all very realistic. I really don't know what to say, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. ! ! It transformed me from dead to alive! ! ! Let me change from a dark b to a sunny and cheerful little girl. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I love you author (comparison of hearts) You make me intoxicated~[Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses][Admiration] Super invincible and fragrant rice, I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat (but the update speed makes me tired, although it has been completed, don't mention the dark period during the unfinished period [smile]) I will say it again, your writing style is superb. If it can be published, I will definitely be the first to buy it. This can be written into my reading notes.

It's really beautiful, help me~\(≧▽≦)/~ The author's writing is very good

It's super, super, super beautiful, and the writing is exquisite. It attracted me right away. Unfortunately, I came late and couldn't see the car on Weibo [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The plot is smooth and not procrastinating, GGAD is sweet in love and violent in ambush. The proportion of love and career is well controlled, and one aspect will not appear to be overweighted, resulting in fatigue and numbness. [Learned] The reason for giving four stars is that this article contains a large number of basic language flaws that cannot be ignored - typos, missing words, incorrect use of adjectives, incorrect use of colloquialisms, incorrect use of idioms, incorrect use of syntax, etc., Which somewhat affect the perception. [Thinking] For example, to describe being in a prison and not just waiting to be killed, the text uses the phrase "waiting for the rabbit"; for another example, to describe killing them all, the text uses the idiom "to see people alive, to see corpses dead", which is specifically used to describe missing people. [Understood] Overall, the story is told well, but the language skills are lacking. [Eat melon]

It feels like it's basically all sweet and doesn't have any abuse points. If you want to read some sweet fandom to comfort yourself, this is the right article (I personally don't like the part about giving birth). Generally speaking, the early stage is okay, but there are many problems in the later stage. The characters are sometimes a little OOC, the love relationship between Snape and the original character is a bit strange, and there are vocabulary errors in some parts of the article, but these are relatively minor points, and I feel that the most unreasonable one The point is that Voldemort died of self-destruction in the end. As far as I know, a character like Voldemort would never commit suicide in this way. This point is a forced advancement of the plot and leads to OOC. However, as a fan of a few years ago, it feels generally good. Sometimes it is good to leave your mind and read a short sweet article.

Just a personal opinion: The teacher's writing style is very delicate. Although there is a little personal setting, the whole thing is still very coherent. I can only say that it is very interesting to read (there is also a childbirth, if Lei gives birth to a child, you can choose not to read it)