Luo Xiaohei: Time Stops from the Start, Leaving Lao Jun Stunned

The current pace is pretty good and makes me want to read on. What I am most worried about right now is the heroine issue. It is best not to have a heroine. There are already many books on my bookshelf that have emotional plots that break the whole book. Especially for senior sisters, the relationship between family members is very good. Don't let the family relationship deteriorate! ! ! The last and most important point is, it looks good, if you like it, do more [learned]

There are no problems with the setting, but the protagonist progresses too fast, his abilities are too unclear, and the protagonist is not portrayed enough, and the process of spiritual cultivation is not explained in detail. It is an empty body with no content. Even if the time perspective of Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles is large, it will not be long. The combat power may collapse in the later stage, and the villain is not dangerous to the protagonist. As strong as infinity, Laojun's characters all have their own weaknesses and their abilities have ways to restrain them. Characters with weaknesses are the most attractive.

Your copy is a little lax, but your plot makes up for it. [Eating Melon] The OOC phenomenon is too serious, and "black" fans who are too familiar with the plot may not be satisfied. At the same time, it is also difficult to get out of the circle based on Luo Xiaohei's IP creation, which is relatively niche, and it will not please both ends. [Huge face] Apart from these shortcomings, it is still good to watch alone. [Send heart] (using modern terminology in ancient times, others did not react at all and it felt very fragmented [laughing and crying])

Some time ago, in order to improve my cultural literacy, I signed up for a calligraphy training class. Because my peers were all primary school students, everyone ostracized me and looked down upon me for still learning this at such an old age. It was nothing at first, but the maliciousness of the primary school students was really beyond my imagination. They said that I came to learn calligraphy with my foot half in the coffin. I was so angry that I cried. I wiped away my tears and ignored them as they continued to practice calligraphy. I swore that I would practice a good calligraphy and not let my money go to waste. I calmed down and carefully wrote a line of words on the paper: Teacher, you are a god.

It's a very good fanfic of Luo Xiaohei, but I don't know why it's so low-profile even though it's better than the other one [laughs awkwardly] I'm sure you'll get rave reviews [smile]

It looks good, I was looking forward to the interaction with Xiao Hei and Mirai Lu Ye. But the inexplicable martial arts competition, the original, and the unfinished ending made my original perfect evaluation drop. I want to watch the follow-up, I'm going to die.

It's very good. The fighting scenes and love scenes are all very well written. This is the first fan novel that I really agree with. The protagonist, Dog Brother, Qing Ning, Lao Jun, etc. Are all described very clearly. Five-star praise! [If there is a female protagonist, it is best not to tear down the cp. If there is no female protagonist, just fight for fun. In the end, we should fight for a normal cp, so that we will not engage in such messy things as sexism]

The writing style is really good, and one of the few that is comfortable to read, but the appendix... My appendix is gone, wow wow wow...

My bad mouth! I accidentally bitched my tongue just now because it was a bit confusing... Sorry! The author is deeply sorry! The characterizations in this book are very flexible. Among fan novels, the writing style of Reversing Time and Space has the same natural feeling as Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles, which makes it very comfortable to read. The main characters and plot are also logically smooth. In short, I praise the author greatly! ! !

They're all pretty good, but the one-two punch thing isn't so good. Some people don't watch Date A Live, just like me, and it bothered me later. I went to check it out [facepalm] If I have to comment, the author's writing style is very good. I have been following it for a long time. Among the Luo Xiaohei fanfics, I think it is top-notch, but I still don't recommend it very much. This book was unfinished. Maybe the author had something wrong. Although I was a little angry, which is normal. After all, I like this fanfic very much. I didn't expect that the author's writing style was so good that it would be unfinished.