Luo Xiaohei: Time Stops from the Start, Leaving Lao Jun Stunned
罗小黑：开局时间静止，震惊老君
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- Completed
- Length
- 490k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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The pacing is pretty good so far, making me want to keep reading. My biggest worry now is the female lead issue; ideally, there shouldn't be one. I already have several books on my shelf where the excessive romantic subplots ruined the whole story, especially the one with the senior sister. Family relationships are fine enough; please, please, don't let the familial bonds turn sour! Finally, and most importantly, it has to be good, I love reading it, and I'll add some more [Learned something]!
The premise itself is fine, but the protagonist's progress is too rapid, his abilities are too overpowered, and his character development is insufficient. The process of cultivating his mind isn't detailed enough; he's just a shell without substance.
Your writing is a bit loose, but the plot makes up for it. 🍉 The out-of-character (OOC) elements are too severe; fans who are too familiar with the plot might find it hard to be satisfied, and creating something based on the relatively niche IP of Luo Xiaohei also makes it difficult to break out of the niche—it pleases neither side. 🤦 Aside from these flaws, it's still pretty good on its own. 💕 (Using modern language in ancient times, without any reaction from others, feels very jarring 😂)
A while ago, to improve my cultural literacy, I enrolled in a calligraphy training class. Since my classmates were all elementary school students, they ostracized me, looking down on me for being so old and still learning this. It wouldn't have been a big deal, but the malice from the elementary school students was beyond my imagination.
This is a really good Luo Xiaohei fanfic, but I don't understand why it's getting so little exposure when it's clearly better than another one. 😅 I'll definitely get you rave reviews! 🙂
It was good, and I was really looking forward to the interactions between Xiao Hei and the future Lu Ye. But the inexplicable martial arts tournament, the original plot, and the terrible ending made my initially perfect rating drop. I want to see what happens next! I'm dying to see more!
Excellent! The action and romance scenes are both very well written. This is the first fanfiction I've ever truly appreciated. The main characters, Dog Brother, Qing Ning, Lao Jun, and others are all vividly portrayed. Five stars! [If there's a female lead, it's best not to break up the main couple. If there isn't, then just enjoy the action. In the end, we should ship normal couples to avoid all that gender discrimination and other messy stuff.]
The writing is really, really good; it's one of the few that's comfortable to read, but it's a bit of a letdown... My appendix is infected, waaaaahh ...
My mouth is so loose! I accidentally babbled a little because I was reading a bit of random things... Sorry! Author, I'm so sorry! The characters in this book are very well-developed. Among fan fiction, *Reversing Time* has a writing style reminiscent of *The Legend of Luo Xiaohei*, making it a very comfortable read. The main characters and plot are logically sound. In short, praise to the author!
They're all pretty good, except for the first and second parts, which aren't so great. Some people don't watch Date A Live, like me, and it got annoying towards the end. I looked it up though 🤦 If I had to give a review, I would say the author's writing is quite good, and I've been following it for a long time. I think it's top-tier among Luo Xiaohei fanfiction.