Hello Luo Xiaohei, You Can Call Me Luo Qi or Feng Xi

It's not enough, it feels like a social experiment, a game between two racial civilizations. This original work itself has a very high intention, and it is obvious that the author has already grasped this degree. In summary, it is a very good second work. Hope it doesn't end halfway.

This book is really good. It doesn't change from the beginning like some fan works I've seen (I don't mean to say those works are bad). He accommodates the sacrifices of the past, explains the mistakes of that path, and then uses the initial obsession of that path to introduce the theme and gradually changes on the basis. This is a kind of dream come true, different from the concept of "without sacrifice", it is more physical, more realistic, more feasible, and abandons the naivety of imagination. The protagonist in the entire article has one core characteristic - "family" No matter what you do, no matter what you do, you will always fight for your family. This concept is more in line with what you have as a person of a certain country (fear of being blocked for saying keywords). You may have been confused, you may have been sad, but as reflected in the story. Appropriate sacrifice is necessary. Sacrifice is not forced, but self-dedication when someone or something is completely accepted or calm. The author has grasped this degree very well, the plot rhythm is neither urgent nor slow, and the content is explained clearly and completely. The foreshadowing is also pretty good. Even if there are better plans and better solutions in some places, mistakes will inevitably be made in dangerous or anxious situations. This is an ordinary manifestation, but it is by no means ordinary. It is the inherent "imperfection" buried in everyone's heart. This makes the story more real, more humane, and more immersive for readers. —Boundary line— (The following are individual shortcomings, no criticism, just suggestions) It can be seen that the author was very involved in writing the story, but the overlap rate is a bit high. In the use of some sentences, the overlap rate is too high, which will make the reading more cumbersome. For example, "This is not... But..." Is used multiple times in the book. Appropriate use and spaced use will make the sentences in the article more beautiful. However, if you use it once every time when you want to explain something, it will be a little cumbersome. When explaining the difference you want to express, you don't necessarily have to compare the "possible meaning" with the "meaning you want to express". You can use one or two words, or describe a little bit of small psychology and actions. Reflect this difference. This will make the tone softer and less stiff. Delicate words are usually touching. They may not be obvious, but readers will think according to what the author wants to express. -My own thoughts- Because I really like this book, I posted my first review! ! ! ! Everything I said is very subjective... I just made suggestions that I think can be improved! ! ! ! I don't represent anyone's will! I won't do that kind of behavior of hitting the cook while eating! Just Because I like it, I take it seriously, and because I admire it, I make suggestions that can reach a higher level! But! ! ! ! What I said is not entirely correct. As reflected in the book, everyone has their own thoughts, opinions, and positions And the author is really super super super awesome! ! ! ! I have also thought about whether to write a book with a similar concept to the author's book! But I failed to take the step! The author was able to bravely take the first step and persevere, which is really amazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's pretty good, but is the combat power too high? I remember that in the movie Tianhu and the others were quite powerful in battle. Except for a few elders, not many remaining monsters could defeat them.

This book is awesome! ! ! I declare that this is the best fanfic I have ever read! ! ! After six years of reading, I am still the same person. Why is the rating so high? First of all, the author's writing style is online, and his words and words are very consistent with the character's personality. There is no OOC at all. He can arrange appropriate positions in the text according to their character and deeds in the original work. The most typical one is Luo Zhu. Many fanfics I read have a strange obsession with the island group, and they must be reunited. However, the character portrayal of Luo Zhu is a bit OOC. The author pays more attention to Luo Zhu's own choices, which is awesome! ! ! Secondly, the plot is full of ups and downs, and the world view setting is almost the same as the original work. Even the author's original fairies are incorporated without being inconsistent at all, and the description of spirits is excellent. The most important thing is that the author really understands "you can't have your cake and eat it too"! ! ! The pull between the two races is described in detail! I will come back to review after reading them all~ I won't say anything else, New Coin Klass, there is no unfinished plot and there is no collapse. The story ends well. I feel disappointed after reading it.

Hhh looks good (´ε｀ )♡me Stranger in front of the screen "I wish you a happy life in ㋀㋁㋂㋃㋄㋅㋆㋇㋈㋉㋊㋋㏠ ㏡㏢㏣㏤㏥㏦㏧㏨㏩㏪㏫㏬㏭㏮㏯㏰㏱㏲㏳㏴㏵㏶㏷㏸㏹ May all your wishes come true!!"

The overall look is very good, and it reflects social contradictions and understanding very well. The protagonist's character is very three-dimensional and really likable. The early stage is a wonderful adventure, and the battles are well depicted. However, in the later stage, the adventure is not taken together, but the protagonist fights alone, which leads to the marginalization of the companions and makes it a bit stiff. And there aren't many chapters, so there are some flaws but nothing serious. (This is my first review, please forgive me if there are any mistakes) Also, I like the protagonist Roach very much, and the author is very painstaking (*ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊₊♡

I like it, but I feel a little sorry that I am not Feng Xi, but it is very well written! ! !

The content is very practical and very good. It does not describe grandiose things, but more about personal, thinking, and growth. Very warm, very real, and very beautiful. The story is engaging, well-drawn, and comfortable. There is a feeling of youth that comes after society. I like it very much. It seems to be a rare quality product at present.

It's over. What a pity, it's really good, I hope the author can write some extras! 🐒🐒🐒Of course it ends directly like this, which makes people feel that it is just right! This ending is just right, the boundary is clearly defined, the boundary between humans and fairies. It's not so much blurry as it is soft. The protagonist and the guild are both determined, like puzzle pieces, intertwined but different, forming a larger puzzle. It ends happily and leaves the readers room for imagination. Their lives are still going on, but the story ends here. 🥰🥰🥰 [To be honest, at first I thought it was the kind where the protagonist becomes so strong that he unifies the world] But the story written in this way is a little unexpected, but it seems to be reasonable. All in all, it's a very heartwarming little story. I liked it very much. I didn't expect it to end while I was watching it. There is no ending that tells the final outcome of humans and microcosms, but it ends in a daily way. The reform of the guild hall, and the protagonist's gentle definition of the boundary with humans. Everyone can have their own imagination about the subsequent plot. [I don't know how to comment, I'm not very good at speaking, but I just like it very much! ! ! 🔥🔥🔥

It's a very good book, um... I didn't read much of Chapter 1 because I couldn't understand it. I read the following chapters carefully. It's really well written. I hope the author will get better and better at writing books [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

The writing is very good so far, the logic is clear, and I am very curious about the future development. I like the creation of the protagonist very much, and I hope the author can perform stably. (Currently in Chapter 85)

The writing is very good. Some of the viewpoints in the book are very good. Even the villains are portrayed with flesh and blood. (Lingyao and General) are not absolutely right or wrong, they just have different positions.

It's a bit confusing, but the author writes it well, the plot is relatively novel, and the protagonist is not the kind of brainless protagonist on the market. He has a growth path and necessary sacrifices, unlike the brainless ones on the market. All in all, it is a better book.

Rigorous, the author has rich imagination and restores the original characters.

I read this in one breath and look forward to the plot behind it

There is no conflict with the original plot, and the characters have distinct personalities.

It's nice to read, and the author's writing is really delicate, but why don't many people read it? [Blowing kiss]

A very perfect book. Luo Qi's character is not directly shaped, but slowly changed through small things. The contrast between before and after is clear and the transition is natural. The writing style is very superb, and the plot is full of twists and turns. There are many thoughts of the author himself, and the characters are clearly three-dimensional. To sum up again, this is a very perfect book.

Very good, the logic is normal and non-toxic. It is a novel that I admire very much.

The writing is pretty good^ω^, the logic is clear and complete, the protagonist's combat power is online, the plot is touching, there are a few custom settings, and some changes have been made to the character's abilities. Personally, I think the protagonist grows up a bit too fast. . Of course this is a practical need. I don't quite understand it. The protagonist is in the world of Xiao Hei, but he is no different from the locals. Anyway, it's pretty good [blowing kiss]

Ahhh, it's beautiful, why are there so few people watching it?

Like. Is a road

It's very deep, but it's not enough to watch [almost crying]

Gradually become the master of the planet

It's so beautiful!

All I can say is that it's beautiful, it's hard not to fall in love with Roach

It's so beautiful. I really like this setting. . . . . . . . .

Don't think too much, just rush in. It's really beautiful.

It's good to watch, and the plot is different from the original work, but it's surprisingly good, but it's too short.

Must have perfect score! ! ! Although I still have some regrets that I couldn't fill it in, the writing is super good! ! ! The content is also very good and the subject matter is very novel! ! ! ꒰˶>ᗜ<˶꒱