My Little Pony: The Second Sister Just Wants to Enjoy Learning Magic

The writing is excellent, the plot is compact, the protagonist is calm and sometimes a little bit naughty, gentle and polite to others, and is a reliable adult (not the kind that time travels through the brain and looks like a silly Baitian, which is cool). The key is his own desire for knowledge and the flexible use of knowledge. Sapiosexual ecstasy is my favorite character. I have had enough of silly Baitian and a protagonist whose strength appears out of nowhere (relying on the system, a gift from nature, or something else). It is still this kind of strength that he has learned on his own. It is cool to watch. And the other heroine is the only positive review. Although I also like m6 and several princesses, and their interaction with the protagonist, I think it's good (either cb or cp), but I can do it myself, but if I really write np, I will die (referring to other articles, the author's writing style is very comfortable for me, even if he really writes about the harem, I can still read it, he is a very flexible bottom line 😋)

Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is smooth, the plot is clear, and the plot is very funny. Those who like Iron Break will have a lot more laughs. The protagonist is very well portrayed. The time traveler's arrogance and superiority that he didn't realize he had, and his insight into thinking he could control the script and control the plot were written out and recognized and corrected. This is very rare. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is one that I personally like very much. He is very human, very rational, and a stranger who has calculated and measured almost all relationships and things. This is a strong contrast with ponies in Equestria, whose nature is friendship and love. It is very subtle. This kind of vague estrangement and distance between relatives and friends will make the protagonist out of reach, which will generate more emotions and connections. I have to say this is very delicious, a collision of rationality and sensibility. Then there are the shortcomings: the author was a little too fond of the iron collapse in the later shared dream plot. The plot is really like Pinoconi, and there are many elements of Omphalos. Not only does this make me a bit embarrassed to watch it after playing Iron Breaker, but it also feels a bit out of touch with Little Malia's worldview and a bit empty. But since the protagonist is not a pony in the first place, bringing things that do not belong to the current world view may be part of the character design... Generally speaking, after the update so far, all the previous plots are very good, and the subsequent common dream plots can be watched according to your own taste. Above, you can refute and question my views. This is normal. Each individual has his or her own Hamlet, but please do not attack me. This is just my personal opinion and recommendation.

So perfect 😍 There is no character collapse in this book, nor is it deliberately discrediting the protagonist group or OOC. The author's ideas are also very good, the plot is on-line, and the characters are on-line. The author has clear thinking and ideas, and will not have the situation of digging a hole in the front and not filling it in the back (currently). There will be no situation where the latter cannot face the front. The writing style is also okay, not the kind of AI flow writing. The protagonist created by the author is also very good. He has correct outlook on life and an online IQ. He is very cute when he is unconventional and irregular at times. He is not that old-fashioned. I hope the author can keep updating until the end and the article will not collapse. More chapters added every day🤗 It's really beautiful! The author's understanding of the original work is very profound and unique, and the author's imagination is also very large. There are animation settings and some comic settings, and sometimes a little bit of Bengtie is interspersed (but not too much. People who have never played Bengtie can still read it without much impact) Not OOC at all! ! ! Restore it to only one sentence, and you can know who said it was M6. The portrayal of the protagonist is super good. Just like the title of the book, the protagonist just wants to learn magic for fun. She is a very rational person, but has a moral bottom line. I fell in love with the protagonist halfway through the book. Perfect. I just feel that since the senior sister entered the human world, there have been relatively few emotional lines... Basically, the protagonist is discovering the truth. I want to see the emotional lines of the author😭 Also, the updates are really slow... Every one or two days during holidays, and every three or four days during normal times. I'm going crazy [lying on the ground] [dark crawling] [distorted] [slowly crawling on the ground] [dark crawling] [dark crawling] [dark crawling] [dark crawling] * Editor 2: Originally it was five stars Except for a few h-words and rn-words, which appear two or three times in total, which I personally can't accept, everything else is very nice. In fact, I still hope that the author will change it a lot. After all, it is a female video article. Also, I heard from others that there were a lot of iron-collapse elements in the dream scene. I didn't object to it because I'd never played it, but you can also see a lot of iron-collapse elements from other small places, em... I hope there are less of them.

Other novels are confused from the beginning to the middle game and have no goal. They only follow the original plot. In the process, they are cured by m6 and then become a princess and start to take on responsibilities. The life story of the protagonist is a mystery, or the status is noble. There are a lot of these fan novels. But! This one is different. The protagonist has a clear goal. She is not a selfless saint, nor is she a "broken girl". She is emotionally stable, generous in all aspects, and has no inexplicable twists. The author writes very well. I have seen that the author has written about his destiny. I am still looking forward to how the author will write the protagonist to find a new way to successfully embark on his destiny. Other fan fictions are the only truth of Rainbow Cannon, and others cannot compare. I hope the author can write something different. (At least it should be on par with the Rainbow Cannon, and as good as the flying light. It's a pity to have a single CP. I recommend the Celestia [Shy] teacher-student team ~ Super feeling)

Highly recommended I usually don't read new books. Less than 300,000 words is really not enough to read or evaluate the whole book. We are naturally closer to beautiful elements, and Xiao Mawen's evaluation will be increased accordingly. But this book is different. It has a humorous and moving storyline, exquisite and vivid character portrayals, and the author's writing is better than a certain level. I believe that even other original stories can get high praise from me (we also found that the author has accumulated writing skills from previous works) One of the advantages of this article is the creation of a completely innovative plot, which has a unique feeling of not just participating in the plot but truly integrating into the world's life. Xiaoma's novels, or most cute fanfics, mostly describe the story of the established plot, mixed with the unique development of the protagonist's events, including: It is written just to change the situation in one's heart, and those who skip the plot foreshadowing and go straight to twisting the ending will be killed. Fishing in the water / Highly involved. Only the perspective changes, the ending does not change much or there is only a reversal at the node. A passer-by who follows the plot and wanders / single-handedly reverses the entire situation through future knowledge, and faces the world with the arrogance of a transcendent, will be rewarded. Most of the established stories have obvious changes due to the existence of the protagonist. Because the protagonist's every move naturally and reasonably changes the future, original plots will gradually increase in the middle period. Those who enjoy the world through this will be rewarded. Those who integrate the characters into this world without relying on the established plot, have their own likes and dislikes, develop their own bonds, overcome their own difficulties, and carve out the future with their own hands will be rewarded. We may write part of the established plot in the future, but our little protagonist has already flapped her wings before she was born, and what awaits her is a future that our readers cannot imagine. That's exactly what I wanted to see. The driving force behind fan fiction is the desire to see new plots. The author truly loves this world. I was deeply moved and gave him high praise. Everyone is praising you because you do have this level of love, strength, rationality, imagination, delicacy, and time. The hexagon warrior deserves a reward Time means having time to code and energy to code. Delicacy refers to the grasp of emotions. The so-called "Hello~" plot cannot lack this Brainstorming refers to the grasp of the plot. The so-called "can it still be like this?" Plot cannot lack this. Reason is the control of one's emotions. Stories cannot be written like this, "This is wrong." Abnormal and unlikely plots will be eliminated in advance The foundation is the cornerstone of the novel. The so-called "there is a picture and a lot of feeling!" The plot cannot lack this. The last thing is love, which resonates with everyone and says, "I just like reading this." The story written by the author must first be liked by the author. Right~

The protagonist is really very rational. In fact, when I saw that Twilight Sparkle and Spike burned the bookshelf that the protagonist had worked hard to collect and organize, I thought it would be a stereotypical two people quarreling. After some other setbacks, they realized friendship and reconciled. But when the protagonist said that sentence, I have lost my bookshelf, and I don't want to lose you again, I really felt the author's level of thinking (friends are more important than my bookshelf, and I can't vent my anger on my friends because of what has happened. It's really a great idea, and I feel enlightened when I read it). After reading this book, and looking at other comparisons, I discovered the original plot in this book. Very much. It is not completely based on the original plot, and the writing is very natural. She seems to be really living in this world, and based on the original plot, she can also open up the world view. This is really amazing. I really recommend it. The writing is good, the plot is good, and the background setting is also very good. The important thing is the world view and logic in this article. I don't feel there is anything inappropriate. It is really an excellent article. It's really delicious😋. Actually, sometimes I think my requirements are not too harsh. I just want a book with a good plot, good characters, good logic, and a natural setting that is casual and cute. But this book actually meets my requirements perfectly! First of all, the protagonist's three views are boundless. He can reflect on himself, face his own mistakes, and handle problems correctly. This plot is also very delicious. It perfectly integrates the original plot and the original plot without any unnatural feeling. It gives me the feeling that it is a very real story and I feel very immersive. I like both the character design and the character image. She is a blue intellectual pony. Although I don't like learning, I like creatures who like to learn. She is smart and loves to learn. She handles interpersonal relationships perfectly, has a slight sense of alienation, inner emptiness, and stable emotions. After realizing that she has always been separated from other ponies, she will learn to truly trust her friends, and the way she handles problems is really amazing. The logic is also very smooth. Although there are some iron-collapse settings, it looks natural to me, just like My Little Pony itself has iron-collapse. The whole thing is natural. Needless to say, the writing style of the teacher is simply amazing. And you can read this article as a casual daily article, or you can read it as an article about saving the world. And I personally feel that there is no OOC in this article. Every character is as natural as they should be. It is really delicious😋

Perfect, Xiao Ma's new star. I hope it will be as good an article as Senyu Yeyu Huixin Duodao in the future. Also, has the author read Death Sin? I personally hope to see some family elements, otherwise I always feel that the later stages of the daily writing are weak. Anyway, I hope Feiguang will get better and better!

Not bad, I finally found a Pony novel that is not so AI, and the author should not go too fast. The pace in the early stage is very good, and the transformation of the protagonist can be taken slowly in the middle stage. There is no need to be too anxious, but I am curious about whether the senior sister will go to the human world and the parallel world.

It's so beautiful, it has the feeling of a long stream, the emotional expression is just right, and it's updated daily. The theme is novel and interesting, and there are sparkling funny words, such as Amatras and the like. I look forward to the story of Equestria (ઇ•ω‹)

The plot flows very smoothly, so it doesn't seem abrupt. The interaction is very warm and natural. Although I am still friends with the senior sister now, I am already very shy [shy]. Moreover, the portrayal of the protagonist is very good. It feels very attractive. It is probably the charm of the personality. It not only attracts people in the book The pony is also attracting us ˙ᗜ˙ (I really want to know who is 1, please... I will do anything [crying] I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿) The update is a bit slow