My Little Pony: A Disaster Too Much to Bear

The content is rich, the emotions are sincere, and the insights are unique. This book, which is a plus for me, contains a lot of information. The emotions expressed in the book are very real, and the subject matter is very novel. Some places still need to be improved, and some parts may need more polishing. The author's views are not deep enough (some parts are easy to understand). The details need to retain information that is helpful for understanding the topic (precaution). All events are used equally in the article, without distinguishing which ones are important and which ones are secondary. The Balanced Description Bar recommends that authors directly seek a balance between language description and other types of description (action, psychology, environment, etc.), Which can increase the layering of the article, make it bright and thought-provoking There is room for improvement, it can be more systematic (organization and management), it can leave some room for imagination for readers, instead of describing all the details through language description, it can make readers more engaged. It is recommended that the author use precise language and avoid repetition and unnecessary dialogue. The author pays attention to the rhythm of the article and adjusts the rhythm of reading, which leads to a single-paced book [shy] book! I'm chasing him!

This is the first time I have seen such a chapter narrative. It is very novel, but it is usually difficult to retain readers at a fast pace. Other people's Chekhov's guns are single-shot, but what you want to do is fully automatic. The writing style was weak in the early stage, but after it stabilized in the later stage, it felt like an ancient writing style. I secretly went back and rewrote it. Although it was slower, I could see that there was still some care. There is no OOC in more than a hundred chapters, which should be applauded. I hope it can continue, but the update speed is really slow. I can probably guess what I want to write, but the chapter narrative makes me interested in reading. The author is too bold to describe such a huge group portrait. Make persistent efforts.

I don't understand what is the reason that makes a good book fall into the dust repeatedly. In terms of content, this book must be at least 9 points. If you don't believe me, please read it and then argue with me [laughter]

Very good looking@twilightwushuang(god of friendship) Please comment more, why the more people watch, the fewer people see it [crying][crying]