My Little Pony: Hello, Friends

It's a pretty good first-person daily story, and some of the events in it also shape the characters quite well. The most important thing is that the supporting characters are no longer just OCs with leather sheaths, but real background ponies who appear in the main show. This is much better than most pony stories. But there are some strange aspects in terms of perception: first of all, the plot advances too slowly. It takes nearly a hundred chapters to describe it in ten days, but most of the content is the inner conflict of the protagonist, and half of it is meaningless moaning. As a result, many times after reading, I don't know what happened. Secondly, the main plot is unclear, except for preparing for the fallen leaves race. The specific timeline (it seems to be before the arrival of Twilight?) And there are too many pitfalls for the protagonist. How could an ordinary social creature have nightmares (Can't Luna find out yet?) Hallucinations, gluttony, and some mental disorders and other diseases, and there are many contradictions in it. If there is a long outline plan, I hope that the pitfalls can be filled in later. Author, please quickly explain the content of the new chapter, why the protagonist couldn't control himself and almost bit the rabbit Angel, and the incomprehensible first-person self-narration of each person in each section that no one knows, and even the broom composed of separated teeth and hair on the protagonist's body later appeared to share independent consciousness and start a stream of consciousness, which is very damaging to the perception.

The character setting is interesting. I hope not to add too many original characters in the private design. Just add some content to the protagonist setting. After all, there are very few fans who interact with M6 in this first-person perspective. The protagonist always gives me the feeling that I want to debut with Xiaodai. There are no big problems at the moment, but I always feel that the main line is a bit too "boring". In a world with all kinds of potential threats, major crises and opportunities, it is not a good idea to always make the protagonist too ordinary and show a sense of powerlessness. In the final analysis, the real "self-improvement" is the bottom-level comfort of web novels and the setting that best brings security.

It's quite comfortable to read on the radio wave, but sometimes some of the things written by the author make me think that I missed it before. After reading it several times, I realized that it seemed to be deliberately vague or foreshadowing?

I've only read chapter 35 so far, but I want to write about it. I feel that it is well written and the writing style is quite smooth, at least it feels smooth to me when I look at it. It's quite good-looking, and quite real. It really feels like time travel, and the characters that appear are quite even, and no one feels out of place. I think the protagonist is quite cute and a bit silly. This anxious state feels very real, because I personally also have a bit of anxiety and pessimism. Although generally speaking, it may be considered a warm and daily life, and everyone is very nice, but I personally always feel sad when watching it, and I always feel sad for the protagonist. The inner scenes are very real, and there are many, so it makes people feel a little uncomfortable. However, the author writes very well, so this is not a shortcoming. Hope everything can get better and better Tied...! It's very interesting, but it's a bit stream-of-consciousness. Although there are more and more puzzles, I feel like it's getting better.

It's a rare novel where the main character takes weeds and wood as his main food. It's quite interesting ~

An ordinary person becomes an ordinary pony, lives an ordinary human lifestyle in an ordinary Pony Valley, and changes his ordinary human concepts. The ordinary pony Mu Mu gets a new life in an ordinary way.

It's so beautiful. This writing style is completely non-replaceable. I can't read anything else after reading it. Maybe it's because I like the writing style and stream of consciousness of this kind of light novel. The most important thing is that every pony is so handsomely written. It's like a god. It's also very cute. This wooden piece of wood thinks too much and feels too much. It's stupid, and the atmosphere during the interaction is also very good. I will support you, boss, come on💪

The writing style is quite interesting

It's so hard to find fan fiction that has something of its own. It's so rare.

Very good daily writing