In Warhammer, My Avatars Roam the Heavens

The writing is good, but it is a bit overwhelming. The 99 stream is suitable for the Invincible stream to have fun. Write more about daily life and fun, and then slowly push the main line. For example, write some imagination, the integration of different abilities in the world, or take off with the left foot and the right foot.

The Warhammer part was great, but maybe I had a problem with Yun and didn't notice it, but the Naruto part was a little bit worse. There were too many problems like contacting Kushina and talking to Danzo. Overall good, some flaws are acceptable To be honest, this Warhammer part could be written as a stand-alone novel.

It looks pretty good so far. The combat power of the same wearer expands very quickly. As long as you control it appropriately, it still looks pretty good. I thought the author's new novel would be a comprehensive comic or a book similar to the one that quickly travels through other anime worlds to collect various systems of righteousness. I didn't expect that they would be wearing the same clothes. I hope it won't collapse in the later stages.

Although it is written about the cesspit Warhammer, the combat power plug-in breaks out of this limitation. The whole article shows a kind of sandstorm temperament. It can be said that among all the Warhammer articles I have read, it is the least desperate, least dark, and most interesting [Adoration]

First of all, this is my personal opinion (don't comment if you don't like it) I have read more than a hundred chapters in this book and I think there are two main shortcomings. The first is that Naruto's love line is a bit awkward, but the rest is okay. The second is that it is a bit overwhelming in terms of combat effectiveness. There is nothing wrong with you saying that the protagonist of Warhammer is not strong enough. I also agree that the protagonists of Naruto and Juju are not strong enough. One world has a high limit and the other is just developed. But the protagonist of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba is not strong enough to speed pass. It is a bit overwhelming. Which of the above three worlds is not stronger than Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba? This is a bit unjustifiable. I also hope that the author can correct these two shortcomings. I also very much hope that this book will not be discontinued, and I hope that the author can achieve greater success again. Don't say it externally, don't complain if you don't like it [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Not bad, not bad, I finally have a wolf to play with with Immortal Slash, I don't say he is strong or not, but he is handsome [laughing evilly]

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother like this? For example, it seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. The older brother's body is weak and the body is weak. If the younger brother presses the older brother like this, it is actually the younger brother's fault. It hurts the older brother's body, which also makes the younger brother feel distressed. But whether the older brother is injured or not has anything to do with the younger brother? ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚

After seeing so many worlds, the most comfortable ones to enter are the Warhammer with its own subspace essence and the Dragon Clan with its own White King's power. They are not very powerful but very comfortable. I feel that the setting of the dragon protagonist is more reasonable than many dragon novels I have read, and it can be read as a stand-alone book.

It's pretty good, but the Hokage part is a little aggrieved, but he's still a weakling after all!

The whole novel is divided into many single volumes. The protagonist's soul is divided and he travels through different fan worlds. Some are well written, and some are very poisonous. Similar to those written in the comic book world, it is too licking, but the poisonous chapters can be skipped directly. The plot does not affect other worlds, so it is a book that can be read.