Cursed Technique Extraction: Invincible in the Ninja World at Ten

The writing is very good, but the heroine is not crazy enough yet [laughing] There is another hidden factor about the decline of Uchiha: According to the history told by Obito, Senju and Uchiha have always been hired by others to fight against each other. And with the establishment of Konoha after the Uchiha lost to the Senju, the Uchiha clan's big financial backer is likely to be gone, leaving only dozens of bases all over the ninja world during the decisive battle of Sa Itachi.

The author, the Guinness record is typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires 6 letters, you can type approximately 134 words per minute. Since you are not the holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep Sleeping time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, another 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash, one hour to exercise, two hours to find inspiration, and then strip off an hour of dazed fishing time, you should have nine hours to type, and type 54,000 words. Calculated based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 27 chapters, but you only post so much content every day, how come? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this, so the author quickly got up and coded!

I'd like to give a comprehensive review. It's a good-looking transformation story, but the excessive description of the male body is a poisonous point. If the writing is good and you have more experience in controlling the plot, the male body can be a bonus. It's okay to write more about daily life, but you need to show more of the charm of the heroine. Generally speaking, it's okay overall. You can have your own ideas, but please also consider what readers want to see more when reading transformation articles.

Um... I really can't put it in, but I'll give it 4 stars. The subject matter is good. For personal reasons, I can only read the main male protagonist. I just read Chapter 8, which describes some plot descriptions of Shisui and Shisui when they were practicing ninjutsu. It gave me goosebumps. In fact, it's okay to write for this kind of audience, but There is no need for some unnecessary plots. The bond with friends can be there, but there should be less emotional interaction with men. After all, the soul and heart are men. If there are less of this, it is simply a flow of development and getting stronger along the way. I think I should still be able to watch it. What a pity!

To be honest, with the way of doing things in the original Konoha F4, if Konoha can survive until the beginning of the protagonist's chapter, if there is no possibility that someone is causing trouble behind his back, then I can only say that the matching mechanism is excellent [smile]

Among the several Naruto novels I have read, this one is the better. The protagonist's growth process is also very regular, unlike other Naruto novels where he suddenly realizes some powerful skills.

Ling, hurry up and wear women's clothes. It's time to change into neutral clothes.

Okay, come on, author [laughing evilly] I hope to be single or lily [laughing]

Very well written, keep up the good work. I would like to praise the author's improvement and creation of Naruto's world view, including the construction of history, the innovation and academic nature of scientific research (telomeres, free radicals, the addition of super organelles, the difference in expression of Senju Uchiha's manifest and recessive genes, etc.). The innovation and exploration of some ninjutsu (compression pills, wind release chakra mode, etc.), The improvement of the training system (the fusion of blood successor boundaries such as wood release instead of direct transplantation of Hashirama cells, etc.), And the introduction of the two paths to achieve the blood successor snare, etc. After reading a lot of Naruto stories, this attracted me very much. The only bad thing is that the protagonist is a man who becomes single after becoming a woman. I don't really like changing singles, changing marriages, etc. Some people may like it, but they don't understand it but respect it. In terms of character design, I feel that Hiruzen Sarutobi is too positive, but this is also one of the things that others say. There are many stories about him being soft-hearted and not knowing much about it, and there are more stories about protecting his own feathers and secretly instigating Shimura Danzo. But I have watched F4 do evil things too much, so I always feel a little awkward when I see Sarutobi Hiruzen in this article.

I've read Chapter 160 and I think it's okay. Personally, I suggest that the protagonist should maintain a loli body shape to be interesting, and it would be better to have a lily harem. [Shy]