A Mysterious Western Fantasy World, Where My Secret Identities Are Everywhere

It is recommended to write more about the vest to increase the interaction between the vest and other people. You can try to make up some experience settings for the vest based on the prototype, so that other people can react in various ways after knowing it. This will be more interesting.

Quickly become independent and let the protagonist do it alone

Here is a unified reply for everyone. There is probably another plot of 20,000 to 30,000 words that will enter the next volume. The next volume is the stage of developing a lord. The protagonist will use the extraordinary characteristics of the clone to go out and open a vest and fabricate an organization. The background story of the vest will be revealed to the indigenous people. In short, it will be satisfying. The author of Miscellaneous Fish himself does not like to read the main character who abuses the main character and the heroine of the Virgin. I don't think I have abused the main character. The attribute of kindness is brought about by the education of modern people. It will slowly change and requires a process. In modern society, most people who are decisive in killing are very successful, but the protagonist is just an ordinary person with good luck. There must be a process for the change of mentality. The first volume is just an introduction to some world views, so please wait patiently. You can make suggestions, but you are not required to blame them all. After all, it is difficult to agree with everyone, and the author of the miscellaneous fish has limited abilities and can only satisfy the appetite of a small number of people. The author has canceled the early, middle and late stages of the knight squire stage, and only formal knights have the early, middle and late stages. I don't even know what to complain about. If the setting is clearer before, I can see the growth of the protagonist more clearly. Moreover, the level has been improved very quickly. Although it took more than fifty chapters to write from a mid-level knight to a low-level knight, it actually didn't take long. The protagonist only traveled through less than a month and became a low-level knight, which is already very fast. Also, I describe the water number through the realm. Please, the realm description is only a few words. Do I need to use the water number in this place? Even if the numbers are low, isn't it free to read novels on Tomato? It doesn't cost you a penny more.

Five stars should be used to encourage the author. From the current point of view, the development of the plot of this book is a bit slow, and the characterization of the vest characters is not enough. However, the book still has a lot of room for development. The author must consider the combat system to avoid the collapse of the combat power system. Some settings should be clearer. The settings of other world abilities can be appropriately changed, but explanations must be made. On this basis, On the basis of this, you can make appropriate foreshadowings. Since some of the combat abilities in each world are stitched together, it is best for the author to make a draft by himself and write down the protagonist's abilities to avoid doing something in the later battles, such as some critical situations in the death battle. It is obvious that certain abilities can be used to solve the problem, but it has to be fought for so long. This will become a shortcoming.

It's a very good work. Although the writing style is still a bit immature, the overall feeling is that it already has the feeling of an early work from the starting point. The book "Xizai Tomato" is already very good. I hope the author can continue to work hard. This is the author's debut work. It should have the potential to become a god [Like]

It can be regarded as a classic Western fantasy wizard novel. It creatively adds a sequence path constructed by extraordinary characteristics. The setting of alien gods invading the wizarding world is very interesting. The protagonist's golden finger is also very good, and the protagonist's strength also grows very quickly. Although there are some poisonous points, they are harmless. The rating is a bit low, but it also proves that the rating is not bought. The plot is compact, the background and character descriptions of the novel are okay, and the author is better at depicting battle scenes.

In order to balance the combat power, some abilities have been weakened, but it is still pretty good-looking. Why doesn't anyone watch it? The plot setting at the beginning and the conception are all very good. It would be better not to read the rest of the story

Excellent, well written. Except for the first few chapters, the characters are not fleshed out enough. Looking forward to it

It was actually quite interesting, but it was too cold.

I think it's good, but the rating is a little low. The amount is a bit small [smiles]