The Elemental Archmage of Hogwarts
霍格沃茨的元素大魔导师
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- 1y ago
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This book is also known as "I Transmigrated as Little Nan Niang and Became a Succubus in the Magic World".
Having read many Harry Potter novels, I think this one is exceptionally good and exciting. I wonder if the main characters will end up with a romantic partner. In the story, Dumbledore's use of ghosts and portraits to monitor the protagonist so closely seems a bit excessive. Even when Voldemort was studying at school, Dumbledore wasn't this vigilant.
It's great! You're awesome, author! Except sometimes when you describe the protagonist's beauty with a touch of sarcasm, it makes me a little awkward.
I like your concept. The lack of immersion in the story isn't a big problem. The problem is that a large part of the readers need to feel immersed, so the lack of immersion becomes your issue. Just a quick aside, most people confuse "sense of immersion" with "sense of being drawn in."
The author writes very well, but there is one flaw. Many of the descriptions in the wind could be conveyed through dialogue, but the author uses a more narrative-like perspective. It is suggested that the author include more dialogue and less description.
It feels pretty good; it doesn't feel mindless at all. I think it has surpassed most of Tomato's HP fanfiction.
It was pretty good, the only downside was that the pacing was too fast 🤦 It felt like I was just reading an outline, and I didn't see the usual bonds and friendships.
It's well-written; the protagonist's appearance and demeanor are particularly well-developed.
On a positive note, it could score 7 or 8 out of 10, but because there's too little dialogue and it's too mundane, it won't reach 8.5.
This book is an instruction manual; a single sentence might take up half a chapter to explain something.