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On the eve of leaving for the East, Khadgar Lothar received an admission notice from an owl.
Good news: He has awakened the Hogwarts good student system, and can get rewards as long as he adds points to the college.
Even better news: there are points deductions too!
Dumbledore: "After Mr. Lothar enrolled, sometimes I couldn't help but look forward to another great adventure."
McGonagall: "Compared with Mr. Lothar, the Weasley twins appear well-behaved and honest."
Flitwick: "Mr. Lothar is a born Ravenclaw."
Sprout: "I have to think about whether this will be Hufflepuff's only chance to win seven House Cups in a row!"
Snape: "He saved this school from peace. He should be sorted into Azkaban or Nurmengard!"
Voldemort: "Khadgar Lothar, you really deserve to die!"
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Khadgar Lothar: "Although everyone may have a slumped face sometimes, their smiles are on my face."
Reader comments
At present, there are no poisonous points, the plot is okay, I hope it will be better without CP, and I can look forward to the future [Sending my heart]
Seeing that there is no trace of AI, it should be purely handmade, and there are no poisonous spots. There is no CP so far, and it is identified as a five-star super large cup.
By the way, the protagonist's pet is a phoenix, which is a bit rare. After all, I think most of them have the Norwegian Ridgeback [thoughts]
Well, the author updated a chapter in two days [face covering] This is indeed a bit lacking. I asked why it was not on the recommendation list, so I changed it to a big cup.
It's very good-looking. It doesn't have the tendency in most books to make you invincible all at once, or to overwhelm your strength with a lot of hang-ups. Both combat power and rhythm control are very good. At least it's much better than most books in Tomato. And the most important thing is that it's not written by AI.
Why is the rating so low?
Well, it's the little badger, we are saved🥰, it looks good, Merlin must be free of CP [Send heart]
Judging from the description, the author has the intention of making Hermione the heroine, emm feels that it is better to have no CP, otherwise the weird [grievance] old senior will not strengthen it, he has been easily defeated by the protagonist [Exploration]
It looks very good. I feel that there are no traces of AI now. It's just that the protagonist's combat power has increased a bit too quickly. Lao Fu should wait for the Demon King level to strengthen it, otherwise I feel that the protagonist will be invincible in the second year.
It's nice to watch, the protagonist is very strong, I hope it's free of cp
The snowflakes have not yet fallen, the fireworks have not yet been brilliant, Santa Claus has not yet woken up, the deer has not yet set off in his car, the socks have not been hung in front of the window, and everyone's blessings have not yet filled the sky. But I set out early to wish you a safe Christmas Eve, a merry Christmas, and endless romance.
It looks good, it's a masterpiece among HP fans, I hope it can be completed with more powerful updates.
Delicious article! I just like to play around and study some new academics. The cute black sesame dumplings! Squat without cp! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]
Everything is fine except it's unfinished.
It's pretty good so far, no CP yet, I hope there never will be.
Golden Chapter Three is very good
From the beginning, I can see that the plot is coherent now, and the details of the characters are well written, not written by AI.
It's very delicious [full] and very good-looking. It feels like watching Harry Potter when I was a kid. It's very interesting.
Very interesting, I read it in one sitting. Much better than the Harry Potter fanfics I've read before. There is currently no cp. Come on, author.
So far it's pretty good, smooth, and occasionally humorous. Take a good look at this book, cheers for the author
A new book with great potential, but nothing toxic.
There is no embarrassment, no common problems among time travellers, cheating but no loss of combat effectiveness, no stereotypes of men and women, and the protagonist enriches himself every day.
Available to both men and women.
Not bad, very similar to the one next door. Is it the same author?
It's okay, there's nothing too big of a surprise, but if you want to read invincible articles, you can read this [snicker][snicker]
Meow meow meow is so beautiful!
It's really something you could have watched.
Very good, very good
Updates are a bit slow, but otherwise it's okay
A very good book.
Why not updated?
It's pretty good, but it's been discontinued.
It's nice, but the author doesn't update it very often.
It's good not to forcefully suppress the combat power. Invincible style has the writing method of Invincible style.
It's not OOC but has its own plot content. It's the first Harry fanfic.
It's pretty good so far, I'll see what happens later.
The Golden Finger of Fairy Grass opens very wide and is very refreshing.
At present, there are no poisonous points, the plot is okay, I hope it will be better without CP, and I can look forward to the future [Sending my heart]
Seeing that there is no trace of AI, it should be purely handmade, and there are no poisonous spots. There is no CP so far, and it is identified as a five-star super large cup. By the way, the protagonist's pet is a phoenix, which is a bit rare. After all, I think most of them have the Norwegian Ridgeback [thoughts] Well, the author updated a chapter in two days [face covering] This is indeed a bit lacking. I asked why it was not on the recommendation list, so I changed it to a big cup.
It's very good-looking. It doesn't have the tendency in most books to make you invincible all at once, or to overwhelm your strength with a lot of hang-ups. Both combat power and rhythm control are very good. At least it's much better than most books in Tomato. And the most important thing is that it's not written by AI. Why is the rating so low?
Well, it's the little badger, we are saved🥰, it looks good, Merlin must be free of CP [Send heart] Judging from the description, the author has the intention of making Hermione the heroine, emm feels that it is better to have no CP, otherwise the weird [grievance] old senior will not strengthen it, he has been easily defeated by the protagonist [Exploration]
It looks very good. I feel that there are no traces of AI now. It's just that the protagonist's combat power has increased a bit too quickly. Lao Fu should wait for the Demon King level to strengthen it, otherwise I feel that the protagonist will be invincible in the second year.
It's nice to watch, the protagonist is very strong, I hope it's free of cp
The snowflakes have not yet fallen, the fireworks have not yet been brilliant, Santa Claus has not yet woken up, the deer has not yet set off in his car, the socks have not been hung in front of the window, and everyone's blessings have not yet filled the sky. But I set out early to wish you a safe Christmas Eve, a merry Christmas, and endless romance.
It looks good, it's a masterpiece among HP fans, I hope it can be completed with more powerful updates.
Delicious article! I just like to play around and study some new academics. The cute black sesame dumplings! Squat without cp! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]
Everything is fine except it's unfinished.
It's pretty good so far, no CP yet, I hope there never will be.
Golden Chapter Three is very good
From the beginning, I can see that the plot is coherent now, and the details of the characters are well written, not written by AI.
It's very delicious [full] and very good-looking. It feels like watching Harry Potter when I was a kid. It's very interesting. Very interesting, I read it in one sitting. Much better than the Harry Potter fanfics I've read before. There is currently no cp. Come on, author.
So far it's pretty good, smooth, and occasionally humorous. Take a good look at this book, cheers for the author
A new book with great potential, but nothing toxic. There is no embarrassment, no common problems among time travellers, cheating but no loss of combat effectiveness, no stereotypes of men and women, and the protagonist enriches himself every day. Available to both men and women.
Not bad, very similar to the one next door. Is it the same author?
It's okay, there's nothing too big of a surprise, but if you want to read invincible articles, you can read this [snicker][snicker]
Meow meow meow is so beautiful!
It's really something you could have watched.
Very good, very good
Updates are a bit slow, but otherwise it's okay
A very good book.
Why not updated?
It's pretty good, but it's been discontinued.
It's nice, but the author doesn't update it very often.
It's good not to forcefully suppress the combat power. Invincible style has the writing method of Invincible style.
It's not OOC but has its own plot content. It's the first Harry fanfic.
It's pretty good so far, I'll see what happens later.
The Golden Finger of Fairy Grass opens very wide and is very refreshing.