[Slytherin] [System] [Transmigration]
“What do you mean, you almost shot a professor before you even started school?”
Soren says he has his preschool teachers to thank for that.
“Soren, my favorite student, why did you betray me?”
“Voldemort, you gave me all that willingly. I never said I was your student.”
“Ding!”
“Congratulations, protagonist! You've drawn the spell ‘A Detailed Guide to Common Battlefield Magic: Firearm Spells’”
“Magical troops, spread out! Fire at will!”
“We will bring true unity to the wizarding world!”
Dumbledore: “A remarkably gifted child, but far too forceful in his methods. Just thinking about him gives me a headache.”
“Mr. Soren, everyone says you're the one who breathed new life into the wizarding world. What do you say to that?”
“For the Greater Good!”
The writing is good, especially when I read a very poor fanfic and exited with disappointment. When I saw a book that interested me, I clicked in and found that it was not bad, which gave me a strong sense of joy.
It's pretty good. The writing style is okay, but it would be better if it was a little more abstract. In the later stage, the protagonist was kept suppressed and beaten. So what does the protagonist do? At least they're evenly matched.
It's ok for now, give me some encouragement, make a wish for the single heroine of Mavis
It's pretty good. The magic bolt at the beginning is very attractive [Salute]
Too many heroines are Hermione, the author's original heroine is very good (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
It looks okay so far. I guess the author may want to write about the conflict between pure blood and ordinary wizards in the future.
Suitable for me, five stars for encouragement
I feel that the Dementors section around Chapter 74 was not handled very well. If there were no provocations in other ways during this section, then there would be no problem with the subsequent handling. But the problem is that the Dementors have been released, and the other side is going to kill them, and they are still playing tricks [smile] Overall, it's pretty good 😏😏😏
It's really good!!!!