Chronicles of the Sea's Conquest: From Dragon King to Great Sage

It's quite good-looking, and the writing is very good, but there's a problem with the segmentation. It's a big block, and it's a bit hard to watch. And now there are two women but no emotional scenes. Yes, it's much better than those romance novels in Journey to the West.

I have read everyone's comments, and the arrangements for the protagonist's arrogance and complacency and drunkenness that everyone pointed out were indeed not well arranged, which aroused the disgust of many readers. Although I don't like conspiracy theories, I personally think that these arrangements are necessary to promote the development of the plot. However, since everyone is disgusted, I will make corrections in future plots and strive to create a likeable character. I am also very grateful to my friends who have been supporting me. If you have any suggestions, you can put them directly here and I will make adjustments according to the plot arrangement.

It's not like modern people traveling through the past, nor like ancient people traveling through the past, like the Liangshan heroes in the TV series traveling through the past.

I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time. His writing skills are extraordinary. In addition, I see some people commenting this or that, you should not listen to them. A truly enlightening novel that emphasizes spirit over form. Like the world of mortals, it is all passing smoke and clouds. Express what you want to express the meaning of life!

It's great. It's not a brainless article, it doesn't show off one's realm. It's considered an excellent work in today's Tomatoes. The characters are flesh-and-blood and fit the introduction of the article. Without adding time travel, this article would be even better. The author emphasizes the Great Sage Fu Hai, not modern people. Then you can change the beginning and remove the time travel. The author's writing style is quite good.

It has the flavor of Water Margin and looks interesting!

Listening to the book, I now heard that the Five Spirit Officers chased the protagonist to the West Sea. The biggest question at the moment is that the protagonist practiced the exercises of the Turtle Spirit Mother in the early stage, and after the death of the turtle spirit, he practiced the exercises given by Tongtian. How did he cultivate the evil spirit after practicing the Three Purities Zhengfa for hundreds of years? Quite curious

It's okay. Although the protagonist seems to have various short-sightedness and other problems, it is understandable that he is an ordinary person who traveled to the past. Moreover, there is no talk of traveling to the past to become a monk [laughter], and his combat power is not compromised.

Overall, it's over nine points. The current rating is too low. It's very well written. The plot has ups and downs and the writing is extraordinary. It's just a bit unsuitable for the pace of modern life. It's refreshing and not intensive, and the plot is a bit long. This may be the reason for the low rating. If you want to tell a good story, this is fine. If you want to be good, you have to keep pace with the times. Speaking of complaints, the name Jiao Fu is so wonderful (slight spoilers, don't read further if you mind) First, the pronunciation of "Fu" is the same as "Fu". At first, I thought it was a bit earthy, but when I saw the great sage Fuhai, I felt really amazing. Second, it is a hidden clue. You can also read "Father". The title of the book is "I Raised Children in the Wilderness (A Group)", [cover face][cover face][cover face] Third, you can add some water appropriately to make it a little dry. Isn't it reasonable for the evil dragon to pour water? [I understand] More updates, more updates, the next door is updating ten times a day

It is not a cookie-cutter, mindless novel, and there is no formula for killing monsters and upgrading. The author has his own ideas. If you are not a novice at reading novels, you may find it a bit frustrating. After reading too many books on the formulas for defeating monsters and upgrading, you will feel like your eyes are shining brightly. I hope the author will write it down well.