I Saved the Sect Next Door by Being Shameless

The writing is really good and very funny. There is only one problem. Qingyao has too many scenes and takes up a lot of space, especially her five boyfriends. The highlights are basically all on them...

It's pretty good, but there are too many scenes with Qing Yao, and Jiang Su is clearly the male lead [face covering]

Half of it, I don't know what happens next. After reading more than 40 chapters, it gave me the feeling that Qingyao and the five people are the main CP, and the two male protagonists are the deputy CPs. Moreover, after Qingyao's identity is exposed, half of a chapter deals with her relationship history. The most important thing is that Qingyao's five predecessors are very high regardless of status or strength. , To change the novel, it would be, the group's favorite junior sister and her five Taoist companions? (For the time being, I don't know whether these people are 1V1 or 1V5, but it will definitely take a long time) Her character design is very good, but the length is very long, and the male protagonist looks like a supporting role. Although it is a group portrait, there are not many other direct descendants.

The author's character and introduction are very attractive, but I feel that there are still too many descriptions of Qing Yao... The supporting role is a supporting role after all, and the highlight should not be too much more than the protagonist. Moreover, too much romance in the double male protagonist really affects the viewing experience. If we want to read romance, we will search for it ourselves. According to my personal experience, everyone does not like to see too much romance in Shuang Nan. I hope the author can delete some highlights about her. It's not that I don't like Qingyao, but the protagonist of this book is Xiao Jiang, and her highlights can be said to be much more than the protagonist. (Once again, it is best not to have too much romance in Shuang Nan! If there is a sub-CP, it should not be too long. We are here to see the protagonist fall in love, not the sub-CP!)

It's good, it's pretty good, the atmosphere is relaxed, but I feel that the scenes between Qingyao and her five brothers-in-law could be less. There is always an illusion that this is a heroine story where she runs away and he chases her, but she can't fly😭

It feels really, really good-looking. I am the kind of person who prefers to read deputy CPs, and this book completely satisfies this hobby of mine. I really like the feeling of losing friends when these talented people get along with each other in a very loving atmosphere. The protagonist Shou and the protagonist Gong are from two different sects. They take each other seriously during the competition and are very loving after the competition. I really like it. Shou was originally put in, but got along well with the male and female protagonists in the original book. Unlike the ones I've seen before that basically discredited the male and female protagonists, I actually think it's good to see that it doesn't necessarily have to discredit the male and female protagonists in the original book and that they get along well with each other. I hope the author will update it soon, I really can't wait. Super looking forward to it, super looking forward to the author's follow-up plot [Adoration][Adoration] Well, the author's subject matter is really new to me. It's just that some supporting characters use too much pen and ink. It will make the male protagonist look like a supporting character. Although this is a group portrait article, I still hope the author can make some cuts. I didn't feel bad, but after all, I mainly came to see the two male protagonists. Also, I would like to ask if Fu Rong and his third junior brother have a couple, right? I really hate them.

Give it a good review. The setting of this article is also very good, and the character of the main character really poked me, and the other characters are also very cute. But, I'm a bit of a romance fanatic. It's really hard to see the author spend so much time writing about Qingyao. I haven't even eaten much candy😭 Just looking at the romance, it's still more than 1v. I am also a deputy CP controller, but the length of writing about Qingyao is too long. Qingyao also has many highlights. This does not mean that the supporting role must be the foil of the protagonist. But this makes Qingyao more like the protagonist. I came here to see the two male protagonists😭😭😭The group portrait I want to see is not like this😭😭😭 Another point is that the protagonist progresses too quickly, and they kiss within ten chapters. Although candy is delicious, I also know that there are many people who like this. But this is probably a long article. If there are many chapters at the end, they all come together so quickly. So what should I read later😭😭😭Can I pull it out a little more😭😭😭

It's good-looking, but it feels like there's a bit too much description of Qing Yao, and there are more highlights than the main character.

Just watched a little bit. I gave it four stars because I felt that the junior sister had a little too much emotion. I came here for BL, so I felt a little uncomfortable. Well, I hope more focus will be placed on the protagonist in the future, and not take over the spotlight. Still waiting and watching [sending my heart]

The writing style is quite good, and the writing is also very good, but it is easy to be unreadable in the early stage. The scenes of the female supporting character Qing Yao are too much in the early stage. If you want to see group portraits and are receptive, you can watch the full text. If you want to see the dual male protagonists, feel free to skip and read the early stage. I am not sure about the later chapters because I have only seen forty or fifty chapters, but there are too many scenes of Qing Yao and her 5 CP in the early stage. It's easy to trigger a minefield (I'm not saying Qing Yao is not good, I'm just discussing the number of roles). As for the group portraits, the author can also consider changing it a little. At least everyone is working together, instead of waiting for others to find cheats. The ones looking for cheats are the supporting characters. Personally, I feel that Qing Yao's character performance is very full, but the protagonist and other supporting characters are a bit stiff (again, I am not saying that Qing Yao is bad, just that (I feel like it's written a bit too much) There's also the problem of character setting. Normally, all the good stuff is given to the protagonist and supplemented by the supporting characters. But this is a group portrait, so I think it should be divided equally between the protagonist and the supporting characters. But according to the plot I watched, the protagonist and other people got a little less (at least not enough to leave a memorable point), while the female supporting role got something. There are a lot of them, like Little Phoenix and a bunch of big boss CPs, and she even has the protagonist's time-travel identity. It feels like it's putting the cart before the horse. In terms of the early articles, it's a bit like the heroine's love story, but there are a lot of people who come here for the two men. That's about it. If you can accept this point of recommendation, give it a read. After all, this article is very well written. Later, the author may also change the way he writes. After all, the above remarks are based on chapters one to forty or fifty that I have read.