Senior Brother, Your Dao Heart Is Unsteady

It's good to read, but it's uncomfortable not to go on. But it's even more uncomfortable to see the author's real experience, and it's also uncomfortable to know the final ending. I want to say to the author here, come on! Believe in yourself, I support you🥺🥺🥺

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

It's nice to read, and it has a more traditional fairy tale feel with plot > emotion. Although it's love at first sight, it's not particularly abrupt. The characters are well created, and there are also some foreshadowings. (I really want to know the cause and effect and his master before and after time travel) I like the very pure flavor of cultivating immortality (it does not revolve around the sect like some popular books, but more importantly the protagonist's own experience) The writing of Nanhai Longyuan is particularly interesting. It explains the identity of Bai Ling and then also creates the other two characters. Personally, I feel that it is not a group portrait. There is no particularly bloody plot, 🉑 don't worry 😋

It looks good, it looks good, it looks so good, it makes men menstruate and women go crazy when they look at it. It is the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of vegetative people. She was so beautiful that the five-guarantee household in the village missed and loved the widow. She was so handsome that tears flowed from the corners of her mouth and flooded the Qiantang River. It was God who was my rose and illuminated the dark life. I ran and jumped on the balcony of the 20th floor to dance the tango. I realized that God does exist. I was so beautiful that tears flowed from my eyes. From then on, the world no longer lacked water. Author, you must continue to work hard to update [please update]

It's a pity that I didn't continue writing. But the overall tone is pretty good at the beginning. If you have read the ancient starting point of cultivating immortality, you have read the one-thought-eternal type, or Su Xiaonuan's kind of life experience, which is complicated and confusing, and then keeps exploring. Anyway, it has a very ancient style of writing👍 Anyway, it is a pity that it is not finished except for the latter part, but I think the development in the front is pretty good, and the relationship is developing well now, but the time with the protagonist is so short. It would be nice if there could be more interaction between the male protagonists (as someone who often reads sweet articles)💕

It's great. I love reading it. To be honest, I think it's a relatively novel setting in Tomato. I hope the author writes better and better. ♡.ﾟ♡.. ♡゜ ﾟ♡゜ ♡ ♡*ﾟ♡ ♡. ♡ ♡. . ♡゜ ♡; ﾟ♡゜ /)_/)N (˶ᵒ̴̶̷̤ꈊ˂̶̤̀˵) ✧ /u ﾉ しーJ

It's good-looking, the plot is very tight, and the emotional line is also very interesting. The plot is slightly larger than the emotional line. Baby Bai Ling is also a very cute little white dragon 😘. It's a cute god. There are a lot of foreshadowings, but you will understand after seeing it. It's very beautiful. I will taste the delicious food😋

The worldview seems to be getting bigger and bigger as I write more, but the plot progresses quite quickly. The foreshadowing is very natural and there are no logical flaws. The whole text is smooth to read. The two protagonists are also very easy to relate to and I like it. There is no OOC in the characters until now. I like both protagonists very much.

The world view is very grand, so the master is fine. When Bai Ling dreamed that the master asked him to go to the South China Sea, and when he saw the master's hands, he felt something was wrong. So what happened in ancient times??? I'll be watching later

It's nice to watch. I like this kind of group portrait. Everyone has their own strengths. We are a team, and every team member is a confidant who is trustworthy and willing to sacrifice his life for it. Our Qiwu team rushed to the end like this!!!!! Big cheers for more updates!!!!!