Harry Potter: The Mad Dark Lord of the Grindelwald Family

It's a very interesting Lily novel, with more storylines between Hermione and Qiu Chang. But that's not the point. The point is: please support us, the head of the Rozier family. I will carry the flag for the head of the family! A mother-level existence!

It looks good, but I am a very empathic person. Cockroaches are really the most physically uncomfortable things in the world. The key is that this cockroach also indirectly helped to kill him. 😌😌

It's a very interesting love story about Yuri Xiang, but I personally think that the main character is liked, so she should have most of the control in the relationship. Rather than being led by a few little witches to ease the atmosphere with their soft tongues, they should be tolerant and restrained towards Adelaide like Wenda was towards Gellert, although they loved her but did not cross the line. But since this is Lily, she can be more bold than this pair of straight women, but it is not because of her own possessiveness that affects Adelaide. Adelaide should be free. Her suitors only have the right to follow and accompany them. They should not have the right to snatch the only position in an open and honest way, which makes it difficult for Dumbledore to take advantage of. This is the ideal heart-throb love without cp in the main text. Other possessive desires should appear in the extra chapters and in corners that are not easily noticed in the main text. It should not be an annoyance for the person who is liked, right?

It's pretty good, but the villain's setting made me a little anxious. Because it is Chinese, it is automatically brought into our country as a time traveler like the heroine. However, as our country has received party education since childhood, even if you wear a villain, you will not immediately become the kind of bad guy who disrupts society. However, it is normal for us to have bad species when there are so many of us, but why do people like this have the opportunity to travel through time? I really wish that all these people would die and their souls would be destroyed. The villain was very successful and made me hate it very much. It also caused many difficulties for the heroine. I hope the torture at the end can be more enjoyable.

Very nice lily no (n) cp (p) text. The heroine went from having "no ambition at all" at the beginning to establishing a force that will dominate the magic world in the future. This can be regarded as a kind of growth [Thinking]

Well, how can I put it? It looked okay at first, but after looking at a few pictures, I clearly felt that there were a lot of inappropriate and messy descriptions in some places. AI assistance cannot be the master. Some AI-assisted paragraphs can be appropriately deleted and changed. Those too detailed descriptions will be a bit tiring. Anyway, come on💪

I like the rare Harry Potter novel with an orange flavor, but I think the author should consider improving the strength and shaping of the heroine. When it comes to Alice lifting the blood curse, even if the heroine's grades are very good and she is only in the first grade, she seems too at a loss. But Li Ma's depiction of women is very good, so I still praise it.

There aren't many orange heartthrobs at the moment, and I wouldn't even know if you didn't tell me, but the writing is pretty good. The content is also great. The missing star is only for now, we can only wait until later [thinking] to see if there is one? The orange-flavored heartthrob is really ordinary at the moment. If it weren't for this setting, I might have given up. The writing is good, the content is okay, sometimes it's a bit boring, and the rest is not sure, and there is no character collapse ヾ(･`⌓´･)ﾉﾞ, but I am really anxious and looking forward to it. I will wait slowly, wait slowly, wait for the author to make up for it, and then I will make up for it with one star (*¯¯*)

I want to see Adelaide locked up in the basement by Hermione [laughing]

No way, can Qiu Zhang be able to make a gentle and moist female ghost in the later stage? She is so cute😭